For my boy (463 hits)
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Submitted by TripinDayZ (View user info) at 2005-07-24 15:35:38 EDT
God's Tiny Angels
God's Tiny Angels came down to this earth
Through much tribulation and premature birth
Both Keeton and Kaden, unlimited worth
They landed one hot summer day
For almost a month both were here on this land
Our hearts being held in their undersized hands
But this was not part of the ultimate plan
Both wouldn't be able to stay
God whispered to Keeton and told him his choice
"Fear not little one for it's time to rejoice,
I need you with Me." said the comforting voice
The angel ascended that day
To Kaden he whispered "Do not be afraid
I have plans for you there's a reason you've stayed"
While all heads were bowed and our God softly prayed
Young Kaden chose not to dismay
"Goodbye for now brother I'll miss you a lot,
I promise to cherish the chance that I got.
Remember the unending love that you brought,
I love you and you'll be OK!"
They smiled and waved as he rose to the sky
My wifes only sunshine, the light in my eye
That heartbreaking weekend we all said goodbye
While Heavens harps started to play
There must be a reason that he had to go
A reason that we may or may never know
As time passes by we continue to grow
Our Keeton will show us the way
- Dad July 9th, 2005
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Submitted by TripinDayZ420 (user info) at 2005-08-03 19:27:08 EDT (#)
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yeah, it's been a minute since I've been here i guess. Busy time gettin married, new job, new babies (obviously), shit like that. Just hanging in there. And yeah, actually we did lose our son Keeton on July 9th to an infection in the lungs. His brother is doing great today. I'd give you the website if you wanted to check out the information but I would like to keep that place much like shlong and zak.... Dickless. Best not to put it out there for all.
masonacc.at.sbcglobal.net if ya want it.
take care, i'll be around
Submitted by Nefarious (user info) at 2005-07-25 09:44:53 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Teephphah (user info) at 2005-07-25 09:34:35 EDT (#)
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A) FUCK Zak and Shlongy. Fuck them. Dear God that pisses me off.
B) Holy shit. I'm praying this isn't for real, but if it is, I am so, so sorry.
C) Good to see you again - wish it could be under better circumstances.
D) Fuck Zak and Shlongy.
Submitted by BLITZKREIG_BOB (user info) at 2005-07-25 09:15:26 EDT (#)
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Where the hell have you been hiding?
Submitted by DanielH (user info) at 2005-07-24 19:31:18 EDT (#)
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Core. +++
Submitted by Aladdin (user info) at 2005-07-24 19:02:39 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2005-07-24 18:24:33 EDT (#)
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Wrong web site, Bozo.
Submitted by Loren1 (user info) at 2005-07-24 15:43:36 EDT (#)
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Submitted by zakalwe (user info) at 2005-07-24 15:40:07 EDT (#)
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I don't know why you're posting again, but here is my reaction.


