Ode to an illusion (622 hits)
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Submitted by insanethemind (View user info) at 2005-07-27 04:14:26 EDT
Where have you been all my life child, where oh where have you been? You came as comes a lucid dream and stole my heart it seemed. After long winter of discontent and tired of being alone, you came and I thought you showed me love indeed:
a glimpse into your soul.
For a boy born far away, many oceans from your land, such a reward it would have been to grasp onto your hand. One day you will see and comprehend, all that would have come of our fusion, Where children laugh and happiness abounds :
belongs your mind's illusion.
The victor gets not only the spoils, they also win the prize. Of staring long at the moon and there I once saw your eyes. Your beauty was like a mountain stream, cool and delicious indeed. Therefore I would never have dried up:
lacked love or known need.
I loved you, I loved you I loved you so much, more than you could dream. With a smile I once thought of your beautiful laugh and hoped together we'd succeed. Last night as I lied in bed, I ruminated on my past, but now there is no need for that:
I never saw past your mask.
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Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2005-09-23 17:43:22 EDT (#)
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Submitted by corn_nugget (user info) at 2005-07-28 23:03:49 (#)
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Ah Michael... you break my heart.
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Nugget:
you aren't the first comely young lass who has uttered these words to me.
alas, 'tis true
Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2005-07-29 11:39:10 EDT (#)
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good to see you too, Lisa.
Email me sometime please, so we can chat.
Insanethemind-at- hotmail.com
Submitted by Lisa (user info) at 2005-07-28 23:46:41 EDT (#)
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It's good to see you around, man. You take way long breaks.
Submitted by corn_nugget (user info) at 2005-07-28 23:03:49 EDT (#)
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Ah Michael... you break my heart.
Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2005-07-28 11:40:33 EDT (#)
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Shandy: Well, hoss, there was something special and distinctive about the situation that inspired this post.
Glad to talk to you again!
Submitted by shandythedog (user info) at 2005-07-28 07:27:05 EDT (#)
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mind you, i don't know why i say that in this case, as this seems a new sort of format
Submitted by shandythedog (user info) at 2005-07-28 07:07:13 EDT (#)
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there's definitely something distinctive and special about the way you put words together, old egg
Submitted by JMG114 (user info) at 2005-07-27 17:23:47 EDT (#)
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This was like a whiff of perfume that instantly makes me concoct a story about the sands of Araby and a princess locked high in a tower.
Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2005-07-27 14:32:04 EDT (#)
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Ok UM, I will drop you an email straight away.... once I wake up.
Submitted by tammy (user info) at 2005-07-27 12:06:39 EDT (#)
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You've gotten much better at this.
Submitted by firefly (user info) at 2005-07-27 12:02:48 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by UrbaneMischief (user info) at 2005-07-27 10:13:09 EDT (#)
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update me on how you are and where the hell you've been!!!
urbanemischief.at.gmail.com
Submitted by UrbaneMischief (user info) at 2005-07-27 10:11:37 EDT (#)
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+2
I love your writing
Submitted by electrictoothsyndrome (user info) at 2005-07-27 10:10:57 EDT (#)
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I know the feeling.
Submitted by Teephphah (user info) at 2005-07-27 09:12:51 EDT (#)
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Who the hell is this fucking guy? Thinks he can disappear for months at a time and then just pop back in and get straight +2s.
Well fuck that my friend. Fuck that.
Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2005-07-27 04:48:30 EDT (#)
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Work? What exactly is this thing you call work? Is that something that entails putting forth effort, and not in the pursuit of sex, drugs, partying etc.?
I don't know this word, what language is it from?
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2005-07-27 04:46:51 EDT (#)
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You know I would, but unfortunately am at the job.
No aim for poor radley.
Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2005-07-27 04:46:16 EDT (#)
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hahaha rad.
actually its almost 0500 out my way and I was just looking for conversation
I wouldn't turn down any booty either though, rad. You catchin'?
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2005-07-27 04:44:16 EDT (#)
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OMG UBER BOOTY CALL
Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2005-07-27 04:40:51 EDT (#)
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Ducky: up for a chat?
Submitted by Ducky (user info) at 2005-07-27 04:34:05 EDT (#)
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Written beautifully.
Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2005-07-27 04:23:47 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by Fabish (user info) at 2005-07-27 04:20:49 EDT (#)
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Sorry, I guess it's not THAT weird.
Submitted by Fabish (user info) at 2005-07-27 04:20:27 EDT (#)
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He won't stop throwing up gems. WHY!?
Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2005-07-27 04:20:16 EDT (#)
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holy shit.
did someone just punch me in the stomach?