Cold Surreal (414 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: -0.5 on 9 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by <fallenangel> (View user info) at 2005-07-31 16:43:12 EDT
Fluttering through an open window to the ends of forever.
Sanity to steal.
Breaking open the sands of time for to set the mist free.
Such is Love, Cold Surreal.
Bursting over in crashing waves, a feather floats through the haze.
It doesn't always have to be so real.
Crushing any weeds in the path, covering horns with snow.
Such is Happiness, Cold Surreal.
Wandering through bramble bushes only to get caught.
Any and all reasoning to kill.
Beating down all boundaries, illumination of the heart.
Such is Thought, Cold Surreal.
Waltzing through the mist where reality is fantasy.
Or is it something you can feel?
That is my life, my world.
It is yours as well.
Such is Existence, Cold Surreal.
-Dana E. Lockett
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Submitted by fallenangel (user info) at 2005-07-31 21:02:07 EDT (#)
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Nice. Personally I like honey comb.
Submitted by swamp_donkey (user info) at 2005-07-31 20:48:45 EDT (#)
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My favorite cold surreal is frosted flakes, but I like lots of others, too.
Submitted by fallenangel (user info) at 2005-07-31 17:40:06 EDT (#)
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Hey... I only fuck the Devil when he pays like everyone else, thank you very much.
Submitted by lordofthedance (user info) at 2005-07-31 17:13:59 EDT (#)
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Submitted by GodLovesALittleLovin (user info) at 2005-07-31 16:58:20 EDT (#)
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Doubt it. I'm pretty sure my brother wrote something pretty similiar to this a year ago. I'll tell him you like his stuff.
Submitted by swamp_donkey (user info) at 2005-07-31 16:58:18 EDT (#)
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Poetry makes Satan sit up and take notice.
Way to go, devil fucker.
Submitted by Spuds002 (user info) at 2005-07-31 16:56:36 EDT (#)
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Submitted by fallenangel (user info) at 2005-07-31 16:52:28 EDT (#)
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Sorry to disappoint you GodLovesALittleLovin, but I wrote this one myself.
Submitted by GodLovesALittleLovin (user info) at 2005-07-31 16:48:04 EDT (#)
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I think that was the most beautiful copy/paste job I've ever seen.