They Rushed... (1489 hits)
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Submitted by badassmofo (View user info) at 2005-08-04 11:36:02 EDT
Author's Note: As you read the lines keep the title in mind with each. I understand its a bit different but read and digest a bit before you judge. Thank you in advance.
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...and childhood was upon them.
...and before you new it...they new it all.
...and without seeing, life was quickening.
...and maturity hastened.
...and animalistic desires over took.
...and consequence was thrown to the wind for the sake of passion.
...and unbeknownst gestation began.
...and their parents were given confession.
...and a decision was made.
...and a family was in agreement.
...and a date was set.
...and she cried for the future lost.
...and he cried for the weight of responsibility.
...and the crying was kept secret.
...and the first bricks were laid.
...and a child was born; loved but resented.
...and a new mother was tattered.
...and a new father was overwhelmed.
...and communication became foreign.
...and the bricks continued to build.
...and like taffy the child was stretched and pulled.
...and the child began to splinter, the bricks were piling higher.
...and time moved on but the wall grew and the love faded.
...and eyes wandered for fill of a growing hole.
...and he strayed, she sickened, and the child began to break.
...and the end came, furious but expected.
...and she left him, taking the child, and leaving the past.
...and he was broken, the wall had been completed.
...and she was broken with heart blackened, she looked to the child...to place blame.
...and the child was broken, unknowing and alone.
...and the wall they had started stood alone longing to be part.
...and forgot the 3 other walls it takes to make a home.
...and a family was no more.
...and the lesson to be learned, was not.
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Are you happy with where you are headed in life? Do you have doubts about whether you'll be satisfied with your outcomes? I urge you to ask yourself these questions because even the smallest seed can become the mightiest oak.
Don't hesitate with 'the one', don't rush into the things you are unsure of. Before you know it you'll be at the end of the road looking back at your path telling yourself you wish you had done it differently.
User Reviews
Submitted by d_prime (user info) at 2005-08-06 22:53:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
http://www.ubersite.com/m/72633 <- Results are in.
Submitted by BillsSBChamps (user info) at 2005-08-06 10:19:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Sorry God, I must have missed the memo where you became my master.
Fuck off buddy, I could have given you a -2 no comment if I was trying to "start some shit" but I have you an explanation, which is a hell of a lot more than I give 99% of the people here. I did this just so you wouldn't get all pissy. But still you cry like an asshole.
Get a fucking clue you goddamn retard.
Submitted by fallenangel (user info) at 2005-08-06 00:57:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Well said, man. Well said.
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2005-08-05 20:36:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
w00000
Submitted by Mike00295 (user info) at 2005-08-05 17:19:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by badassmofo (user info) at 2005-08-05 15:52:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Bills feel free to completely ignore the contest and then throw your 2 fucking cents in at crunch time.
You've been digging for a little dust up with me for a while, have the coutesie to take it elsewhere, you're not fucking UberGod...go away...pissant.
Submitted by BillsSBChamps (user info) at 2005-08-05 14:52:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
badass-I was rating in comparison, I felt that despite your's being good, the other one was better by a +2 to -1 margin.
It looks like you'll pull it out anyway thanks to Rad.
How many bj's did that cost?
This -2 is to offset the use of his three alters.
Submitted by munkeypants (user info) at 2005-08-05 14:41:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I really like this.
If this is for the contest then I hope this wins.
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2005-08-05 14:36:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
SORRY!!!
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2005-08-05 14:36:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2005-08-05 14:36:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2005-08-05 12:21:05 (#)
Ranking: 0
I don't care to tell you what I think of this except that it's pretty damn good.
here's mine: http://www.ubersite.com/m/72293
damnit!! + fucking two not zero. DAMN
Submitted by d_prime (user info) at 2005-08-05 14:14:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by d_prime (user info) at 2005-08-05 14:14:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Except me and Scott are different people
Submitted by Deidra (user info) at 2005-08-05 14:05:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 for picture! I want to steal that for an icon.
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2005-08-05 13:56:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
yeah yeah eyah
that was pretty fucking cheap, I know,.
But if d_prime is gonna do it all over darko's posts, Im sure as fuck gonna do it here.
Submitted by Rads_wife (user info) at 2005-08-05 13:50:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
CHRIST
Submitted by baking_Lady (user info) at 2005-08-05 13:50:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
H
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2005-08-05 13:50:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
jesus
Submitted by badassmofo (user info) at 2005-08-05 13:31:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Ouch Bills - a +2 for hers and a -1 for me, could have at least been a 0.
You are supposed to rate teh post based on it's merits.
Submitted by BillsSBChamps (user info) at 2005-08-05 12:30:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Normally this would get a +2 but since it's a contest and I think the other entry is better, I can't give you both +2's.
Good concept but you get a -1.
Submitted by d_prime (user info) at 2005-08-05 12:26:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I mistakenly gave Ainkara a 0, so I have to not fuck up the scoring with this.
Submitted by d_prime (user info) at 2005-08-05 12:21:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
The excitement is making me want to- well we wont get into that.
I may have to sit here with a pen clicking refresh over and over this evening to get the scores at the EXACT time.
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2005-08-05 12:21:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I don't care to tell you what I think of this except that it's pretty damn good.
here's mine: http://www.ubersite.com/m/72293
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2005-08-05 12:19:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
my negro
Submitted by d_prime (user info) at 2005-08-05 12:17:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
WHORING THIS POST TO GET IT MORE REVIEWS TO MAKE THINGS MORE EXCITING CAUSE ITS SO CLOSE
Submitted by Jack_McCallum (user info) at 2005-08-05 12:01:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by badassmofo (user info) at 2005-08-04 19:24:30 (#)
Ranking: 0
Jack my original thought was 'well suzy I guess you're not pregnant anymore' but I thought better.
Smoking is bad but oh oh oh so good.
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AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!
Submitted by fudgepacker (user info) at 2005-08-05 11:20:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
this sounds like a pamphlet given out at some 'self-help' group.
but it was nice and pleasant.
Submitted by nitty34 (user info) at 2005-08-05 11:20:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Thanks for the business hookup J. I appreciate it.
Submitted by Ainkara (user info) at 2005-08-05 10:24:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I didn't so much hate the title as... Ok, yeah just a little bit.
http://www.ubersite.com/m/72545
Woo! I think that's mine...
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2005-08-05 10:22:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
fuck you
that picture made me cry
Submitted by alex.lifeson (user info) at 2005-08-04 23:33:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 for an awesome picture.
Submitted by badassmofo (user info) at 2005-08-04 19:24:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Jack my original thought was 'well suzy I guess you're not pregnant anymore' but I thought better.
Smoking is bad but oh oh oh so good.
Submitted by Jack_McCallum (user info) at 2005-08-04 18:30:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I would have titled the picture "Which one of you is peeing blood?.jpeg" but other than that this wasn't bad. There better be some ass-kicking in the next one though.
I nearly posted a 'thoughtful' emo bit today.
Instead I went outside and smoked a cigarette and stepped on ants.
Submitted by badassmofo (user info) at 2005-08-04 17:12:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
nope it's all original Bob.
Submitted by BobLobla (user info) at 2005-08-04 17:04:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I liked it but it looks like something I might get in an email forward, so if I do get it I will return and rain -2s on you with reckless disregard for humanity...
Good post though.
Submitted by munkeypants (user info) at 2005-08-04 16:10:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
AWESOME
Submitted by badassmofo (user info) at 2005-08-04 15:44:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
not to worry I'm sure she'll come in and drop a bomb on my ass in the closing hours
Submitted by d_prime (user info) at 2005-08-04 15:00:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
As of now Ainkara is the only one in Round Two who hasn't done her post, and she said she's going to do it at the last minute like last time.
Submitted by Xcuses (user info) at 2005-08-04 14:55:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Since we seem to be the few that are actually putting something out...
Come on finals!!!
Submitted by MANICMOTHER (user info) at 2005-08-04 14:53:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I had to come back again. Yep still good.
Submitted by d_prime (user info) at 2005-08-04 14:37:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
It'd be hilarious if it was you and Xcuses is the finals.
Submitted by Wrightcopy (user info) at 2005-08-04 13:19:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Made me think... was well put together... had a good moral... +2 in my book.
Submitted by Average_Dan (user info) at 2005-08-04 13:03:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I liked it as well!
Submitted by Davros (user info) at 2005-08-04 13:00:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Nice.
Well Done.
-Dave
Submitted by MANICMOTHER (user info) at 2005-08-04 12:49:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I liked it........... a lot.
Submitted by badassmofo (user info) at 2005-08-04 12:41:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by cat_head (user info) at 2005-08-04 12:36:54 (#)
Ranking: -2
Thanks for telling us that...
...that means continuation you chode.
Fucking crap.
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All opinions are noted and appreciated...ass clown
Submitted by badassmofo (user info) at 2005-08-04 12:38:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
loki - i still have to get yours out of my wifes car (read it all on my trip to kentucky) box it mail it blah blah ...you're right it is alot of work.
this morning after pill you speak of, is that for like after you eat Taco Bell or some other stomach torturing food?
Submitted by cat_head (user info) at 2005-08-04 12:36:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Thanks for telling us that...
...that means continuation you chode.
Fucking crap.
Submitted by loki (user info) at 2005-08-04 12:35:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
So what you're saying is that we should allow the morning after pill to be sold over the counter?
Hey, I'm sending you another book. I have a box and everything. Now all I have to do it put the book in the box, seal it up, stick your address on it, and take it to the PO.
jeez that sounds like way too much work
Submitted by Vulva (user info) at 2005-08-04 12:25:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by badassmofo (user info) at 2005-08-04 12:08:59 (#)
Ranking: 0
Vulva - don't leave her, just stop paying her and she'll go away.
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She is imaginary. It's hard for her to "go" anywhere!
Submitted by missflibble (user info) at 2005-08-04 12:09:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
this was great.
and for the first time ever I found I'm happy with my life. this epiphany came to me a couple of days ago when i found out a bully passed her degree- even if she did cheat on all of the coursework. I never managed to. but I'm better than her, everything I've done for myself I've done without cheating. I'm good at my job, I have proper friends and I love my home life.
I'm all set.
thankyou for helping me to see it.
Submitted by badassmofo (user info) at 2005-08-04 12:08:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Vulva - don't leave her, just stop paying her and she'll go away.
Submitted by Vulva (user info) at 2005-08-04 12:02:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I will leave my first wife because of the message this conveys!
j/k - Good, dude!
Submitted by wookie (user info) at 2005-08-04 12:02:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Captain_Lurk (user info) at 2005-08-04 11:50:15 (#)
Ranking: 2
Nice. Good timing. I needed that. Thanks.
Submitted by Jeanneee (user info) at 2005-08-04 11:59:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Sativa clan rules. That is all.
Submitted by badassmofo (user info) at 2005-08-04 11:55:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Circe -- thank you and anytime.
X - don't fucking touch me...bastard.
Submitted by Xcuses (user info) at 2005-08-04 11:54:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Come here and give me a hug....
I re-read it, I get it
Feel better?
Submitted by Circe (user info) at 2005-08-04 11:53:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I liked this.
I like the format... it's different.
Mind if I steal it sometime?
Submitted by Captain_Lurk (user info) at 2005-08-04 11:50:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Nice. Good timing. I needed that. Thanks.
Submitted by badassmofo (user info) at 2005-08-04 11:49:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I didn't expect you to get it...jerk...*snif snif*
Submitted by Xcuses (user info) at 2005-08-04 11:45:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Not feeling quite so bad about mine now
Keep your head high
Submitted by badassmofo (user info) at 2005-08-04 11:38:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
d_prime Madness Woot! http://www.ubersite.com/m/71523
God I hated the title!