Rain (618 hits)
Category: GeneralRating: 1.75 on 20 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Ducky (View user info) at 2005-08-06 08:51:16 EDT
I love the rain. Not misty drizzle rain, but the big heavy droplets that pound and splatter defiantly into the earth, as if to say 'You WILL feel me'. The type often accompanied by peals of thunder and a captivating light show. It's just so cleansing, this rain. I stand outside barefoot. I feel it seeping through my hair, dripping down my face, enveloping my everything. I dance with the rain; it makes a wonderful partner, and it forgives that I can't match its grace. Twirling until feelings of vertigo make me stop...I've never felt so alive.
Thank-you sir. May I have another?
I dig my toes into the ground and feel the wet, soft soil between them.
The sound is almost deafening, but in a good way...and all I can smell is life. I breathe in the crisp scent of ozone and revel in the cool freshness of the air. It stops, and I am soaked.
Thank-you sir. May I have another?
I watch the water evaporating in thick sheets of steam off of the concrete streets. I see the sun edging its way through the dark clouds, and the first beam of light to break through and make contact with the ground. I see the rainbow take shape. It's elusive ends landing just out of reach regardless of how far or fast I run.
Thank-you sir. May I have another?
It is beginning to heat up. Soon the air will be dry, the ground will become parched and dusty, and so many of the things I hold dear will begin to parish. I will be sitting here, patiently wilting, and waiting to feel you breathe life into me again.
User Reviews
Submitted by Siren (user info) at 2005-09-30 11:24:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Aw, Ducky, this was very nice!
Except the evaporation part. Humidity makes me want to die.
Submitted by yeahthatme (user info) at 2005-09-30 11:19:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Wow, you're really good. I loved the " you WILL feel me" line especially.
Submitted by inbreakingnewsT.A.N. (user info) at 2005-09-23 06:27:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Rain is for dancing in.
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2005-09-02 01:30:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
http://www.ubersite.com/cgi-bin/moreinfo.cgi?uber=Neener
WTF?
Submitted by Hairsphincter (user info) at 2005-09-02 01:21:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This was peachy, Ducky.
Submitted by Neener (user info) at 2005-09-02 01:07:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
You're sweet
Submitted by ruthless (user info) at 2005-08-10 11:42:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Pretty.
Submitted by munkeypants (user info) at 2005-08-06 19:19:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2005-08-06 15:31:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Not bad at all....
Submitted by FilthyAssistant (user info) at 2005-08-06 11:06:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
I like the content, not so keen on the structure.
Submitted by fallenangel (user info) at 2005-08-06 09:42:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by Danger_Ranger (user info) at 2005-08-06 09:27:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I know, Ducky, I know...
*blushes*
Submitted by Ducky (user info) at 2005-08-06 09:22:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Danger, have I ever told you how freakin awesome I think you are?
You're freakin awesome :)
Submitted by Danger_Ranger (user info) at 2005-08-06 09:20:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
And one more because vergery is a fucktard.
Submitted by Danger_Ranger (user info) at 2005-08-06 09:19:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
And here's another for being pretty and not camwhoring in your underwear.
Submitted by Danger_Ranger (user info) at 2005-08-06 09:18:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Very well written Ducky.
Submitted by Danger_Ranger (user info) at 2005-08-06 09:17:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
There was this one time, at Science Camp, that vergery drank all the sperm samples from the petrie dishes in the In Vitro lab because he really liked bukkake.
Submitted by vergery (user info) at 2005-08-06 08:58:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Actually, I'm pretty sure my science teacher specified the day in the life of a single water molecule. What a fucktard.
Submitted by jimthefiend (user info) at 2005-08-06 08:58:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
nice
Submitted by vergery (user info) at 2005-08-06 08:53:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
This reminds me of a grade 8 science project.
"Describe a day in the life of a group of water molecules as they undergo different changes in state."
You get a D-.