She Smiled (835 hits)
Category: Quotes & StoriesRating: 0.83 on 28 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by <fallenangel> (View user info) at 2005-08-06 10:23:29 EDT
Sitting across the room I was nervous.
I could see her up there in front of the room full of our family members- calm and composed as usual. I could see her and I was nervous.
The last time we had spoken I could barely look her in the eye I was so ashamed of what she was doing - of what she was making me do.
The last time I saw her I had taken every precaution imaginable to keep me from having to touch her. I didn't want to be anywhere around her.
I hated her for what she was doing to me.
But seeing her up there now I realized I was wrong.
I realized that no matter what the circumstances that woman loved me and would do anything for me. And I had treated her like shit.
I had treated her like shit because she asked me to help her.
I had treated her like shit and I was sorry.
Sitting across the room I was nervous because I had decided to go and tell her that I was sorry. I had decided to tell her before it was too late.
Walking up to her I tried to think of how I was going to say it. It had to be perfect. With an apology like that there is no room for mistakes.
I tried to think of how I was going to tell her that she meant everything to me and that I was being childish the other day. I tried to think of how to
say I was sorry for not helping her go to the bathroom. How I was sorry that I was too weak to help her.
But when I reached her I couldn't make the words come out.
So I just looked down at the coffin in silence.
And in my mind's eye she smiled.
User Reviews
Submitted by Hirgon (user info) at 2005-08-08 04:54:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Just realised it was Douche nozzle. <cough>
Still...
Ass-hats stands for the -2 Douche nozzles.
Submitted by Hirgon (user info) at 2005-08-08 04:51:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This goes out to all you retards making fun of this.
Douche-bags was a good one.
Personally im leaning towards Ass-hats.
Submitted by fallenangel (user info) at 2005-08-08 03:55:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Aaawww... come on Bob, it's not fair to punish my work just because I have an aversion from showing my boobs to strange men on the internet.
Submitted by princevalium (user info) at 2005-08-07 22:53:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Crap
Submitted by bob (user info) at 2005-08-07 21:00:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
MAKE GOOD ON YOUR PROMISE FOR BOOBS!!!!
im holding off my +2 until then
Submitted by fallenangel (user info) at 2005-08-07 20:11:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I know. Change can be though. It's the effort that matters.
Submitted by ajanssen (user info) at 2005-08-07 20:05:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Fair enough. I just may have it in me to quit calling you crooked tits but I cant make any promises.
Submitted by fallenangel (user info) at 2005-08-07 19:57:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Thanks, ajanssen.
Just for that I promise not to pilfer your insults anymore.
Submitted by ajanssen (user info) at 2005-08-07 19:47:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Doneupandin (user info) at 2005-08-07 19:19:48 (#)
Ranking: -2
I bet I know why you adopted the name fallen angel. Because you are an ugly bitch. Too bad you didnt impale yourself on a rusty spike at the conclusion of your trip.
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Wow, this guy is real douche nozzle.
Submitted by fallenangel (user info) at 2005-08-07 19:32:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Oh no ... a retaliatory -2 from Doneupandin. What ever am I going to do?
Jackass.
Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2005-08-07 19:29:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by Doneupandin (user info) at 2005-08-07 19:22:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
"I was too weak to help her take a shit."
Boo-hoo fallenphalange. I am glad that bitch died.
Submitted by Doneupandin (user info) at 2005-08-07 19:19:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I bet I know why you adopted the name fallen angel. Because you are an ugly bitch. Too bad you didnt impale yourself on a rusty spike at the conclusion of your trip.
Submitted by fallenangel (user info) at 2005-08-07 16:17:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
silent1: Yes I was embarrassed, but I also felt guilty for not wanting to help her in the way she needed me to and not being able to help her in a way that would make any difference.
ajanssen: Thanks, I try.
Submitted by ajanssen (user info) at 2005-08-07 03:24:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Nice read, crooked tits
Submitted by silent1 (user info) at 2005-08-07 02:14:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Did you mean ashamed as embarrassed?
Sorry for your loss also, I still miss my Grandma.
Submitted by Shroom (user info) at 2005-08-06 19:22:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by spedmonkey (user info) at 2005-08-06 12:26:04 (#)
Ranking: 1
Yeah, this is a perfect candidate for the +1.
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I'm giving it a +2 in retrobution for this unneeded -2
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Submitted by vergery (user info) at 2005-08-06 11:30:00 (#)
Ranking: -2
Yeah, and angels don't fall retard. They have wings.
Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2005-08-06 15:20:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Not bad at all...
Submitted by spedmonkey (user info) at 2005-08-06 12:26:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Yeah, this is a perfect candidate for the +1.
Submitted by fallenangel (user info) at 2005-08-06 12:24:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
FilthyAssistant: Reading back over it the I..I..I's do get a little annoying, but I think it gives an accurate depiction of my state of mind when this happened: irritated at myself for being such a weak and selfish person when she needed me the most and trying to catch hold of my thoughts ... but not being very successful.
Submitted by Ducky (user info) at 2005-08-06 12:08:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Not bad.
Submitted by fallenangel (user info) at 2005-08-06 11:50:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
HOLY SHIT!!!
My name has biblical references?!?!?!
Of course it has biblical references. I happen to like it that way.
It also has nothing to do with wings, and everything to do with how (being human) I fall short of being a perfect angel.
Submitted by vergery (user info) at 2005-08-06 11:30:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Yeah, and angels don't fall retard. They have wings.
Submitted by Dead_0hi0_Sky (user info) at 2005-08-06 11:16:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
btw, not too bad.
not too good either.
Submitted by Dead_0hi0_Sky (user info) at 2005-08-06 11:15:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
<fallenangel>???
change your name dude.
its too biblical.
Submitted by egadz (user info) at 2005-08-06 11:14:27 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by FilthyAssistant (user info) at 2005-08-06 11:04:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Nice concept but the I...I...I's got a bit irritating.
Submitted by Istaros (user info) at 2005-08-06 10:40:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
well, it's not BAD
you've done better
you're one of those that has a lot of potential
i'll be keeping an eye on you