Power (637 hits)
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Submitted by <fallenangel> (View user info) at 2005-08-08 02:32:04 EDT
Sitting here I realize I am not really here.
I am floating in a cushion of energy. Reclining in a cloud of pure force.
Always in the same place. Never moving. Never touching anything.
Occasionally my energy force will intermingle with that of another. Our
energy fields intertwine, sending ripples of sensation through my skin,
but we never make contact.
Always separated by an infinitely small layer of atoms.
I am free to make my own decisions. Really free. I can chose to do
something that was not originally in the great design. I have ultimate
free choice. I am God. I can open my eyes right now and take the
driver's wheel from your hand and ram this car into the median. I can
remove us from the timeline of life- erasing our children from the future
space. Along with their children, and their children's children unto infinity.
Until the future breaks down and there is nothing left but darkness.
With a slight pull of my arm I could end the world.
Because I have the power.
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Submitted by Average_Dan (user info) at 2005-10-21 18:51:40 EDT (#)
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Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2005-08-08 02:38:40 (#)
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...and what drugs have you done tonight? I'm guessing some good ones. This should have been longer.
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...and not so sucky
Submitted by bob (user info) at 2005-08-16 23:50:38 EDT (#)
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Submitted by fallenangel (user info) at 2005-08-08 03:55:04 (#)
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Aaawww... come on Bob, it's not fair to punish my work just because I have an aversion from showing my boobs to strange men on the internet.
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Submitted by ajanssen (user info) at 2005-08-09 22:38:32 EDT (#)
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ajanssen: Well good. If you are the center of the universe then you must have already seen my boobs and we can consider the matter closed.
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Your not getting off that easy. I would now like to invoke Provision A89941.6641NJK of our contract. You know, the one that involves the baby oil and beekeeper's hat?
Submitted by FilthyAssistant (user info) at 2005-08-09 03:49:49 EDT (#)
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+2 for the first paragraph.
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2005-08-09 03:22:40 EDT (#)
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Go look up an author by the name of Silver Ravenwolf.
Submitted by fallenangel (user info) at 2005-08-09 03:01:10 EDT (#)
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Anybody else have an opinion?
Submitted by fallenangel (user info) at 2005-08-08 16:03:05 EDT (#)
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kaos-king & Chroniclysm: Thanks. I was thinking about turning it into a story line.
Siren: Wicca interests me, but I've never known where to start. Know any good beginner reference materials?
ajanssen: Well good. If you are the center of the universe then you must have already seen my boobs and we can consider the matter closed.
Hirgon: Yeah well ... nuh uh!
Xcuses & kaos-king: What are these .. dr...drugs you speak of?
Submitted by Magicaddict (user info) at 2005-08-08 10:01:44 EDT (#)
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Combine Stranger In A Strange Land with Donnie Darko and you get what this was aiming for.
Close, but not great.
Submitted by Xcuses (user info) at 2005-08-08 08:34:45 EDT (#)
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Well that answers THAT question about whether you are on drugs or not
Submitted by jimthefiend (user info) at 2005-08-08 07:44:45 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2005-08-08 07:36:31 EDT (#)
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I didn't 'get' this. Doesn't make it bad or nothing but I'm sure other mongoloids like myself would have appreciated a little more clarity.
Submitted by NotSteve (user info) at 2005-08-08 05:03:15 EDT (#)
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Skate it off
Submitted by GaidinCanuck (user info) at 2005-08-08 03:42:05 EDT (#)
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Meh
Submitted by Chroniclysm (user info) at 2005-08-08 02:59:12 EDT (#)
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You shouldn't have stopped typing.
Submitted by ajanssen (user info) at 2005-08-08 02:57:45 EDT (#)
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Fallenangel, I am the warm center that everything revolves around. BLASPHEMER!! You will be smoten for your insolence.
Submitted by Hirgon (user info) at 2005-08-08 02:56:00 EDT (#)
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Sorry, I'm god.
You only think you are the centre of the universe because im on the same planet as you.
Submitted by Siren (user info) at 2005-08-08 02:45:25 EDT (#)
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Frightening, but interesting.
I'm studying up on Wicca lately. My brain is all
mushy now. Then you lay this on me.
Submitted by Viciousriffs (user info) at 2005-08-08 02:42:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
You fucking hippy bitch, climb down from that tree and make me some ham sammiches!
Herbal Essences was tested on bunnies, and so was your douche!
Please refrain from tongue-bathing the elephant scrotum. It's bad for your future "life-partner."
Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2005-08-08 02:38:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
...and what drugs have you done tonight? I'm guessing some good ones. This should have been longer.