slice o' life (402 hits)
Category: NoneRating: 0.5 on 10 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by travis (View user info) at 2005-08-08 11:01:22 EDT
saw the girl again today, before class. she's so pretty. she makes me nervous. i plucked up the courage and spoke to her. she spoke back. it was great. we spoke for almost an hour. i cant remember the specifics, it had to do with literature. she's so smart. smart and pretty. we like all the same authors, i cant believe we're so alike. maybe she likes me too. ive been thinking about that, and i think she does. its not an overt thing, shes too polite for that, but she and i understand one another. i think im in love.
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jesus, what a day. this geek in comparative lit keeps trying to hit on me. cant he take a hint? i had to speak with him for almost an hour today. he wont let up. its not like i can tell him to get fucked. on the way home i passed my favorite shop and saw a nice dress on sale, i think ill go back tomorrow and buy it. damn, i need a smoke.
User Reviews
Submitted by ryan5012 (user info) at 2005-08-08 19:11:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
It was okay, you definatly have potential though.
Submitted by fallenangel (user info) at 2005-08-08 18:46:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2005-08-08 13:27:10 (#)
Ranking: 1
Try again and make it MUCH longer...
Submitted by Deidra (user info) at 2005-08-08 12:49:46 (#)
Ranking: 1
This was a neat idea.. good starting point.
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And maybe add some sex.
Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2005-08-08 13:27:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Try again and make it MUCH longer...
Submitted by Deidra (user info) at 2005-08-08 12:49:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
This was a neat idea.. good starting point.
Submitted by Xcuses (user info) at 2005-08-08 11:15:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
You are either:
A) an alter
B) 14 yrs old
C) Trying to be funny while being stupid
Submitted by Hirgon (user info) at 2005-08-08 11:14:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I gave you a point for every capital.
My eyes hurt.
Submitted by JMG114 (user info) at 2005-08-08 11:09:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
It was like reading a lot of haikus, all in a row.
Submitted by Jeanneee (user info) at 2005-08-08 11:06:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by funk_boy (user info) at 2005-08-08 11:03:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
lojope?
Submitted by RydinJ (user info) at 2005-08-08 11:03:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
want to rate it a 2, because i like what your saying and its true.. but its missing something..