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Submitted by vexx (View user info) at 2005-08-18 22:00:24 EDT
Do you remember the time the world was ending?
There were sirens and in general lost of noise outside.
So I said to you: "The world is ending. Make it stop."
So you ran out onto my front porch, barefoot,
and yelled:
STOP!!!!
And, the funniest thing.... It did.
Now, this is sad, but. I don't remember who you were.
I know you're not the same person now that you use to be.
But I honestly can't remember who either of you are/were.
So, when I said "do you remember?" I meant it.
Which one of you stopped the apocalypse?
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Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2007-11-21 11:17:31 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by LadyPlural (user info) at 2005-08-19 12:57:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This is good.
Submitted by SkinnyKenny (user info) at 2005-08-19 12:54:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Dead_0hi0_Sky (user info) at 2005-08-19 12:20:01 EDT (#)
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Submitted by adjones619 (user info) at 2005-08-19 12:08:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
this was pretty good
Submitted by c1ndy (user info) at 2005-08-19 12:00:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
not bad
Submitted by Sassmasterr (user info) at 2005-08-19 11:46:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
i was probably drunk when i stopped the apocalypse.
i usually hang out with a pretty rough crowd. we get rowdy.
Submitted by FartSmeller (user info) at 2005-08-19 11:39:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I don't normally like this type of stuff. But, this is good.
Submitted by thorpe (user info) at 2005-08-19 07:14:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
+100
Submitted by Barnymeinhoff (user info) at 2005-08-19 06:52:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by Merlina (user info) at 2005-08-19 03:58:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
lovely
Submitted by forensicgirl3 (user info) at 2005-08-19 00:43:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Excellent!
Submitted by Viciousriffs (user info) at 2005-08-19 00:21:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Quite good.
Submitted by joedaddy (user info) at 2005-08-18 23:24:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
economy sized with a good engine
Submitted by TheSunGod (user info) at 2005-08-18 23:06:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
wonderful. every word counted, so you used them all very well.
and just so you know, i was the one who stopped the apocalypse.
Submitted by knucklesnelson (user info) at 2005-08-18 22:32:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I liked it, and i dont usually like this kind of shit.
Submitted by knucklesnelson (user info) at 2005-08-18 22:28:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
myself
Submitted by knucklesnelson (user info) at 2005-08-18 22:28:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
touching
Submitted by Jeanneee (user info) at 2005-08-18 22:06:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Not bad, especially considering the 100 word limit you had to work with. I liked it.
Submitted by vexx (user info) at 2005-08-18 22:01:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
A friend of mine and I have a competition going to see who can write a better story using exactly one hundred words. It was harder than I thought it would be, but I want to know how Uber thinks it came out. Let me hear the criticisms.