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Submitted by Astropath (View user info) at 2005-08-29 08:30:38 EDT
They had long ago thrown aside the linen in favor of the sibilant breeze.
"Je respire la chaleur", she whispered hotly against his neck. And it's true that they both did.
Thick and humid, sliding down their throats. Their world was heat. It was red, and orange, and took the breath from them. It slid up their spines. Coiled like a sultry magma snake, it trickled down again, in the hollow of his neck, and between her perfect breasts.
Outside, all was silence. The hush waited to be filled by the rasping of her thumb along his stubbled jaw. "Donne moi ce cigare", she murmured, and he handed it over. He watched her pillow it in those lips, and immolate it. For her, the ember flared a bright orange. It settled into a dark red, sullen and hot. He watched the heart of the ember throb, and thought of her sliding those rose-petal lips across his skin, flicking with her tongue of flame.
He remembered that her eyes, half-closed though they were, still couldn't contain the fever that threatened him. She sent the smoke whispering across his skin with a smile, and a "regarde comme ca resemble un fantome..." and he knew that's what it was. It was her incursion; her possession. He would waste away and be consumed in the heat. He licked at her skin, tasted the salt of the ocean, and could think of nothing else.
Outside, the smoke from her smoldering mouth slithered out to mingle with the dark; with the jungle steam. It wend its way, licked at by serpents, and watched by hot, yellow tiger eyes. It fell to coiling about a pool, veiling the mirror of the moon, and roundly ignored by the restless piranhas that cared nothing for lust, or humans with smoky mouths, and napalm hearts.
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Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2005-08-29 16:59:57 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Jeanneee (user info) at 2005-08-29 16:03:36 (#)
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And then they went to McDonalds for some chocolate shakes.
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Jeanneee, will you have my babies?
Submitted by Jeanneee (user info) at 2005-08-29 16:03:36 EDT (#)
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And then they went to McDonalds for some chocolate shakes.
Submitted by c1ndy (user info) at 2005-08-29 15:58:11 EDT (#)
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meh. sorry.
Submitted by Astropath (user info) at 2005-08-29 11:34:32 EDT (#)
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ive got just the thing...ill post it tomorrow
Submitted by Sphagnum (user info) at 2005-08-29 11:25:51 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Astropath (user info) at 2005-08-29 11:21:25 (#)
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hmmm...not sure where you're going with that, sphagnum. i'm choosing to remain blissfully ignorant, actually.
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Nevermind, I was just testing out my Linkwhore gun again.
I like the way this post was written. I'd be interested to see something a little longer, with a little more substance as well.
Submitted by Astropath (user info) at 2005-08-29 11:21:25 EDT (#)
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hmmm...not sure where you're going with that, sphagnum. i'm choosing to remain blissfully ignorant, actually.
Submitted by Sphagnum (user info) at 2005-08-29 11:17:12 EDT (#)
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Interesting.
http://www.ubersite.com/m/74021
Submitted by potatomanjack (user info) at 2005-08-29 10:27:13 EDT (#)
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A heap load of meh
Submitted by forthewin (user info) at 2005-08-29 10:13:53 EDT (#)
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I must be too stupid to understand this. Have a +1
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2005-08-29 08:38:59 EDT (#)
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Homer/Apu/Moe:
You can do it, Otto!
You can do it, Otto!
Apu: Make this spare, I'll give you free gelato!
Moe: Then go back to my place where I will get you blotto!
Homer: Domo arigato, Mister Roboto!
Team Homer