mindscream (1019 hits)
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Submitted by GodChicken <Monty> (View user info) at 2005-09-02 06:47:25 EDT
Sometimes it overwhelms.
You hate and rage. You want to, but you can't blame, can't target the people you want so much to deserve it.
As always, it turns inward. It's warm, and sick. Like rancid pudding, so sweet you can't stop spooning it up. Eat it all, use your finger to scoop the last bit out. You won't know how wrong it is until later.
We can forgive, but never, ever forget. Sometimes even forgiveness is transparent. Stretched tight, a thin veil over corrupted emotions, fractured life.
Fuck.
Even my stream of conciousness stutters, stalls. I've been unable to write, unable to share.
Lick the spoon. It tastes good.
User Reviews
Submitted by Leonore (user info) at 2007-12-12 12:26:24 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Holy SHIT.
*favorited*
Submitted by MickGinny (user info) at 2007-12-12 12:07:46 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Crystle (user info) at 2005-09-05 16:06:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
yeah.
fulfills the promise of the title.
Submitted by starshine (user info) at 2005-09-02 13:39:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by spamtrap50 (user info) at 2005-09-02 12:48:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Brand new Angry Kansan!
Submitted by LadyPlural (user info) at 2005-09-02 11:18:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I like the pudding metaphor.
Submitted by jack11058 (user info) at 2005-09-02 10:57:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
monty,
good luck to you wherever you go.
fair winds and following seas, plankowner.
Submitted by MANICMOTHER (user info) at 2005-09-02 09:54:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
WoW....
Submitted by CHR15 (user info) at 2005-09-02 07:38:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by AlwaysAnEagle (user info) at 2005-09-02 07:20:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No, don't leave.
Submitted by Barnymeinhoff (user info) at 2005-09-02 07:11:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
No Comment
Submitted by Method (user info) at 2005-09-02 06:57:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Holy crap, we registered on the same exact day
Submitted by ozzy (user info) at 2005-09-02 06:57:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Deeper than a scottish loch. And the lochs in Scotland are pretty fuckin' deep.
I, on the other hand, am as shallow as the kiddie pool in a water fun park.
What I'm trying to say is this.
+ 2.
Submitted by GodChicken (user info) at 2005-09-02 06:51:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Everything you ever wanted to know about GodChicken
User id: 2634
Registered on or around: 2003-09-18 06:04:50
# Messages posted: 58
# Reviews written: 3637
# Times these posts have been reviewed : 1446
# Hits: 38339
Average rating of all messages: 1.59
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2 years and I didn't even break 40k hits. wtf?
Submitted by w_t_a_y_s_t_r_m (user info) at 2005-09-02 06:51:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Method (user info) at 2005-09-02 06:49:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
that last line reaffirms my belief that you're an idiot.
A talented idiot, but an idiot nonetheless.
Submitted by GodChicken (user info) at 2005-09-02 06:49:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I'm taking a vacation. I've been here just shy of two years, and I feel like I've come full circle from want to wealth and back again.
I got nothing.
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2005-09-02 06:48:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
sometimes I use my tongue.
Submitted by Merlina (user info) at 2005-09-02 06:48:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
love this.