Richard (781 hits)
Category: Quotes & StoriesRating: -0.44 on 21 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Ben (View user info) at 2005-09-04 17:59:36 EDT
Mongoloid.
He heard the cruel thoughts every day as he walked down the halls of his school. They didn't bother him before because he didn't know what they meant, but he found out quickly on his first day of school. Ever since, they burned like acid. He could barely hold back the salty tears.
Retard.
He took the day step by step--like walking. He knew that by walking away he wouldn't give the animals what they wanted. He just took his time getting to class--to the safe haven. His friends and teachers wouldn't hurt him or make fun of him. He could even cry there without fear of mockery.
Moron.
He had one final frontier before he could find refuge on the bus: the playground. He ran for safety blocking out the insults with his hands.
Home at last. How was your day, honey? Now Richard, you be a good boy while Mommy goes to pick Daddy up at the train station. When we get back I'll make us some dinner, how does that sound? Ok? Mommy loves her special little boy. Now be good. I love you, sweetie.
He made his way up the stairs towards the bathroom. He had been waiting all day. He opened up the mirrored-cupboard above the white, porcelain sink. He pulled out Daddy's razor kit.
Bye-bye. I love you.
User Reviews
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2005-09-05 05:18:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This cheatery and deception has gone too far, Berty i challenge you to a duel at dawn for nath honour...
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Right, lets settle this one quickly.
*deals two cards to fabit and Berty*
*looks at cards*
I fold.
This story really doesn't deserve the wrath of the -2, it's not that bad. In fact it was quite good, just short.
Submitted by Fabit (user info) at 2005-09-05 04:58:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by w_t_a_y_s_t_r_m (user info) at 2005-09-04 18:28:43 (#)
Ranking: 0
Ever since I was born, baby...I mean berty
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Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2005-09-04 18:20:05 (#)
Ranking: 1
Nath! You're alive! Oh thank Christ!
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This cheatery and deception has gone too far, Berty i challenge you to a duel at dawn for nath honour...
Submitted by thorpe (user info) at 2005-09-05 04:00:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by williamson (user info) at 2005-09-04 20:50:44 (#)
Ranking: -2
Worse than my UM entry.
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Ouch.
Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2005-09-05 03:37:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
could have done with a touch more rape.
Submitted by TheGirlWithoutATitle (user info) at 2005-09-05 01:54:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Needs more self-degradation.
Oh, and eye liner.
Submitted by williamson (user info) at 2005-09-04 20:50:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Worse than my UM entry.
Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2005-09-04 19:59:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Fuck Cliffs notes. Bubba's notes says this had a lot
of feeling, something most people deny.
Submitted by Axolotl (user info) at 2005-09-04 19:45:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
+1
I smiled. Yes, I am evil.
Submitted by w_t_a_y_s_t_r_m (user info) at 2005-09-04 18:28:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Ever since I was born, baby...I mean berty
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2005-09-04 18:20:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Nath! You're alive! Oh thank Christ!
Submitted by moneyshotforyou (user info) at 2005-09-04 18:16:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Not good.
Submitted by STIXS (user info) at 2005-09-04 18:14:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I know it's a downer, but I had to get it out my system.
Submitted by Whiplash (user info) at 2005-09-04 18:12:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
What a fucking downer.
Submitted by DonovanMD (user info) at 2005-09-04 18:11:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
What a downer after your last post.
Submitted by w_t_a_y_s_t_r_m (user info) at 2005-09-04 18:09:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
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Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2005-09-04 18:07:24 (#)
Ranking: 1
The story was kind of like a bloke with a massive cock but no self control. looked great to start with and had a powerful begining but it was all over too quickly.
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You been watching me, dude?
Submitted by STIXS (user info) at 2005-09-04 18:09:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2005-09-04 18:07:24 (#)
Ranking: 1
The story was kind of like a bloke with a massive cock but no self control. looked great to start with and had a powerful begining but it was all over too quickly.
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This review made it worth it
Submitted by mastershake (user info) at 2005-09-04 18:08:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
good solid -1.
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2005-09-04 18:07:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
The story was kind of like a bloke with a massive cock but no self control. looked great to start with and had a powerful begining but it was all over too quickly.
Submitted by forthewin (user info) at 2005-09-04 18:06:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
A retard killing himself! HEAT!!
Submitted by STIXS (user info) at 2005-09-04 18:03:33 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
It's because I'm a Jüden, isn't it, Pope? Thanks for the criticism, though.
Submitted by BattlePope (user info) at 2005-09-04 18:02:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
while the idea is good (+1) it is badly implemented (-3). try harder