Green lighting (492 hits)
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Submitted by KMGL (View user info) at 2005-09-23 07:08:11 EDT
There he was , sitting alone in a dark corner of the tavern. Unless you looked for him , he was of no interest. The only striking thing about his appearance was the two swords he carrried.
" They say you're the famous samurai master know as the Green lightning ...why would that be ? You dont seem special to me , you look poorer then the average farmer , i bet you sold you daughters just to have those swords ..." said one of the drunk samurai from a powerful clan. Sadly for him , he had just disturbed the quiet peacuful moment that Natao was having.And for that, he felt the only thing left to do was to make sure his identity would never be know here. Especially not here , not in enemy territory. It would be too dangerous.
One quick glance , FLASH , then ... silence
" Never , and i do mean NEVER talk of my family or my clan like that again , but i guess you already lost that chance" he muttered.
While cleaning his swords, he decided to leave ,patrols would obviously arrive soon. Taking one last look at what he had done , you could see the strange unnatural glow of his green eyes ...
User Reviews
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2005-09-23 18:50:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
wow ,that"s some fucked ,up punctuation
Submitted by Barnymeinhoff (user info) at 2005-09-23 07:41:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
when cut a certain way a sound is heard like wailing winter wind.
Submitted by matchoo (user info) at 2005-09-23 07:20:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
pfffffffffffft
Submitted by Richard_Whitely (user info) at 2005-09-23 07:17:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
In fact i liked it more than +1
Submitted by Richard_Whitely (user info) at 2005-09-23 07:16:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Creativity but not in abundance. I liked it.