pain - (922 hits)
Category: RomanceRating: 0.85 on 17 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by trent stewart <trents.at.nzqa.govt.nz> (View user info) at 2005-10-03 23:53:53 EDT
Natalie sprung a leak in her adolescent mind.
Her disgusting mind juice spewed forth and stained my heart.
Her intentions were to lie and try to disguise the truth but her under developed mental abilities ruined it.
Maybe one day when she was a big girl she could deceive her lover and lie to deny the reality. Poor sod. At least the truth came back up for me to see.
I'm still stained. Not the kind of stain that you can wash, its more like the stain that cant go away.
Another night, another 40oz, another piss, another morning awoken to nothingness. This void is deep and dark but I am simple and decent. My anticipation is dumbfounded, there is nothing to anticipate, knowing this I force myself into apathy, it's more right, it's where I belong, it's numb.
My soul has calluses now the pain I don't feel but the remorse is real.
User Reviews
Submitted by PommyTom (user info) at 2006-12-18 23:36:13 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by missedthepoint (user info) at 2005-10-30 17:30:36 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
This is good
I think i have a good idea what you're saying here
The numbness later is just as much a bitch as the initial pain
http://www.ubersite.com/m/78002
on a brighter note...
Morningside for life ow!
Submitted by mikethescottish (user info) at 2005-10-18 20:52:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Not too shabby at all.
Submitted by darkspoon (user info) at 2005-10-18 20:39:33 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
haha... "mind juice"
Submitted by Lucylou (user info) at 2005-10-05 23:29:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Auckland. Yay, another kiwi!
Just take your email off your External name by going to My Account - Profile - External name.
Submitted by trent_nz (user info) at 2005-10-05 23:10:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Oh hell. Knew i shouldnt of used my work addy. Ill have to set up a hotmail account tonight. But yes.. where are you?
Submitted by Lucylou (user info) at 2005-10-05 23:02:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Nice, well written.
Also, haha for NZQA - must make you a Wellingtonian?
Submitted by Whiplash (user info) at 2005-10-04 23:11:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2005-10-04 00:05:30 (#)
Ranking: 2
"Great authors have said less with more words. . . ."
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Submitted by williamson (user info) at 2005-10-04 03:20:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+22222
Fucking kick arse User ID.
Submitted by yeahthatme (user info) at 2005-10-04 03:00:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
I hate the name Natalie.
Submitted by Phallic_Cymbals (user info) at 2005-10-04 02:09:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
You gloomy bastard.
Submitted by Magickmuse (user info) at 2005-10-04 01:14:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Get over it.
She's a skank
Submitted by Flack (user info) at 2005-10-04 00:12:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
chock full of emo goodness!
Submitted by Unabonger (user info) at 2005-10-04 00:08:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
do what I did...fuck her sister.
apathy plus revenge.
Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2005-10-04 00:05:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
"This void is deep and dark but I am simple and decent. My anticipation is dumbfounded, there is nothing to anticipate, knowing this I force myself into apathy, it's more right, it's where I belong, it's numb. "
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+++2 for this. Great authors have said less with more words. . . .
Submitted by Axtumanu (user info) at 2005-10-03 23:55:33 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Switch from alcohol to pot, its healthier, and makes you feel a hell of a lot better.
Submitted by HighFructoseCornSyrup (user info) at 2005-10-03 23:55:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I dig this. I feel your hurt.
+2 for user 22222