Afternoon Delight (1057 hits)
Category: NoneRating: 1.75 on 17 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Adereterial (View user info) at 2005-10-07 05:13:44 EDT
It's the same every afternoon.
She sits, tries to resist... He waits.
He knows she's his.
Sooner or later, she succumbs. It's an addiction, a need she cannot control, nor wants to, though she tries.
She really tries.
He gently yields to the warmth of her skin, her breath, her mouth.
She melts as he drips gently down the back of her throat. She takes only part of him, trying to be good, adult, refined... keep desire under control.
He tastes like sunlight, dappled light through summer trees, fires on winter days. Like hugs, kisses, and the magical way a mother's love can somehow take the hurt away... He tastes like comfort.
He is comfort.
Still she tries to resist... 'Just the once. Just the once and that will be enough. Really... No really.'
It never works... He sits there, whilst the smell of childhood surrounds her. How can that smell be so tempting?
She's not so restained when she takes him again... The slow drip down the back of her throat becomes a torrent.
Comfort becomes something more... self indulgent comfort always feels like so much more.
She stops - satiated, for the time being. The rush abates, slowly. His taste fades... his smell lingers longer, but without potency.
He bids her farewell...
Until tomorrow afternoon.
User Reviews
Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2005-11-14 18:49:59 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I prefer a bacon sarnie with brown sauce
But still a good post.
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2005-10-07 16:48:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by Average_Dan (user info) at 2005-10-07 09:55:26 (#)
Ranking: 1
I'm with badass as well, and I'm pissed you limeys refuse to spell "revolutionize" and "realize" properly.
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While agree with them I still thought it was pretty decent.
Submitted by MANICMOTHER (user info) at 2005-10-07 10:08:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
A little too short, but the picture was a nice touch.
Submitted by Average_Dan (user info) at 2005-10-07 09:55:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
I'm with badass as well, and I'm pissed you limeys refuse to spell "revolutionize" and "realize" properly.
Submitted by Teephphah (user info) at 2005-10-07 09:15:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I'm kinda with badass on this one, but I'm going up to +2 for "dappled."
People seem to be improving their vocabularies around here recently. And that's a good thing.
Submitted by badassmofo (user info) at 2005-10-07 07:46:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
I liked it enough.
I thought it was a wee bit short and lacked a little feeling...although I think the idea was to be 'matter of fact' I just didn't think it was a +2.
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2005-10-07 07:21:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
p.s. due to a genetic defect my knob tastes of dairy milk and my semen is the flavour of hot chocolate, only thicker and creamier.
and whiter obviously.
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2005-10-07 07:01:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Adereterial (user info) at 2005-10-07 05:32:47 (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by Danger_Ranger (user info) at 2005-10-07 05:32:11 (#)
Ranking: 2
I need a cigarette. Where the fuck is Berty!???
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Don't know, but if you find him, shout at him, as I need him to email me ASAP.
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I was having a lie in.
Hey, guess what? I just realised that there's a high setting on my shower! It only took me about ten minutes to get ready!
This is going to totally revoloutionise my life.
Submitted by professorfuckface (user info) at 2005-10-07 05:51:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
ffs stfu
Submitted by missflibble (user info) at 2005-10-07 05:50:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
so, cock or galaxy?
like the age old conumdrum of daddy or chips.
chips.
I need to stop eating strepsils.
Submitted by Adereterial (user info) at 2005-10-07 05:47:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by a_reader (user info) at 2005-10-07 05:22:45 (#)
Ranking: 2
No Starland Vocal Band lyrics... fine auto-2!
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I tried... I really tried.
*Cries pingu tears*
Submitted by Merlina (user info) at 2005-10-07 05:36:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
excellent. I vote you
Submitted by Adereterial (user info) at 2005-10-07 05:32:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by Danger_Ranger (user info) at 2005-10-07 05:32:11 (#)
Ranking: 2
I need a cigarette. Where the fuck is Berty!???
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Don't know, but if you find him, shout at him, as I need him to email me ASAP.
Submitted by Danger_Ranger (user info) at 2005-10-07 05:32:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I need a cigarette. Where the fuck is Berty!???
Submitted by Adereterial (user info) at 2005-10-07 05:32:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I apologise Apollo.... I promised it would be shite.
Submitted by a_reader (user info) at 2005-10-07 05:22:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Starland Vocal Band lyrics... fine auto-2!
Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2005-10-07 05:17:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I FUCKING KNEW IT WAS GOING TO BE ABOUT HOT CHOCOLATE.
OR CUM.
One of the two.
Same thing.
That's what daddy says anyway.