In Closing, Fuck You: Coming Down off of Rage. (834 hits)
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Submitted by Wildcat (View user info) at 2005-10-31 10:19:54 EST
It welled up inside of me like rice in a boiling soup, bobbing and cycling back down, never staying on the surface. A single spectre of sweat rolled down my back, whisking me away to a state that recognized what little humanity I may have. It called me away from the scene like my Father's whistle at dusk when it was dinner time. As its decent stopped, the deafening screeches of reality came back and I remembered where I was. The Anger flowed like a divine wind but the leaves it blew were scented. Placing the scent was hard at first but nothing is as recognizable and concise as Insightful Rage.
This is the type that lets loose the whispers and silent moments. Freely flowing are the shortcomings and faults of others. Afterthoughts gathered before thought and spread like butter across their hollow persona. Their realization or your truth sayings, their blank stairs and defensive posture allow you to consume them. Nothing tastes as good as another's crushed ego. Bitter at first but having a warm and sweet aftertaste.
She stood before me spitting attack after attack. First at my social status when we were in high school, then at my phallus. Mature, as you can see. Funny how no matter your size, they all choke eventually. Perhaps I should have apologized for not having a cervix-ripping member. On second thought, she wouldn't understand if I did apologize. That's a negative Ghost Rider and I would have been waved off.
Is it not funny when arguing with someone of obvious less intelligence the instant they realize they sound dumb they make personal attacks? It probably didn't help that I knew she didn't know that red and blue make purple. How embarrassing. Especially when a 3 year old told her.
It's been 36 hours since the misplaced, drunken argument and I'm still feeling the adrenaline of it all. Ever hit a woman? Ever WANT to hit a woman? We're all equal right? Right? Her striking me should be cause for my riposte, should it not? Chivalry checked out years ago folks. Right around the time bras were being burned and legs became hairy did chivalry get back on its arthritic horse and ride into the smog-hazed sunset. Surprised? No. Disappointed? A bit. Who isn't?
Popularity got you no where, or now here. Whichever. I like you for what you are. No really, a lot of men out there need women like you. What with your breakaway clothing and donut smile. It'll just be weird for them when they have to pick you up at your parents' house. "How old are you? Is that so? And you still live......nevermind, just keep going......that's right use your tongue a little more."
And now something rhythmic you might follow, albeit you won't understand. Albeit it is a conjunction, it means although. Look it up.
Once again you are finding
That everyone has moved on
From everything that was blinding
You from salvation.
Dead end jobs you can quit
With your future still at hand,
Dead end lives are hard to leave
When you've never had a plan.
Because you're hot you think you're better
Than everyone around.
That only gets you so far
As being the next whore in town.
No one's happy you're finally employed,
For it's an expectation.
We all have jobs too, you whore,
Fuck you, congratulations.
You were up there,
With all of the rest
And we were down below.
Now we went off
And grew the fuck up,
So fuck you
You dumb-ass hoe.
I watched you bum a cig,
Then kiss a guy for a shot.
You gave it to me like it was a favour,
Fuck you, I'll drink what I bought.
I hope you remember I said what I meant.
And as your mommy tucks you in at night
I'll be making mortgage payments,
While you're 40 and sucking False Mr. Right.
In closing, Fuck You.
User Reviews
Submitted by Bob_Dole (user info) at 2005-11-04 18:04:44 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by EAZEDZT (user info) at 2005-11-04 17:57:13 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
This was just perfect.
Submitted by Shmee51 (user info) at 2005-11-04 03:15:55 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Fan-fucking-tastic.
Submitted by Average_Dan (user info) at 2005-11-01 10:11:04 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Average_Dan (user info) at 2005-11-01 10:10:37 (#)
Ranking: 0
Yeah, nd804.at.hotmail.com
I still haven't received it though.
Submitted by Dead_0hi0_Sky (user info) at 2005-10-31 20:39:25 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
simply awesome.
Submitted by trent_nz (user info) at 2005-10-31 20:24:06 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
sweet
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2005-10-31 20:13:14 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Ah, rage poetry...I know it well, and love it.
Feel better now? It sounds like it.
Submitted by userpete86 (user info) at 2005-10-31 13:45:33 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Intelligent hate = +2!
Submitted by Anansie (user info) at 2005-10-31 12:27:48 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
"No one's happy you're finally employed,
For it's an expectation.
We all have jobs too, you whore,
Fuck you, congratulations"
Hell yes.
Submitted by LiquidPaper (user info) at 2005-10-31 11:15:18 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Happy Boo
Submitted by Average_Dan (user info) at 2005-10-31 11:07:51 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
email me if you are going: ND804.at.hotmail.com
Submitted by WildcatMcGee (user info) at 2005-10-31 11:01:59 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
I'm not sure if I'm actually going at this point but we'll check it out.
Submitted by ozzy (user info) at 2005-10-31 11:01:57 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Oh yes. Now THIS is some good rage.
I wish I could write stuff like this. It would take a nuclear weapon attack to annoy me this much.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2005-10-31 10:55:39 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Wow. I hate when that happens.
Maybe if you weren't such a prick, this could have been avoided.
Well written, though.
Submitted by Average_Dan (user info) at 2005-10-31 10:53:48 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Well hey,
Are you going right home after the show, or are you gonna stick around long enough to grab a beer somewhere?
The show is exactly 10 blocks away from my house and it's in the middle of a lot of good bars.
Submitted by internetslacker (user info) at 2005-10-31 10:46:00 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Now that's writing. Turning the rage into truth. Excellent, Wildcat. Keep writing, dammit. Keep letting the rage out.
I recommend you also read "Shit Magnet" by Jim Goad. HIGHLY recommend it. You'll thank me.
Submitted by WildcatMcGee (user info) at 2005-10-31 10:45:11 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
11/16/2005 from 9 to about noon.
Submitted by Average_Dan (user info) at 2005-10-31 10:43:50 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Yeah, I know where it is, when is your trade show?
Submitted by WildcatMcGee (user info) at 2005-10-31 10:42:26 EST (#)
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Hey Dan, do you know where 823 East Main Street is in Richmond? I've got a trade seminar there.
Submitted by TigerLilly (user info) at 2005-10-31 10:41:38 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
This rocked
Submitted by WildcatMcGee (user info) at 2005-10-31 10:36:31 EST (#)
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No, just something that happened this weekend in downtown Norfolk. I'm just now calming down about the whole thing but things will never be the same.
Submitted by Pentameter (user info) at 2005-10-31 10:30:23 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
This...this is absolutely awesome.
Submitted by Average_Dan (user info) at 2005-10-31 10:30:11 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Phew,
That's a lot of hate man...an Ex perhaps?
Submitted by WildcatMcGee (user info) at 2005-10-31 10:28:47 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
No no, this isn't about her at all.
Submitted by Average_Dan (user info) at 2005-10-31 10:27:33 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Jesus man,
What the hell happened?
You and your little lady didn't break up did you?
Submitted by Mike00295 (user info) at 2005-10-31 10:24:42 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
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