UnNatural Injections of Poisons and Pain. (382 hits)
Category: RomanceRating: -1.5 on 8 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Drop It Like It's Disgusting<likeafallingbomb.at.gmail.com> (View user info) at 2005-11-01 03:30:17 EST
Spinning out of control. It's too fast.... all of it. My downfall. I've lost my final stand against time. Everything around me is burning in flames, the fire drawn out from my eyes.
It comes from me like the plauge... I've burnt this city down. Now my sorrow engulfs me, for I see what I have created. The monster inside of me has been turned loose and complete distruction is inevitable.
The room is spinning.... spinning. Beyond comprehension as I ponder what has happened.
A body lies in front of me.... it is my own. Surrounded in flames my lifeless body lays. My own blank eyes stare back, as I still do not comprehend. I just know.... I have one background.
This was my destiny.
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Submitted by damage.com (user info) at 2005-11-01 14:08:04 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
Spider-cracks in the asphalt
Spread like the black veins of Hecate
To the extent of my vision.
Ticket in hand, fraying;
Tatters of paper, tatters of my life
Skitter in the twisted wind...
Oh, fuck this, I need a burger.
Submitted by WhatTheHell (user info) at 2005-11-01 09:13:02 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Eat your own ass.
Submitted by Bobbywangstar (user info) at 2005-11-01 09:10:36 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
I bet you listen to HIM.
Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2005-11-01 06:42:28 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
You need to practice killing yourself more before you write about it.
Submitted by jollydodger (user info) at 2005-11-01 05:32:04 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Where do you come up with this shit?
Submitted by zoobie2000 (user info) at 2005-11-01 04:41:38 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by bigjeegro (user info) at 2005-11-01 04:00:18 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
I'm guessing your fingernails, hair and lips are black, and your face is liquid-paper white. Did I guess right?
Submitted by cat_head (user info) at 2005-11-01 03:42:09 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Spelling mistakes - even just one - always make this kind of thing look like the work of a pathetic angsty schoolkid.
And it was shit anyway.