An Erotic Story for the Ladies (1898 hits)
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Submitted by sideshow (View user info) at 2005-11-04 11:02:58 EST
After an unusually stressful day with your parents, you were more than happy to hear my voice on the other end of the phone. I was about half an hour outside of town, returning from a month long business trip. Since it was the holidays, and your parents were over, you badly wanted an excuse to get out of there. I offered to come and pick you up, but you wanted to get away from them sooner than that, so we decided to meet at my place.
I got home, and I found you sitting there, waiting for me. The door which was usually unlocked was locked because both my roommate and I had been gone for a few days. I dropped my bag and gave you a hug. I unlocked the door and let you in, telling you to wait for a minute so I could unload the rest of my stuff from my car. I came inside to find you using the bathroom, so I tossed my stuff on the table and made my way to the couch. I sat down and undid my pants. I pulled my dick out of my boxers and I sat there, exposed, waiting for you to finish in the bathroom.
You came out and saw how I was sitting, and you just smiled. You crouched on the ground in front of me, on your knees, and began playing with my penis in your hands. Looking up at me as you did this; you could see the excitement and anticipation in my face. You stopped playing with my cock so that you could sit on my lap facing me and you gave me a kiss. As we made out, my hands were running through your hair and across your body. We hadn't seen each other in so long and we were making up for it with our aggressive passion. You could feel my dick harden underneath you, and the very thought of this excited you. You took that as your cue to dismount from me, and to return to your position on the floor.
Taking my cock in your hands again, you were delighted to see that it had grown and became nice and hard. Teasing me as you played with it, you kissed the tip and then started licking around the base. As your lips and tongue caressed the soft skin of my penis, I couldn't help but sit there, dumbfounded at how good this felt. What an eternity, it seemed, since the last time this happened. You kept kissing my penis, and stroking it with your hand. Soon, my dick was covered with your saliva, and that was enough lubrication for you to rub my dick furiously in your hand, while tickling the head of my cock with your tongue. The gentle sucking of your mouth, combined with the stroking of your hand, and the teasing of your tongue, was very pleasurable. I was going to cum soon; I couldn't believe how intense this was!
You were paying close attention to my breathing and the sounds I was making. Since you knew that I was going to cum, you did not even think about taking your mouth off of my cock. As I was about to burst, you sucked on the tip of my dick as if it were a large straw, sucking the cum right out of me. While doing this, your tongue was making circles around the head of my penis, and the whole experience was unreal. As my cum stopped shooting out, you kept your mouth on my penis, making eye contact with me. That was so hot. You swallowed my load, and played with my dick just a bit longer as it softened. You got up, helped me put it back in my pants, and then straddled me. We kissed again, and even though I could taste myself on your breath, I did not care.
I picked you up from the hugging position we were in, and carried you to my room. I was going to have my way with you now! But first, I was gonna repay you the favor and show you how good your oral sex felt! It had been so long since you had felt my warm wet tongue in between your legs, and just knowing what I was about to do was already making you wet.
I laid you down on my bed, and I climbed on top of you. Since we were both clothed, we just lay there, kissing, for a minute. I knew you were excited, I was too, and I wanted to bring you to an incredible climax, similar to the one you had given me only minutes before. I rolled off of you and sat upright, encouraging you to do the same. Kissing you again, my fingers found the bottom of your shirt and started to work it up your chest. I pulled away from our kiss, removed your shirt in one fluid motion, and drove right back in, forcing our tongues together. As I held the back of your head with one hand, my other was tracing circles and other patterns across your back, sides, and stomach, completely avoiding your breasts.
As the excitement built, I took both of my hands and decided to surprise you by grabbing your tits with one determined grasp, before letting my hands recede to touching all of your exposed skin. Again, my hands came together, this time meeting at the middle of your back. I took your bra strap between my hands, fingered the clasp, and let it drop. You shrugged your shoulders forward, allowing me to slid the bra down your arms and toss it to the floor, joining your shirt. You pulled back from me, and I knew that my shirt had to disappear. And it was gone.
I pushed you back so that you were again lying down, and I started kissing your stomach. As my lips and tongue moved around your chest, occasionally kissing your breasts, my fingers were playing with the button and zipper on your jeans. I kissed you up to your shoulders, before moving to your collarbone, then your neck. As I started gently nibbling at your neck, you tilted your head back, giving me more skin to pleasure. I moved my mouth up to your ear, and as my warm breath rushed across your skin, my tongue was flicking your ear lobe. Moving my lips down your jaw line, our mouths met again and you forced your tongue into my mouth. I knew that you were very aroused and wanted more.
Your jeans were really tight (and they looked really good on you, showing off your gorgeous ass) so I could not simply tug them off of you, like the way you would remove mine. With a little help from you, they soon joined the ever growing pile of clothes on the floor. Your socks joined the pile as well, leaving you only in your panties. I now had a lot more of your soft and smooth skin to touch, and so my lips started on the middle of your left thigh. I kissed you along your leg, up to your hips. I moved past there, back towards your stomach, as my right hand fondled your breasts. I put my index finger near your mouth, and you immediately took it in and started sucking on it. This was a mild sensation compared to what your tongue had just done to my cock, but it felt good none the less. With my finger wet with your saliva, I rubbed it across your nipples, making them harden even more, almost instantly. As I continued to fondle your breasts, I made sure that I would give your nipples a squeeze, whenever they were protruding up between my fingers.
My lips kept darting around your body, making your skin tingle where ever they appeared next. If you would've been blindfolded, this would've been sweet torture for you. As it was, you were still anxious, waiting until the moment when my tongue pushed inside of your vagina. My only mission was to please you; my only goal was your orgasm. As I kissed you between your belly button and your panties, I let my hand slid down your body, starting to rub at your crotch. You tilted your hips a bit, giving me better access to your naughty parts. My lips moved south, towards the top of your panties, and I took the elastic in my teeth and started to pull them down. Lifting your butt up, you gave me an easier task, and I used my hands to quickly pull them off.
I looked down upon you, your naked body laying there, so inviting, so beautiful. I made my first move, licking the outer portion of your vagina from bottom to top, up to your clit where I let my tongue rest a minute. Rather than repeating this motion, I elected to kiss your hips, and then more of your thigh. I brushed my lips across your thigh, bringing them close to your waiting vagina, but instead, I kissed the inside of your leg, down towards your knee. I re-positioned myself, now with my mouth hovering over your wetness and began to rhythmically stroke you clit with my tongue, as my mouth gently sucked on the area. Every now and again I would push my tongue inside you, wiggling it around, trying to rub all of the inner walls. Licking your vagina again, my mouth always found its way back to your clit, and the little bit of suction I provided only aroused the area further.
Rubbing your vagina with my finger, I coated it in your wetness and slowly pushed it inside. I began flicking your clit with my tongue and pushing my finger in and out of you in time with each other. I could tell you wanted more, as your hands pushed my face into your crotch. I used a second finger to probe into your vagina, trying to scratch at the top of your vagina, or I guess the front wall if you were standing, looking for that spot that made you squirm beneath me. As my fingers stroked you innards, my tongue continued its ceremonial treatment of your clit. Your desire for more only fueled my desire to please you, and as your fingers ran through my hair, I knew you were close to coming.
I kept on with my mission, like a dedicated servant does for his master, not stopping until the job was done. As your moans grew louder and your breathing quickened, I knew I was on the homestretch and I had to do my part to make this as amazing for you as what you had done for me. My tongue speed up, it was like I was a cat lapping drink from a bowl, over and over and over. My fingers rubbed the inside of your vagina in ways you didn't know were possible (that is the advantage of my fingers being longer and stronger than yours) and as your back arched, I felt your nails digging into my shoulders. Not that I cared.
As you caught your breath, I knew that you wanted more than my fingers could provide. You wanted my dick inside you, filling you up. I was already hard again; listening to you coming aroused me back to life. Your hands were over my body like a maniac; my clothes were flying everywhere, joining yours on the floor creating an orgy of fabrics and textures. I pushed you to your back and you rolled the condom down my cock. I always like it better when you put the condom on me, but that is just because your hands turn me on much more than my own ever could.
Since you like it better when I am on top of you, thrusting into you, I positioned myself accordingly. As you guided my dick inside you, I felt how warm and wet you were. I slowly pushed the tip of my dick inside, before retreating. I pushed again, this time a bit further, before pulling out slowly. With every thrust, I was going deeper, and I absolutely loved how your vagina engulfed and surrounded my cock. I pushed in yet again, and this time I was no more than half way in when I heard you moan slightly. I pulled out once more before pushing myself into you again, this time as far as I could. I rested there for a bit, all the way inside of you. Putting my arms around your shoulders and behind your head, I started thrusting into you. You were thrilled. As my pelvis bumped yours, your clit was being stimulated, and along with the intensity of my member rocking back and forth, in and out of its new home, you were getting quite excited again.
I did not slow down; I did not miss a beat. I kept thrusting away, pulling you towards me with my arms, and pushing my dick into you with my hips. My face was in your hair, near your left ear, and I whispered to you how much I missed you. My breath was hot against your skin, and I felt your teeth against my shoulder. I kept my motion going, I knew you were enjoying this, and so was I, it wouldn't be long before you were in the midst of another mind shaking orgasm. When you started tensing up, I felt your hands on my back, pulling me close. I kept my rhythm, making sure that my pelvis was grinding yours on each movement, stimulating your clit. As your moaning got louder, your grip tightened, and I knew that I had to keep going. I made an extra effort to push myself into you as far as I could on each stroke. When you came, you came hard. It was so arousing to hear you enjoying every minute of it, I had to focus so that I could last and keep going without blowing my load.
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When I injured arm and couldn't use it for a month, we got quite good at sex with you on top of me, because I did not have the ability to support my own weight. How funny it must have looked for you to be riding me, with one of my arms in a sling that I had to wear all the time, even naked. The thing that I love the most about you being on top of me is that I have a chance to gaze at your beautiful body the whole time we are fucking. I can look you in the eyes, starring right into your soul. And watching how your expression changes as you are about to come is priceless.
It had been so long since I had seen you last, my desire did not falter in all of the days we were apart. If anything, it only made me want you more. And right now, I wanted you to be on top of me, grinding into me. You enjoyed being on top, you could use all of your weight to push yourself onto my cock as far as you could. And when you leaned back a bit, the head of my dick would rub your cervix in such a way that it felt incredible for both of us. We didn't even have to be thrusting in and out for this to feel good, just a slight rocking of our hips was all it took. Of course, if you wanted that in and out motion, all you had to do was lean forward to kiss me, and I would start pumping my hips away, fucking you from underneath. But that was not necessary; it felt too good how we were for you to want to move away from this position. And so it was, you riding me, your hands on my chest, and hands roaming all over your body.
When I felt you were getting tired, I aided your movements with my hands, guiding your hips back and forth. Sometimes I would grab at your breasts, playing with your nipples. And when I knew you were getting excited, I loved to stick my finger in your mouth, get it wet, and then start rubbing your clit with it. That, combined with my dick touching the walls of your vagina, and my knob rubbing your cervix, was a massive amount of stimulation.
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After you came, you still wanted more. You fulfilled my desire by pushing me off of you, and rolling on top on me. We kissed for a minute, and I could feel you rubbing against my cock. You got up and positioned yourself so that you could sit on my dick and ride me. Since you were wet already from our sex, you slid onto my cock easily and pushed it into you as far as you could. I heard you moan slightly as my dick poked its head all the way into you. Before I had a chance to get used to how good your warmth felt, you were already rocking back and forth, rubbing the head of my cock with the walls of your vagina.
I loved watching you as you were rocking back and forth, the beauty of this position was that I could watch you, from your pussy to your head, and you could watch me, from my pelvis, past my abs, to my head and watch the look of excitement, delight, and surprise on face as your motions intensified. I was amazed at how good this felt, an absence of sex really did make doing it again feel incredible. I was so happy to have you on top of me, rocking back and forth, that I almost didn't notice when you switched your motion. You started grinding against me in a figure 8 motion, and this felt good. It was too hard for me to try to match the movements of your hips, so I just lay there, pushing my hips upwards, giving you un-denied access to use my cock as you wish, letting you use me as your sex toy.
What a happy sex toy I was, the feelings inside me that you brought out were incomparable to anything I had experienced in your absence. As we found a position that felt great for us, we both knew it because we could see each other's faces light up. So once we found that spot, we did not let it go. You continued pounding away at me, and all I could do was watch as you breasts shook and you bit your bottom lip with determination. All of the visual stimulation, as well as the physical stimulation, was starting to get to me. I knew that it would not be too long before I came. You were starting to find an incredible rhythm, and I encouraged you to continue. You kept at it, and I knew that it wouldn't be long before you came as well. Sometimes when you are about to come you tense up and your motions slow down, but this time, with my hands on your hips, rocking you back and forth, you had no choice but to keep pace. You overcame your hindrance and kept the motion going while I started rubbing your clit again. This extra bit of stimulation was enough to make your breathing increase, and the look on your face told it all, you were loving it.
Seeing you enjoy it so much, combined with the arousal of me being able to watch you, was enough to bring me to the verge of climax. I did all that I could to avoid bursting, but I knew that soon enough you would come too. My breathing became short and rapid, and I was beginning to moan. Hearing me enjoy it was enough to set you off, and your moaning became louder. As I watched your eyes close, I let myself go, I moaned, called your name, and started coming. Hearing the excitement and arousal in my voice and feeling my dick throb within you was enough to push you over the edge and you came again. Your movements slowed down but your moans got louder, and finally, you stopped moving and you just looked down at me, smiling. I smiled back and you leaned down to kiss me. I wrapped my arms around you, and held you tight. I rolled us over, pulled out of you and tossed the condom in the garbage. I laid back down and pulled you back on top of me, and there we rested, catching our breath, while staring into each others eyes.
User Reviews
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-03-14 22:51:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
hmm...call me if you're ever in Los Angeles
Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2006-08-25 12:56:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
how do i reach you?
email?
apollo88.at.gmail.com
Submitted by fluff (user info) at 2006-08-23 18:31:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Good point on a fat fuck tony post? you stupid redneck idiot.
Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2006-08-16 22:57:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by sideshow (user info) at 2006-08-16 18:26:14 (#)
Ranking: 2
te he he....what a story....
How are things in Calgary treating you? you in the oil industry or what?
Bob was telling me you want to go for a beer at some point.......I have got some killer dope that I've saved in my freezer for over 19 months now, and it is very tasty....
Boblobla knows how to reach me"""
works for me my wigger.
Submitted by Doodles (user info) at 2006-05-16 23:32:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Well what the ever living fuck, damn it Uber http://www.literotica.com last time I try.
Submitted by Doodles (user info) at 2006-05-16 23:31:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
And I fucked the link up, go me www.literotica.com
Submitted by Doodles (user info) at 2006-05-16 23:30:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
www.literotica.com
Write this shit there, please and thank you.
Submitted by hollygolitely (user info) at 2006-05-16 23:19:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Not sure I ever told you, but you DID help me.
Thank you!
http://www.ubersite.com/m/75268#1598672
Submitted by Feijuada (user info) at 2005-11-07 05:13:27 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
What a hilarious peice of shit!
Submitted by yeahthatme (user info) at 2005-11-06 23:09:59 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
"my knob rubbing your cervix"
Probably the most un-erotic line ever.
Submitted by sideshow (user info) at 2005-11-06 22:48:25 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Thakn you all for your comments
Submitted by Lisa (user info) at 2005-11-05 09:31:21 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
This is like something your therapist makes you write to eliminate pent-up sexual energy due to a severe lack of boning.
Submitted by Xcuses (user info) at 2005-11-05 09:05:22 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
It appears the ladies like this while the men do not. I've read better, I written better, but I've seen a lot worse. I tend to send my porn writing to penthouse, not Uber...but that's just me
Submitted by Chillax (user info) at 2005-11-04 21:13:00 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
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Submitted by userpete86 (user info) at 2005-11-04 12:18:49 (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by TheSunGod (user info) at 2005-11-04 11:45:11 (#)
Ranking: -1
+1 for that fact that you can at least write a complete sentence.
-2 for the fact that your sex must be about as exciting as vanilla yogurt. but hey- i'm glad you're in the world, man. because when the ladies are left with a choice of vanilla sex or my sex, i win.
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You like sex with vanilla yogurt? Hm... I might try that...
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It's really great.
Rather unlike this post.
Submitted by Girlwithaclue (user info) at 2005-11-04 20:03:17 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
When can I get a sample?
:)
Submitted by malbin (user info) at 2005-11-04 19:23:52 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
NEVER BEEN LAID HAVE YOU? AHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHA
Submitted by FilthyAssistant (user info) at 2005-11-04 18:30:14 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Ahahahahahahaha. A word of advice: two words that should never ever appear in a supposedly erotic context....vagina and cervix. They sound like childbirth and smear tests.
Submitted by erinly (user info) at 2005-11-04 18:10:40 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2005-11-04 15:18:41 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
now do one for the ghey menz
Submitted by kimmy02721 (user info) at 2005-11-04 14:25:43 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
HAHAHAAAAAAAAA!!! I giggled like a school girl. this was ridiculous. PFFFTTTT
Submitted by ubetidid (user info) at 2005-11-04 13:23:35 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
well, damn. I'm totally horny now and at work. shit.
Submitted by Anansie (user info) at 2005-11-04 12:41:54 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
If I want erotica I'll read Anais Nin, thanks.
Submitted by sideshow (user info) at 2005-11-04 12:24:22 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2005-11-04 12:19:35 (#)
Ranking: -2
what a fucking mess...
what were you thinking???
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I was thinking that I would take a stab at writing in a genre that I have never done before. I used Uber to see what people thought about my attempt. From some of the comments I've gotten, I can see that the guys don't like it at all. Lesson learned.
Thank you for your comments.
Submitted by domenad (user info) at 2005-11-04 12:24:13 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
I just asked my wife if she wanted me to rub her cervix with my knob and I got hit in the face.
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2005-11-04 12:19:35 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
what a fucking mess...
what were you thinking???
Submitted by userpete86 (user info) at 2005-11-04 12:18:49 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by TheSunGod (user info) at 2005-11-04 11:45:11 (#)
Ranking: -1
+1 for that fact that you can at least write a complete sentence.
-2 for the fact that your sex must be about as exciting as vanilla yogurt. but hey- i'm glad you're in the world, man. because when the ladies are left with a choice of vanilla sex or my sex, i win.
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You like sex with vanilla yogurt? Hm... I might try that...
Submitted by TheSunGod (user info) at 2005-11-04 11:45:11 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
+1 for that fact that you can at least write a complete sentence.
-2 for the fact that your sex must be about as exciting as vanilla yogurt. but hey- i'm glad you're in the world, man. because when the ladies are left with a choice of vanilla sex or my sex, i win.
Submitted by MandaPanda (user info) at 2005-11-04 11:26:55 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Naughty.
Submitted by Draqus (user info) at 2005-11-04 11:22:17 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Only teh ghey menz have been looking at this, according to the reviews.
Oh, and me...
Submitted by Azk (user info) at 2005-11-04 11:20:40 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
As horny as you're trying to make this, it's incredibly boring. I didn't even bother finishing it.
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Why would you even bother reading it if it was for the ladies?
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If any girl gets off on this she aint a "lady"...not that they will. Anyway good erotica transcends gender...or im Bi...
Submitted by sideshow (user info) at 2005-11-04 11:16:48 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by littledan (user info) at 2005-11-04 11:14:32 (#)
Ranking: -1
As horny as you're trying to make this, it's incredibly boring. I didn't even bother finishing it.
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Why would you even bother reading it if it was for the ladies?
Submitted by WildcatMcGee (user info) at 2005-11-04 11:16:41 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
You wasted more of your own time than mine. This sucked.
Submitted by Azk (user info) at 2005-11-04 11:15:30 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
"I was going to have my way with you now!" <<<< ahahahahahhaha
Submitted by Azk (user info) at 2005-11-04 11:14:33 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
"and my knob rubbing your cervix, was a massive amount of stimulation. "
Thats awful. Plain awful.
Submitted by littledan (user info) at 2005-11-04 11:14:32 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
As horny as you're trying to make this, it's incredibly boring. I didn't even bother finishing it.
Submitted by Azk (user info) at 2005-11-04 11:12:21 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
ahahahahahhaha no.
Submitted by BLITZKREIG_BOB (user info) at 2005-11-04 11:10:38 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
On a scale of one to ten....fuck you.