Acquaintance (738 hits)
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Rating: 1.7 on 21 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Snark << snarkk.at.gmail.com (View user info) at 2005-11-14 17:04:17 EST
ACQUAINTANCE
I'm sitting here and thinking about how she looked that day.
I'm replaying the memory of her lying naked on the bed, legs spread, nipples erect, hair damp and tangled, afterglow beaming from her face, and I'm wondering if there's a mess as beautiful as a post orgasm woman.
I'm replaying the memory over and over again, because, if I'm lucky, I might see it again this Christmas. If things go well, I'll get to add to the photo album that's playing itself out in my mind eye.
It's a kind of sweet torture, this reminiscence, and I shouldn't dwell. They say it's not good to linger in the past, but then... they haven't been swapping emails with her. They don't know what she feels, and smells, and tastes like. They haven't heard her moan so fuck them all.
I've got the rest of my life to listen them. I don't have too right now and they've been wrong as much as they've ever been right, so I dive into the past. I grab hold of the memory and kick it into reverse; let it seduce me with the fragile promise of what's to come.
She's not alone on the bed anymore and she's not on her back.
She's on her side and I'm there too. We're facing each other and our tongues are slowly circling; caught in that lingering kiss that sometimes comes after sex. She's still shuddering a bit, her pleasure is still making its way through her in skin-soft waves. I like this place, its comforting, but it's not why I'm here so I back the vision up further, then let it do what it will; let it have its way with me... and it does.
I'm on my back now. Her breath is hot on my neck and her breasts are soft on my chest. She's half kneeling half lying on me and she's so tight that way that I can hardly stand it. We're moving slow against each other and we're saying things that turn the walls from white, to hot pink, to cherry red. She's sliding me deep and I'm holding her hard. I like the feel of her ass - hot against my hands - I like the illusion of control.
She's moving faster now. She's taking me deeper. We're not kissing because we need to breath. We need to let our pleasure slip out between our lips to echo off the blushing walls. We're so damned close but neither one of us wants to go there just yet. It's too good to let go. It's too soon to let so many years of close calls come to an end, but the end comes regardless.
She shudders then bucks and I'm caught up in the wave like a flea in a tsunami. I'm throbbing deep inside her quivering center and mixing low moans with her high pitched cries. We've lost ourselves. Sentience has been pushed aside by the detonation effects of several million nerve ending firing off at once, and I'm thinking I know how God feels when an entire galaxy goes Super Nova.
She gasps long then slides off, and then I'm not there anymore. I'm tired and nervous. I'm coming out of the airport terminal, and she's there waiting.
It's been years since we've seen each other. It's been lifetimes since our fumbling inexperienced adventures; those hot night of clumsy hands and awkward kisses. I'm hoping the flight hasn't been a mistake. I'm wondering if the electricity is still there, and then we're done our hello's, and we kiss quick, and I feel that spark.
Yeah, this isn't such a bad place to visit every once in awhile. It's warm and wet and full of promise. It's the past but it might be the future too. She's single again, and her flight lands in a little over a month. She'll float into my bed like the ghost of a misplaced fantasy and we'll make new memories.
Here's to looking forward to the past.
User Reviews
Submitted by ruthless (user info) at 2005-12-22 18:38:05 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Love it!
Submitted by miss_tila (user info) at 2005-11-16 15:24:43 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I never thought I could get a tickel in my pants from literature.
Submitted by munkeypants (user info) at 2005-11-15 21:30:37 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Wow. Raw passion.
Submitted by zoobie2000 (user info) at 2005-11-15 10:10:48 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
meh
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2005-11-15 08:43:35 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by LadyPlural (user info) at 2005-11-14 23:16:59 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
<ejaculates>
What?
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2005-11-14 22:13:23 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
You have to type with TWO hands Snarky.
This, while good, just didn't do it for me. Maybe I'm just too old and jaded.
Submitted by simple_catalyst (user info) at 2005-11-14 22:06:55 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
*sigh*
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2005-11-14 21:08:31 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2005-11-14 20:29:40 (#)
Ranking: 0
Is this another story about when you saw your mom naked in your bed?
I hope not.
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How do you know my mom isn't smoking hot?
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2005-11-14 20:29:40 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Is this another story about when you saw your mom naked in your bed?
I hope not.
Submitted by NerfHerder (user info) at 2005-11-14 20:16:14 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Couple of grammatical errors, but I suppose they shall be overlooked for quality, yes?
Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2005-11-14 18:55:04 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Really good. Similar experience myself - perhaps something for another day...
Submitted by Pentameter (user info) at 2005-11-14 18:27:08 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
"We're moving slow against each other and we're saying things that turn the walls from white, to hot pink, to cherry red."
Submitted by thecaes (user info) at 2005-11-14 18:15:25 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Oh-kay, that was hot. And eloquent.
Submitted by erinly (user info) at 2005-11-14 18:14:37 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by morontian (user info) at 2005-11-14 17:58:30 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Stand
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I don't
Submitted by The_Yellow_Dart (user info) at 2005-11-14 17:31:46 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Cool, really good.
I think it's safe to say she'll be looking forward to a lil' some-thing-some-thing, know-what I mean?
He-asked-him-knowingly; know-what I mean?
Say no more, say no more. Nudge-nudge, wink-wink.
So you've uh, you've, done it. With a lady?
"why yes."
What's it like?
Submitted by wookie (user info) at 2005-11-14 17:27:40 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2005-11-14 17:07:13 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Yeah I wrote it.
I wrote it in an email for her.
Submitted by The_Yellow_Dart (user info) at 2005-11-14 17:06:06 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
What was your copy and paste comment about?
You did write this right?
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2005-11-14 17:04:49 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Ok,
At least the title is spelled right.