think twice (579 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: -0.75 on 15 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by missedthepointagain.at.gmail.com (View user info) at 2005-11-27 07:23:49 EST
JESSICA'S LETTER - THINK TWICE.
Think you can stop me?
Think again.
You think your judgement carries weight with me?
Think again.
Think you know what you are dealing with?
I doubt it.
What made you think I needed you?
Did you see me with my hand up?
Did I ask for your help?
Ask yourself these questions all the while
remembering....
that I am nothing like you.
I have learnt to regulate my emotions better than you could
even dream of understanding your own
Wrong?
Should I remind you that you are still reading this?
If I feel it
It's because I choose to.
If I feel it
It's feeding me
Understand me?
Not even close.
Why?
The same mistake as everyone who came before you,
The assumption that I care.
You'll take your place among them soon enough.
Should I remind you?
My pain
My choice
What breaks you makes me stronger.
The difference between you and I?
There is nothing you have that I cannot live without
There is nothing irreplaceable in my life.
My loss?
No...
My luxury
My self sufficiency.
I chose the path that I am on,
Can you comprehend that?
Didn't think so.
It was my choice.
Made with nothing more than my own interests at heart
Because whether you like it or not
This is who I am
What made you think I needed rescuing?
I live day to day with myself
I can co exist with all of my guilt
I hold it; I own it and I can use it.
I will eat up anything you dish out and then some.
Unlike you,
I know what to do with it
The difference between you and I?
I can use the type of pain that brings you undone.
Why do I let these situations arise?
Because your frustration and distain feeds me.
And you never fail to deliver.
My gift of self preservation is stronger than anything you could imagine.
Remember this,
What you know about me, is what I have chosen to show you.
I have been cut loose from more than you have ever held
There is only room for one at the helm here Jack
And that's me
User Reviews
Submitted by thecaes (user info) at 2006-02-09 07:47:18 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Spam (user info) at 2005-12-14 23:13:33 (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 to cancel the negativity of the herd, but in all honestly mate, I would score this 0.
Submitted by Spam (user info) at 2005-12-14 23:39:57 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by crazyaardvark (user info) at 2005-12-14 23:21:03 (#)
Ranking: -2
Fuck poetry
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See?
Submitted by crazyaardvark (user info) at 2005-12-14 23:21:03 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Fuck poetry
Submitted by Spam (user info) at 2005-12-14 23:14:28 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
anyway, how you doing?
Submitted by Spam (user info) at 2005-12-14 23:13:33 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
this is exactly what I was talking about when I told you what over-fragmentation does to a piece of writing. See how Uber quickly lost intrest and branded this EMO immediately? That's because this looks and reads like song lyrics, not something that goes down to well on this site (or in general for that matter). People want meat - long lines of florid description - at worst they want a story they can understand.
+2 to cancel the negativity of the herd, but in all honestly mate, I would score this 0.
Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2005-11-28 07:20:45 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
My you're mysterious. I bet you're different from all the other white-faced, black-haired, pierced, future Supercuts almost-employees-of-the-week at your high school.
Submitted by zoobie2000 (user info) at 2005-11-28 07:17:47 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
yawn
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2005-11-27 23:52:12 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
disguise your blog better.
sorry.
Submitted by FilthyAssistant (user info) at 2005-11-27 15:40:31 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
There really is no need for Jessica to be so cut up - I'm sure Nick will give her a tidy settlement from the sale of the mansion.
Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2005-11-27 15:35:08 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
ohnoes!!!1!!
Submitted by WookieSuave (user info) at 2005-11-27 15:10:33 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
If she was THAT much stronger? Couldn't she just IGNORE the guy?
Boo-urns
Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2005-11-27 11:53:42 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by j0andre1 (user info) at 2005-11-27 11:18:23 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
That's deep man.
Although maybe next time you get some emo letter from girl with boobs the size of golfballs you could do the world a favor and burn it.
Submitted by missedthepoint (user info) at 2005-11-27 07:38:22 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
the diference between you and her...
zero...
equally self involved fuckouts
congratulations asshat...
Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2005-11-27 07:32:57 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
"The difference between you and ME."
This whole thing reeked of Emo crap.