Putting Women on a Pedestal (1132 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: -1.41 on 16 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Paul Blakeford <paulblakeford1.at.yahoo.com> (View user info) at 2005-12-28 17:52:08 EST
Here's a poem I wrote.
Putting Women on a Pedestal
With all that he has lost
He still won't stop
He keeps putting women on a pedastal
Divorce with limited visitation
Attempted suicide
Brutal child support payments, humiliation
A loss of masculine pride
With all the pain he has
He just won't stop
Putting women on a pedestal
Adultery, abuse
Abandoment, neglect
Using and abusing him through misuse
Criminal disrespect
Guys think that I'm mistaken
When I tell them to make a switch
She may want to be grabbed and shaken
Or at least called a bitch
Which could very well be because
She may be a masochist
With all the pain that men feel
We just won't stop
Putting women on a pedestal
What does that say about us?
Paul
paulblakeford.4t.com
User Reviews
Submitted by livEvil (user info) at 2006-10-04 16:57:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I like this one too.
I Think your poems would come across better spoken than written.
Submitted by paulblakeford (user info) at 2005-12-29 10:44:20 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
You can not like the thing, but don't accuse me of plagiarism or of recommending the gay lifestyle. Well, if you read gay into it, that's your call, but I don't need to rip off anything from anybody.
Submitted by paulblakeford (user info) at 2005-12-29 10:42:31 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Rondo_Mondo (user info) at 2005-12-29 10:01:09 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
You should get on the pedestal.
With a noose around your neck...and then maybe jump off.
Stupid cockslobber.
Submitted by el_em_en_oh (user info) at 2005-12-29 08:45:18 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by Magic_Monkey (user info) at 2005-12-29 03:10:16 (#)
Ranking: -2
Damm , i love me some O-mon !!
Submitted by Magic_Monkey (user info) at 2005-12-29 03:10:16 EST (#)
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Damm , i love me some O-mon !!
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2005-12-29 00:38:28 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Here's a poem I wrote.
Cutting Women on a Pedestal
With all the blood she lost
He still won't stop
He keeps cutting women on a pedestal
Slashes with limited rotation
Preempted homicide
Brutal genital slices, mutilation
A loss of feminine pride
With all the pain she has
He just won't stop
Cutting women on a pedestal
Excised eyes, lips, abuse
Amputation, regret
Killing, dismembering her through misuse
Criminal disrespect
Guys think that I'm psychotic
When I tell them to grab a knife
But they don't know that it's erotic
To end and take a life
Which could very well be because
I may be a sadist
With all the pain the women feel
He just won't stop
Cutting women on a pedestal
What does that say about us?
Fisto Caliente
goodiegoodiegumdropsblowmeonabus.com
Submitted by jagmcmanus (user info) at 2005-12-29 00:37:18 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
shit.
Submitted by psychabillyjean (user info) at 2005-12-28 23:58:40 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Plagiarized from 'Flowers for Algernon'. Yay! Charley discovered girls and wrote a poem!
Submitted by Siren (user info) at 2005-12-28 23:43:43 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
What is this shit?
Submitted by pandora (user info) at 2005-12-28 23:36:53 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Tell him to make a switch? Do you really think gay people have it any better? Please, honey. They go through all the same shit as heteros. In fact, the level of domestic violence in gay and lesbian couples is higher than in straight couples. This has even been reported in gay and lesbian news outlets.
The whole "ditch the bitch, make the switch" line is just propaganda. Having been gay, and now bi, I can tell you that both groups are full of shit, because people are fucked up in ways that are universal.
Submitted by Adamdidit2u (user info) at 2005-12-28 20:13:48 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by Feijuada (user info) at 2005-12-28 19:49:41 (#)
Ranking: -2
Auto poetry -2.
POR FUCKING SUPESTO
Submitted by Feijuada (user info) at 2005-12-28 19:49:41 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Auto poetry -2.
Submitted by Clark_Kent (user info) at 2005-12-28 18:49:57 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I totally agree. Same thing happened here http://www.ubersite.com/m/81643
Submitted by Jeanneee (user info) at 2005-12-28 18:27:59 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
crap
Submitted by Chroniclysm (user info) at 2005-12-28 18:19:31 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Right where they belong.
Women are fucking crazy...but you'd have to be a boatload crazier to stop worshipping them.