Hit it, can't quit it (654 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: -0.24 on 14 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Isaac Zeccs (View user info) at 2006-01-23 05:24:52 EST
I hit a wall when i hit mid-life,
When the weekend hit, i would hit the pipe,
Then hit the bars when the clock hit "8",
Where i'd hit on girls all night, trying to hit the hay.
And one night i hit the right notes,
And got hit on back. We hit it off,
She said "let's hit the sack."
I wanted to hit it, so we hit the road,
and i hit the gas, and as it would go,
when we hit that corner, i hit the brakes,
But we hit the guardrail, and she hit the windshield,
as we hit that lake, and sank.
Now i cant hit the bottle, because of memories that hit
of when i hit that throttle. And when it hits me lips,
Alcohol hits me hard, pain hits my bloodstream,
My brain is hit with scars.
When that night hits my concience, my heart is hit by guilt,
Because im not hit with memories, Of hitting silt.
You see, when we hit the water, i hit the seatbelt,
But she hit her head, and when i hit the surface,
The car hit lakebottom, and when i hit the shore,
She was dead.
-Isaac Zeccs
User Reviews
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2008-02-04 05:06:22 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Whatever happened to Mr Zeccs?
Submitted by Unabonger (user info) at 2006-06-08 22:01:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
this was difficult to read and probably really difficult to hear.
Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2006-06-08 21:43:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I don't give a shit if he's from Britain, Washington, or Bumfuck, Egypt.
This was good stuff.
Are you sure you are not Teddy Kennedy??
Water, car wreck, etc. . .
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2006-06-08 21:02:42 EDT (#)
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c1ndy, what makes you think Isaac is British?
He's washingtonian.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2006-06-07 15:55:46 EDT (#)
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This makes Orgasmo-trons' stuff read like....well...ummm..
...his stuff STILL blows but this is absolute horseshit.
Submitted by c1ndy (user info) at 2006-06-07 15:47:25 EDT (#)
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don't British people say windscreen not windshield?
Submitted by Anansie (user info) at 2006-01-23 13:08:22 EST (#)
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I'm glad you're back, but this didn't do much for me.
Sorry.
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2006-01-23 11:10:59 EST (#)
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ISAAC!
Where hath thou been?
I hope you are celebrating appropriately for your home state's victory.
email me if you like
rockfishrock.at.rock.com
Oh shit, I'm going to be late for class..
.must run!
Submitted by simple_catalyst (user info) at 2006-01-23 09:16:24 EST (#)
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needs a catchy chorus.
Submitted by Acarnis (user info) at 2006-01-23 08:34:53 EST (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by zoobie2000 (user info) at 2006-01-23 07:55:57 EST (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by Zeccs (user info) at 2006-01-23 05:49:07 EST (#)
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Nah, it probably sucks anyway.
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2006-01-23 05:29:42 EST (#)
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This is all Orgasmatrons fault.
Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2006-01-23 05:29:36 EST (#)
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I suspect you are British. Read my most recent post of politics.