Vindicated (481 hits)
Category: NoneRating: -1.5 on 16 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by HawthorneHeights (View user info) at 2006-01-31 09:58:03 EST
The atmosphere was perfect he thought, a cloudless summer night during a blue moon. He sat on the dilapidated steel chair in his backyard staring at the lake, except on this night, it vaguely looked like the lake was staring at him. In that instant he could feel the goose flesh crawl up his arm and around his back up through his spine. He realized his sweat was arctic. His left forefinger pushed down.
The hammer pushed back and the spring pushed downward which sounded like the shrill cry of a hawk crashing down on its prey. As he stared down the dark eye of impending doom he heard the metallic "clunk" as the next death bringer was brought into a perfect plight.
He felt the anterior portion of his forefinger grace the unbreakable steel. In that instant he heard the screeching hawk again, and the hammer came down like the reverberation of a cannon ball. In that direct moment, the hammer lays waste the propellant, sending the death bringer on its inevitable path of deliverance. The burning gas left an inconceivable odor that would welcome any spectator he met thereafter.
The bullet exited the barrel.
The bullet that would deliver me home.
User Reviews
Submitted by Iago (user info) at 2006-02-06 03:52:52 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Nah, your getting "emo thread automatic -2DIE"
Not THAT bad. Really its a 0.5+, but not 0, so +1 for u
Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2006-02-06 03:46:57 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
awful
Submitted by Flack (user info) at 2006-01-31 20:23:57 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
shitty emo bands sound better dead
Submitted by Foolproof (user info) at 2006-01-31 14:56:34 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
DOESN'T need more Emo.
Submitted by r0fl (user info) at 2006-01-31 13:04:57 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Instead of a bullet, you should have used your studded belt or the mismatching shoelaces to your allstars. They're would be less blood, but at least you'll finally get some attention at the open casket funeral.
At least in your deathbox you probably won't look so pale.
Oh yeah, -2Die teh Emo.
Submitted by PokeyPecker (user info) at 2006-01-31 12:00:40 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
I once pretended that a lime was giving me a blowjob. It stung like hell so I slapped it, as I would a bitch who used too much teeth.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-01-31 11:54:40 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
I hope, unlike Bush, you have an exit strategy.
I'd suggest you put it into action now.
Submitted by sexualchocolate1984 (user info) at 2006-01-31 11:26:16 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Do it! Please!
Submitted by Fungah (user info) at 2006-01-31 11:20:18 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
THIS IS BETWEEN ME, THIS BLADE, AND MY HEART YOU BASTARD. THAT'S IT.
Submitted by SamsArmy (user info) at 2006-01-31 11:16:41 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
I only had to read the username and the title to know this is Emo garbage. Alright, what happens in the story? Does some white suburbanite who doesn't know the meaning of the word "problem" cut themselves because they lost their favorite pair of black rimmed glasses? Am I getting close? Fuck it, it's all the same anyway.
Back to MySpace you go, Dickbag.
Submitted by dove666 (user info) at 2006-01-31 10:52:27 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
DO IT!
Submitted by Mr_T (user info) at 2006-01-31 10:48:03 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Shut up foo'!
Submitted by Nellypaal (user info) at 2006-01-31 10:38:08 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
What he said
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Submitted by WildcatMcGee (user info) at 2006-01-31 10:23:45 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
what the ghey emo?
Submitted by FallenZer0 (user info) at 2006-01-31 10:09:33 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
hawthorne heights sucks.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-01-31 10:05:31 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
But whom killed himself and why?