FUPA: Round 1, The Riddle (492 hits)
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Submitted by MyTeeOne <My_Tee_One.at.hotmail.com> (View user info) at 2006-03-16 13:18:45 EST
First, pictures of my ugly ass and now bad poetry. Just my way of saying "I feel like committing Uber suicide this week".
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The Riddle
The song, always left unsung
The words, always left unspoken
The thoughts, always left unshared
The heart, always left broken
Desire, another word for passion
Love, another word for fantasy
Dreams, another word for wishes
Fool, another word for me
The song sings of desires
And passions left untold
The words tell of love
A fantasy ever so bold
The thoughts turn to dreams
Wishes kept hidden inside
The heart belongs to a fool
Who just told how it died
User Reviews
Submitted by Coleslaw_Murphy (user info) at 2006-03-22 18:34:08 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
This wasn't bad poetry. As for the pictures of your ugly ass, well, I'll just say I haven't seen them.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-03-21 19:41:46 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Simple and sad. I like it.
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2006-03-20 15:41:22 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
this doesn't deserve a negative rating.
Submitted by Sphagnum (user info) at 2006-03-20 13:22:10 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
I've decided that I hate poetry.
Submitted by Stagger_Lee (user info) at 2006-03-16 19:26:57 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Yeah. Worth reading for sure.
Submitted by Waxinmyeye (user info) at 2006-03-16 19:26:08 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
better poems out there
Submitted by simple_catalyst (user info) at 2006-03-16 19:14:54 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by simple_catalyst (user info) at 2006-03-16 19:14:45 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
"so shoot me down"
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2006-03-16 15:54:00 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Sorry, this really didn't do much for me. But it was worth reading.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-03-16 14:23:18 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Efficient, but brief.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-03-16 14:22:42 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Brief, but efficient.
Submitted by Jacobt26 (user info) at 2006-03-16 13:42:06 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2006-03-16 13:21:26 (#)
Ranking: -2
This contest is a really bad idea...
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2006-03-16 13:21:26 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
I thought this post might be about Frank Gorshin.
This contest is a really bad idea...
Submitted by HighVoltage900 (user info) at 2006-03-16 13:21:07 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
The answer to the riddle is Skirt Steak.
I'll take the reward in cash please.