Thoughts (368 hits)
Category: Quotes & StoriesLabels: Fictional
Rating: 0 on 9 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Hourman (View user info) at 2006-03-25 11:15:40 EST
He stumbled down the street meandering his way through the crowd, their voice's screaming, laughing, joking and talking. He clutched the side of his head, the pulsating temple felt like it was going to burst through the skin and leave him bloodied on the floor.
He looked at the people wanting to stop the noise. Stop the voices.
He could hear all of it. Their thoughts, their desires, their private conversations...everything that came into their mind or out of their mouths. The unforgiving syllables were so vivid he could almost taste them.
He darted down an alley and ran as fast as he could until he found solitude. The voices were gone. A dog came swaggering over to him and instantly the man bent down and fed the mangy animal.
He stood up, he could hear them. Someone was coming. Someone bad. The dog ran away as the approaching footsteps became louder. The man he heard turned the corner and stared at him.
'Hey buddy, you dropped your book.'
He just stared at the man. He knew he wasn't there to return this book. He didn't even own a book, let alone be careless enough to drop one.
'Buddy you hear me? You dropped your freaking book? Here take it.'
The man approached and his outstretched tattooed hand protruding from the long rain coat.
He took a step back and said,
'Please keep it.' The words came out so fast he didn't even know he said it, 'please don't come closer. Please.'
'Why the hell not? I'm giving you your book' as the man moved forward to hand the book over he almost fell trying to keep away from the intruder. He man looked at him and as if by instinct lunged for him. The intruder was quickly over powered and he stood over this man and as the mans thoughts poured into him he raised his heavy boots and uttered,
'I'm sorry, I told you to stay back.'
The crunch of boot connecting to bone was sickening. He had done it before. He would do it again. The dog came over and started to lap up the blood from the intruders face. He hadn't eaten in days, now both of them would eat. They would eat because they had to. If he was caught he would be sent to prison. Lots of people in prison, lots of thoughts, to many thoughts for him to handle all at once. One day he would stop all the voices, but not today. Not here and not now.
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Submitted by darko (user info) at 2006-07-06 07:18:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2006-07-05 09:54:26 (#)
Ranking: 2
I am going to rate every one of your posts with a +2 without reading them.
Submitted by georgemichael (user info) at 2006-05-26 07:25:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
why not?
Submitted by RePet (user info) at 2006-03-26 04:30:06 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
Paragraphs, man.
It's like driving into a brick wall of text.
Submitted by Sphagnum (user info) at 2006-03-25 14:21:27 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
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Submitted by simple_catalyst (user info) at 2006-03-25 13:37:34 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
Submitted by sicosemen (user info) at 2006-03-25 12:15:14 (#)
Ranking: -2
There's this button right next to your apostrophe button labled "enter". Below it is the "shift" key and I know you KNOW this man. Above it is the "close bracket" key. Where in the fuck is the "enter" key again. You suck at life.
My suggestion:
Straight razor suicide kit for dummies.
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That is what the key looks like you asshole. If after 5 posts you can't get this right, why are you still posting?
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i concure.
Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2006-03-25 12:45:43 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-03-25 12:33:50 (#)
Ranking: 1
Better formatting and proofreading might have made this a +2.
Your story is good so far, I'd like to read more.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-03-25 12:33:50 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Better formatting and proofreading might have made this a +2.
Your story is good so far, I'd like to read more.
Submitted by sicosemen (user info) at 2006-03-25 12:17:01 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
That didn't work out the way I planned that doesn't mean you get sympathy for being a worthless cessation to someone's gene pool. Castrate yourself for the humanity of tomorrow.
Que Michael Jackson's "We are the children"
Submitted by sicosemen (user info) at 2006-03-25 12:15:14 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
There's this button right next to your apostrophe button labled "enter". Below it is the "shift" key and I know you KNOW this man. Above it is the "close bracket" key. Where in the fuck is the "enter" key again. You suck at life.
My suggestion:
Straight razor suicide kit for dummies.
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That is what the key looks like you asshole. If after 5 posts you can't get this right, why are you still posting?