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FUPA Round 3: Cosmicosm (1378 hits)

Category: General

Rating: 0.85 on 16 reviews (Rate this item) (V)

Submitted by JMG114 (View user info) at 2006-04-03 08:26:27 EDT

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Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2006-04-05 16:31:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1

Evening it out.

Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2006-04-05 16:31:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2

I enjoyed this. It flowed very nicely from one stanza to the next, the idea of the post was beautiful to me.

My biggest complaint is that I wish you had done more with it maybe. I could have seen this as being something much bigger than what you did with it.

Normally an easy +2, but I this is a comp and I liked Buubbas piece better.

1.5

Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-04-05 16:16:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1

I can't decide if it was the subject, the form or something else, but I couldn't really get into this. I read it and finished and thought "hmm." It's written well, however, and you do a great job looping it all back to the beginning in a relatively short amount of time.

Submitted by cshape (user info) at 2006-04-05 04:42:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1

cliche but better than most.

Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2006-04-04 09:55:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1

I *still* have trouble reading your poems with the block spacing.

Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-04-03 20:42:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1

I actually enjoyed your other FUPA entries more. This didn't grab me, per se, but it was pleasantly poetic.

Submitted by ubetidid (user info) at 2006-04-03 12:18:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2

No Comment

Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2006-04-03 12:14:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2

I can't even give the font a +1 anymore.

Submitted by simple_catalyst (user info) at 2006-04-03 10:27:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1

No Comment

Submitted by w_t_a_y_s_t_r_m (user info) at 2006-04-03 09:26:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2

Very cool

Submitted by Grimm (user info) at 2006-04-03 09:17:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2

No Comment

Submitted by Axolotl (user info) at 2006-04-03 08:50:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1

.66+

Submitted by Axolotl (user info) at 2006-04-03 08:49:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1

Point...

Submitted by Axolotl (user info) at 2006-04-03 08:49:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0

Hmmm...

Submitted by Stagger_Lee (user info) at 2006-04-03 08:42:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1

It was a bit cliched, but fuck, it was alright.

Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2006-04-03 08:32:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1

Felt this was a bit cliched.