Revenge (548 hits)
Category: NoneRating: 1.53 on 13 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Saffron (View user info) at 2006-04-03 17:39:52 EDT
She can hear them; two sets of night sound one distinctly new and feminine. The smell of stale breath and sex weight the air. She creeps closer to the pile under the sheets; tentative steps and stealth. A car passes outside throwing long shadows up the wall. She freezes in place and waits for hey eyes to readjust to the dark. He stirs.
She slips back through the bedroom door, the hair on her neck bristling from the adrenaline of shock. She circles the apartment, impatient with him, with her unwillingness to act and with her fear of repercussion. He will be angry. He deserves it. He brought HER to their bed, SHE is in her spot, enveloped in his warmth, feeing his touch. It isn't right. He needs to be reminded. He needs to be reminded that she was here first. She will not be ignored. She won't.
She paces, silent and angry, the shock subsiding to the rage. How best assuage her anger, her growing need for revenge ? How best to make her point succinct, a potent, singular act of righteous retribution ? This isn't a slight, an omission of remembrance, it is betrayal. Betrayal has consequences.
It's time. Enough pussyfooting around. She slips back through the bedroom door, nearly annoyed that he hasn't sensed her, hasn't pulled the thought of her into his dreams and come to find her. How quickly they forget the ones they claim to love. How quickly his loyalties turned. She was his love this morning and now she is forgotten. Replaced.
She approaches the bed defiantly, purposed. She bounds onto the bed, a single sound escapes her lips, full of quavering hurt and rage, a plea for attention, to be returned to her rightful spot beside him, to be loved by him once again in the darkness.
She smashes his nose with her tail, "Meow !". He'd find the bulk of her revenge in his shoes soon enough.
User Reviews
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2006-08-10 17:04:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2006-04-05 11:51:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2006-04-03 17:57:22 (#)
Ranking: 0
meh
I thought this was pretty good, surprised to see that from the pussy loving ghola.
Submitted by MistressFist (user info) at 2006-04-04 12:41:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
fucking exactly.
Submitted by munkeypants (user info) at 2006-04-04 12:37:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
hahahaha
awwwwwwww
Sounds exactly like my kitty Gizmo, aka DimDim, aka Dimo, aka, psspss
Submitted by v8lover (user info) at 2006-04-04 11:41:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Very good!
Submitted by angel_2k01 (user info) at 2006-04-04 05:21:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
ha ha - unexpected!
Submitted by MrSparkle847 (user info) at 2006-04-03 23:42:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Our cat sometimes does this without provocation.
Submitted by Stagger_Lee (user info) at 2006-04-03 23:30:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Made me smile.
Submitted by simple_catalyst (user info) at 2006-04-03 21:52:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2006-04-03 18:32:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
There are some major fuckups in sentence structure etc that knocked this down a notch.
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2006-04-03 17:57:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
meh
Submitted by awesome_face (user info) at 2006-04-03 17:56:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
BWAHAHAHAHAH.
My cat was tapping my balls once when I was sleeping. I esploded in my pants.
Submitted by COMountain (user info) at 2006-04-03 17:55:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
I was going to "-2 it's been done to death"...
+2 for cat crap and twist.
-1 'cause it ain't no 2.