good entions PART 3 & END (790 hits)
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Submitted by georgemichael (View user info) at 2006-04-11 19:35:31 EDT
the final in this series,will henry be set free to his lover?
http://www.ubersite.com/m/86474 part 2
http://www.ubersite.com/m/86435 part 1
http://www.ubersite.com/m/86408 another story you might like also
remember the last thing that hapened was the warden is going to start a fake hanging
PART 3
dead man walking, we got a dead man walking here yelled out the guards
SCENE - JAIL WORKERS TAKE HENRY TO THE HANGING ROOM WHERE PRISONERS WATCH FOR ENTERTAINMENT
'Please don't kill me I didn't do this - pastor you told me I would not die, do something do something I am scared and want to live'
Said Henry,
In the preparation for the hanging the pastor had not told Henry of the plan,
'pssst don't worry, when the rope comes down it will be loose you might get hurt but not die it is worth don't worry my son'
The pastor told this to Henry and took his seat, before Henry was hung the warden got up and said the following speech -
'Fellow inmates - this is the worst murderer ever he is also the smartest and will go down in history as the butcher of the south may he go to hell'
The preacher looked over at Jim Flanagn, who was red in the face he thought he was the meanest nd smartest murderer why - he had even committed that murder and now he wanted to tell everyone. Little did he know that is just what the pastor wanted...
CRACK! The rope swung down and Henry was floating to and fro
'damn pastor damn pastor better come good on his promise' he thought as he struggled for breath
Just then Jim Flanagn got up and yelled -
'Fools it was me! I carved that miss daisy up and he got the blame you all think he is smart? I did the crime and plenty other too I am the butcher of the south'
'Cut him down boys quick'
They all rushed to save Henry, but he was not breathing, the warden could not tell the jail workers what he had planned as Jim might small a rat so they had tied the noose too tight.
The pastor went to work on Henry
'Breathe man Breathe!'
Henry was in limbo, he saw a bright light and an angel came from no where - it was... could it be... miss Daisy!
'Henry you always loved me and you took the blame for killing me and even then your love grew stronger, you can live with me here or go back to Earth. I don't care if you love someone else because I will always be around and we will be together one day'
she spoke like the voice of an angel.
Henry felt warm for the first time ever, but he knew he had to go back and look after his mother since his dad had passed away,
'I will go back but I will never love anyone like the way I loved you, I'll see you when I die from natural causes goodbye... goodbye... goodbye'
'He is coming around look he is alive and Jim flanagn will be hanged tomorrow instead good work pastor and Henry you can go home now back to your old job'
said the warden.
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HENRY did get his old job back and was promoted, his boss was never angry anymore and he learnt the lesson that you should never judge a book by its cover. Henrys parents were also happy to have there boy back.
Henry stayed truthful to Miss Daisy and concentrated on work all the time - he even started harvesting roses which were her favourite flower, he stayed in the fields all year round...
Except for one day a year...
One day a year he would go to the riverbed, and place a single red rose, right next to where his knife would drop and shed a tear.
One tear a year, and then he would get back to work, a lonely man who couldn't wait to see his angel again.
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Submitted by locksly (user info) at 2009-08-01 01:44:20 EDT (#)
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Submitted by 8track (user info) at 2009-07-19 11:47:42 EDT (#)
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I swear...as dumb as this is...the last part is emotionally touching.
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It could have been funnier, I don't remember it ending that gay. But Georgemichael can always bring a tear
Submitted by 8track (user info) at 2009-07-19 11:47:42 EDT (#)
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I swear...as dumb as this is...the last part is emotionally touching.
Submitted by 8track (user info) at 2009-01-18 07:04:18 EST (#)
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I'll see you when I die from natural causes
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Now i know I'm tired. The last part of this post choked me up a little.
Submitted by wijormiclat (user info) at 2006-05-18 03:13:27 EDT (#)
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rything you ever wanted to know about georgemichael
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Even with you -2ing everything I've ever written, I am still better than you, because you are a retarded, unintelligible, inbred hick that cannot express himself in the written form without warranting massive ridicule due to poor grammar and simple thoughts. PS I am 15+ beers deep into the night and the fact that I can recognize this is just a testament to the depth of your stupidity...
Submitted by wijormiclat (user info) at 2006-05-18 02:49:54 EDT (#)
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Submitted by georgemichael (user info) at 2006-05-09 10:10:11 (#)
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Submitted by georgemichael (user info) at 2006-05-09 00:56:51 (#)
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stop rating your own shitty gay alters echofag
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Echo and I are completely separate entities you fucking unintelligible faggot.
Submitted by georgemichael (user info) at 2006-04-26 21:00:32 EDT (#)
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Submitted by G-prime (user info) at 2006-04-25 11:17:04 (#)
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georgemichael, do you know what an alter is?
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no
Submitted by G-prime (user info) at 2006-04-25 11:17:04 EDT (#)
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'pssst don't worry, when the rope comes down it will be loose you might get hurt but not die it is worth don't worry my son'
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A loose noose will still hang a man, tight, loose, it really doesn't matter at all as long as it's tied.
georgemichael, do you know what an alter is?
Submitted by Doodles (user info) at 2006-04-20 18:53:22 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by georgemichael (user info) at 2006-04-12 23:04:17 EDT (#)
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why be so hurtful jonnyx, all i tried to do was be your friend
Submitted by Tr4ppedunderice (user info) at 2006-04-12 19:42:16 EDT (#)
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This was awe-inspiring
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2006-04-12 19:36:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by OneCheapGeek (user info) at 2006-04-11 23:40:46 (#)
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Too bad you're an idiot, alter
Submitted by georgemichael (user info) at 2006-04-12 16:38:56 EDT (#)
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my next goal is to get my overll rating in the positives, then i can post my saga based on the love of a good woman in the civil war
Submitted by Method (user info) at 2006-04-12 10:38:01 EDT (#)
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wooooo youre in the positives! Good work!
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2006-04-12 10:26:18 EDT (#)
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Submitted by georgemichael (user info) at 2006-04-11 23:51:43 (#)
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Everything you ever wanted to know about jgreening
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******amount of times he has hurt my feelings: 1000 ********
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Come on....!!! jgreening the big bad warewolf has hurt his feeling 1000 times only. Lets make it 10,000.
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2006-04-12 10:25:23 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2006-04-12 10:25:10 EDT (#)
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Share.
Submitted by georgemichael (user info) at 2006-04-12 09:47:01 EDT (#)
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-0.02 is close enough to 0.00
i have decided to post my next work
Submitted by Tr4ppedunderice (user info) at 2006-04-12 09:42:01 EDT (#)
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hopefully this will help a bit, I can't wait for more of your fabulous literature!
Submitted by congo (user info) at 2006-04-12 09:39:48 EDT (#)
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Anxiously
Looking forward
To your next
Entry. I'm sure it'll be a fantastic
Read.
Submitted by georgemichael (user info) at 2006-04-12 08:20:55 EDT (#)
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since this post has not got the desired ranking of 0.00 or more i don't know if i will share my latest work
Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2006-04-12 04:02:35 EDT (#)
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I'm not in a good mood today, and this isn't helping
Submitted by Serious_Melvin (user info) at 2006-04-12 02:56:38 EDT (#)
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OF COURSE it's an alter you fucking retards. Good work, georgemichael, this was a great series. The reviews made it priceless.
Submitted by erosion_rules (user info) at 2006-04-12 02:27:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This one had the best writing of your series. It was a tad cliche for my tastes, but to each his own. Well done.
And spelling and grammar...it's not everything, but once you start getting really into your writing, it'll come naturally, so don't worry too much, just a little.
Submitted by wetyourself (user info) at 2006-04-12 02:03:26 EDT (#)
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+2 to see if you actually quit regurgitating overdone movie ideas in a poorly written, sadly unoriginal way. Also, I like the reviews, so keep on writing, princess.
Oh yeah, and even though you've stopped explaining things in parenthetical asides, you still have the bad habit of thinking your reader is as retarded as you are. After stating that Henry can't sleep because he has so much on his mind, you don't have to explain why Jim sleeps easy, it's obvious. This is, only advice if you are, infact, not an alter. If you are, then kudos to you because this is the best shitty writing I've ever seen. I don't even think real noobs are this noobtastic.
Submitted by Chroniclysm (user info) at 2006-04-12 01:54:06 EDT (#)
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Super.
Submitted by Sphagnum (user info) at 2006-04-12 00:18:34 EDT (#)
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Submitted by georgemichael (user info) at 2006-04-11 23:33:02 (#)
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ATTENTIN JGREENING
read between the lines
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you are not very nice
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This is the funniest review ever.
Submitted by georgemichael (user info) at 2006-04-11 23:51:43 EDT (#)
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amount of times he has hurt my feelings: 1000
Submitted by OneCheapGeek (user info) at 2006-04-11 23:40:46 EDT (#)
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Too bad you're an idiot, alter
Submitted by OneCheapGeek (user info) at 2006-04-11 23:40:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Submitted by georgemichael (user info) at 2006-04-11 23:33:02 (#)
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ATTENTIN JGREENING
read between the lines
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you are not very nice
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Only a -1 because this CRACKED ME UP.
Submitted by georgemichael (user info) at 2006-04-11 23:33:02 EDT (#)
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ATTENTIN JGREENING
read between the lines
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you are not very nice
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Submitted by Stagger_Lee (user info) at 2006-04-11 23:29:44 EDT (#)
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http://www.ubersite.com/l/uberbook
Everything in here is why you suck.
Alter.
Submitted by jgreening (user info) at 2006-04-11 23:13:46 EDT (#)
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Yeah.
He doesn't like your writing for the reasons you think he does...
Submitted by georgemichael (user info) at 2006-04-11 22:34:38 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Method (user info) at 2006-04-11 19:47:10 (#)
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GIVE THIS MAN A PULITZER, THIS IS THE FINEST STORY I HAVE EVER LAID MY EYES ON
THE UPS
THE DOWNS
THE HIGHS
THE LOWS
GOOSE BUMPS, I TELL YOU
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more people should agree with this person. if I can get my rating to 0.00 or higher I will post my next story. you will not be dissapointed.
Submitted by EntityErased (user info) at 2006-04-11 22:00:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
"I'll see you when I die from natural causes goodbye... goodbye... goodbye"
pfffffft
hahahahahahahahahaha!
This was great, but I enjoyed part 1 and part 2 more.
Submitted by jgreening (user info) at 2006-04-11 21:50:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
YOur rating will never cross into positive territory.
Eventually, even those that +2 you for the humor will stop doing that, and then you're screwed.
Submitted by Wildman (user info) at 2006-04-11 21:34:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
This series was like watching a petri dish go bad.
Submitted by georgemichael (user info) at 2006-04-11 21:33:10 EDT (#)
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if i can get my rating to 0.00 or above then later this week I will post my latest thriller about a boxer . the story is based on cinderala man and snatch kind of
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2006-04-11 21:13:05 EDT (#)
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You're improving.
I only want to kill everyone in the entire Western Hemisphere after reading your posts, now.
Submitted by shitfuck (user info) at 2006-04-11 20:59:19 EDT (#)
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My eyes hurt.
Submitted by Fartman (user info) at 2006-04-11 20:52:26 EDT (#)
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'Im glad that henry got his job back and that his boss is no longer mad and that he will someday be re united with his love Daisy'
said the Fartman
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Submitted by thecaes (user info) at 2006-04-11 20:40:19 EDT (#)
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Sweet mother of God. I wouldn't even know where to begin.
Submitted by Method (user info) at 2006-04-11 20:22:42 EDT (#)
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Sadly, I think that after being here for so fucking long, I have some sort of spidey sense that tingles when one of those homosexuals posts. I think that it would be easy enough though to have a script to alert you when certain people post, especially with the new RSS feeds. I think Bart should do that.
You think IM on here alot? I've noticed that ETS can be on here at any time of day or night at any given time, even though he supposedly has a job. 6 AM, 3 AM, 11 PM, you name it, I've seen him on here.
Submitted by Sphagnum (user info) at 2006-04-11 20:03:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Dude, it was just a question.
I'm in awe at your ability to turn up the moment one of these people post;
Fattony
ETS
Apollo
Caulaincourt
This tool
etc.
I thought you might be running a script that automatically alerts you when one of them posts. If so, I want a copy of it.
Submitted by Method (user info) at 2006-04-11 20:01:10 EDT (#)
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Ummmm, I was on early this morning when you were harassing chemo boy, and I just came on now. I haven't been on here all day, at all. It just seems like that because I show up at weird times, or I do nothing all day at work and harass ETS from 9 - 5.
Aside from my day job, I also have a side job/project that keeps me on the computer pretty much all the time. As lame as that is, uber is my respite from me going bat shit crazy from work.
Seems to me that if you're aware of how much time I spend here, you must spend as much, if not more, time than me. How else could you keep tabs on me like that?
Submitted by Sphagnum (user info) at 2006-04-11 19:56:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I wasn't implying that it was your alter, I was asking if you EVER slept.
You seem to be on 24/7 which is quite a skill.
Submitted by Method (user info) at 2006-04-11 19:52:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
If this was my alter, I wouldn't be +2ing him, I would be keeping quiet. I just find this guy HYSTERICAL. Sorry to disappoint, chief.
Submitted by mockidol (user info) at 2006-04-11 19:49:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
hello again. die.
Submitted by Sphagnum (user info) at 2006-04-11 19:48:54 EDT (#)
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Method, do you EVER sleep?
Submitted by Jacobt26 (user info) at 2006-04-11 19:47:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I gotta -2 this alter.
Submitted by Method (user info) at 2006-04-11 19:47:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
GIVE THIS MAN A PULITZER, THIS IS THE FINEST STORY I HAVE EVER LAID MY EYES ON
THE UPS
THE DOWNS
THE HIGHS
THE LOWS
GOOSE BUMPS, I TELL YOU
Submitted by jgreening (user info) at 2006-04-11 19:45:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
At least this shittiness is over...
Submitted by Zod (user info) at 2006-04-11 19:43:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Haha, I didn't even bother to read this after reading the review below me, but +2 just for that review.
Submitted by Sphagnum (user info) at 2006-04-11 19:37:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Thank christ.
I assume you'll be announcing your retirement soon so that you can follow your dream of being a well-known Astronaut?
Hopefully, someone smart will ejaculate you into the sun, moron.