Dancing for Life (745 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: 0.28 on 7 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Paul Blakeford <paulblakeford1.at.yahoo.com> (View user info) at 2006-04-17 14:39:34 EDT
The moon lifts up the twilight clouds
Behind the walls shadows are found
The rats and roaches prance about
As streetlights wink at them
Feigning like they hate attention
Typical of Nature's beauties
They invite the world to see how
Never caring makes them free
Sucking on a stick of death that
Killed his body's wont for breath
A man drinks deep its dirty heat and
Dulls his icy nerves
Crueler than his nightmares
Reminding him of all he fears
This night reminds him of her
He feels less confused
He loves his lonely languid life
He dances with the vermin
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Submitted by ConorJS (user info) at 2006-04-30 18:43:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
you have rap skills.
Submitted by Sideburns (user info) at 2006-04-23 01:13:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Auto -1 for crappy poetry.
Submitted by georgemichael (user info) at 2006-04-19 01:34:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
really cool
Submitted by Stagger_Lee (user info) at 2006-04-17 23:20:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-04-17 15:47:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
The buffoon lifts up his Monday pants
Inside his underoos magic is made
The crabs and the scabies rut and roll
As with a smile he stares at them
Twin fingers run along his root
Sawing his pubes like a woodsman
Up to the inviting shade of his lip
Their tips jostle his mouth-bristles
Sucking on a clit of pink that
He picked up at the salsa club
The mustache crashes with a dirty beat and
The crabs start a-flyin'
O cruel trick of cunnilingus!
Certainly this was not expected
On this night she enjoyed a tongue
And woke with itchy pelvis
He loves his beddin' spreadin' life
A boatman for the vermin
Submitted by forthewin (user info) at 2006-04-17 15:05:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Wow, poetry that was good. wtf lol omg?
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-04-17 14:40:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
An improvement by leaps and bounds.