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Dancing for Life (748 hits)

Category: Quotes & Stories -> Poetry

Rating: 0.28 on 7 reviews (Rate this item) (V)

Submitted by Paul Blakeford <paulblakeford1.at.yahoo.com> (View user info) at 2006-04-17 14:39:34 EDT

The moon lifts up the twilight clouds
Behind the walls shadows are found
The rats and roaches prance about
As streetlights wink at them

Feigning like they hate attention
Typical of Nature's beauties
They invite the world to see how
Never caring makes them free

Sucking on a stick of death that
Killed his body's wont for breath
A man drinks deep its dirty heat and
Dulls his icy nerves

Crueler than his nightmares
Reminding him of all he fears
This night reminds him of her
He feels less confused

He loves his lonely languid life
He dances with the vermin

User Reviews

Submitted by ConorJS (user info) at 2006-04-30 18:43:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2

you have rap skills.

Submitted by Sideburns (user info) at 2006-04-23 01:13:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1

Auto -1 for crappy poetry.

Submitted by georgemichael (user info) at 2006-04-19 01:34:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2

really cool

Submitted by Stagger_Lee (user info) at 2006-04-17 23:20:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1

No Comment

Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-04-17 15:47:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2

The buffoon lifts up his Monday pants
Inside his underoos magic is made
The crabs and the scabies rut and roll
As with a smile he stares at them

Twin fingers run along his root
Sawing his pubes like a woodsman
Up to the inviting shade of his lip
Their tips jostle his mouth-bristles

Sucking on a clit of pink that
He picked up at the salsa club
The mustache crashes with a dirty beat and
The crabs start a-flyin'

O cruel trick of cunnilingus!
Certainly this was not expected
On this night she enjoyed a tongue
And woke with itchy pelvis

He loves his beddin' spreadin' life
A boatman for the vermin

Submitted by forthewin (user info) at 2006-04-17 15:05:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2

Wow, poetry that was good. wtf lol omg?

Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-04-17 14:40:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2

An improvement by leaps and bounds.