Amplitude of Offerings (649 hits)
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Submitted by Brandon Fabish <brandino_the_great.at.yahoo.com> (View user info) at 2006-05-05 08:18:29 EDT
Be the first to cast sin
Without the worries from within
As the mind grapples flawless
To spew forth where it's lawless
Your lies that reign fluttering
In the hopes of those muttering
Fruitless hatred between the casing
Surrounded by the walls' spacing
Hidden deep in the mounting
Seeking approval of the obediant counting
On your wit and satire you do deem as praise
And such a silly matter from an electronic craze
In which your purpose is to crush those who stay
To waste countless hours reading each day
Knowing those who gather will read your tongue
Scraped from the undergrowth the words that stung
The bringer of such a submission
You ceaselessly mock without remission
For the tidings it brings your inner peace of mind
Not worrying about those aimed your words unkind
And sorry are most
Who bother to post
Their thoughts and sprawled outcries
To the heathens that standby
I pity the cruelty of unharnessed anger
Directed uncaringly at simply a stranger
TrÜth.
User Reviews
Submitted by Fabish (user info) at 2007-05-31 01:30:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I always wondered who actually read this and thought "Hey this son of a bitch is talking about ubersite's users!"
Mmm shit son.
Submitted by Murphy1844 (user info) at 2007-02-25 06:20:18 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Still alive. Now clear headed and somewhat happy!
I didn't read this post because I don't like poetry and it looked like poetry.
I will see you around soon and take care Fabish.
Murphy
Submitted by Axolotl (user info) at 2006-07-26 16:13:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
oohh, child, things are gonna be easier.
Submitted by earth_collapse (user info) at 2006-05-08 17:24:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Finally, for fuck sake! And very nice.
Submitted by ConorJS (user info) at 2006-05-07 12:13:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
X gon' give it ya,
Uh- he gon' give it to ya
X gon' give it ya,
Uh- he gon' give it to ya!
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2006-05-07 11:43:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Oooohhhhh...ya got me!
Submitted by Fabish (user info) at 2006-05-06 01:11:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Thanks for adhering to the proposal I made in my previous response Shlongor. Without you, this post probably would be Üntrue.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2006-05-05 22:14:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
wow. A 679 user ID and yet, you fucking stink.
Interesting.
Submitted by Fabish (user info) at 2006-05-05 16:03:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Quick snippety:
I know the setup is distracting and puts most users off. Fear not, don't let such a layout throw you astray from your normal slew of unrepenting filth that often comes from your finger tips.
And this is not a poem. Just as all songs that rhyme are not poems and all poems are not songs. It's simply a lyric, or more suitably, words, written in rhyme because that was the point I was at in my madman-like craze.
Carry on without thought fellowers.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-05-05 09:49:24 EDT (#)
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Submitted by simple_catalyst (user info) at 2006-05-05 09:18:09 (#)
Ranking: 0
great idea.
Submitted by Merlina (user info) at 2006-05-05 09:46:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Upon saying that - a better effort of poetry than you often see on Uber
Submitted by Merlina (user info) at 2006-05-05 09:44:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Nice words
but they didn't flow very well.
Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2006-05-05 09:31:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
This is much more poetic http://tinyurl.com/l4h9n
Submitted by simple_catalyst (user info) at 2006-05-05 09:18:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
great idea.
shitty delivery.
Submitted by ubetidid (user info) at 2006-05-05 08:29:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by professorfuckface (user info) at 2006-05-05 08:22:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
fabish the hypocrite