Deadly hunt for "IT" (433 hits)
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Submitted by Thought_Provoker (View user info) at 2006-05-08 08:12:11 EDT
The one with long hair had ran out crying and left me with some big scary guy. He did't like to play games, i think he didn't like me, i made him angry, uncomfortable. Yes, he was much bigger than me, perhaps i should stay out of his way.
I decided to explore the wide world around me, very big, spacious, loud, exciting. I had heard the one with long hair talking to the big one a couple days ago. Talking about "IT". He called it "IT" I didn't know what "IT" was, but whateva "IT" was, i didn't like "IT", and neither did the one with long hair, she cried whenever the big man mentioned "IT".
I wanted to find "IT". I was determind i would. However it would definatly involve going in there, i don't like it in there, it's always cold and dark, and the one that brings the light is gone. I'm just left with the scary thing in the big room.... i think he's called a "Dad".
He is asleep, i think, i'm not sure. There are growling noises coming from his nose and mouth, i can't go through here.... But I must. I must if i am to find whats being hidden from me, what i am not meant to see..... I must if i am to find "IT".
There are a few empty tins around me... "b...e..e..r..." Beer? The 'Dad' has eaten all his "beer", so hopefully i will be left alone. I have seen him eat this stuff before. Alot of the time when he does he shouts. Thats how i know he does not like me, not like the one with the long hair. He shouts at her about me, i know he is because he looks at me as he does it. She cries.
She cries alot, especially when the 'Dad' talks about "IT". I don't think she wants "IT" in the house, my world. I will get rid of "IT" and she will not cry any more. The "Dad" stirs.... No it's fine, he's probably thinking about "IT".
I make my way out of the room and i feel ok now. I continue to pull myself along, i think i know where to find "IT". I'm getting less scared.... I'm ready for "IT".
I have found myself a small room, i search and search, i cannot find "IT". I must, if i don't then she will never stop crying, and the "Dad" will get angry with her. Whateva "IT" is, is her fault. It is because of her this monster "IT" plagues our land, i know this coz the "Dad" shouts at her about bringing "IT" into our home, and she says sorry. She cries more.
The back door opens slowly, someone is approaching me from behind i can hear them, but i cannot turn my head enough to see, i have become the prey, and now "IT" is after me.....
No. No it is not "IT". The long haired one has returned, and she has been crying, maybe "IT" followed her? No, The big "Dad" is awake, and he is angry.
He is shouting and she is crying. I start to cry, it is very noisy. Whateva "IT" is has done this,
we must find "IT", we will get rid of "IT" together...
I picked up some of the arguement, yes i know what they are saying.... The "Dad" is telling her that he is going to get rid of "IT" tonight!!!
Relief. The long haired one cries and cries, as he says he will do it tonight at 12.00!!! All i know is when i wake up, "IT" will be gone!
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I'm sleeping, but something wakes me up, i am happy. I wanted to be awake when they got rid of "IT" My bedroom door opens, the "Dad" picks me up.... But quickly in after him is the long haired one trying to take me away from him........
The Dad: "I would't have to fucking get rid of 'IT' if you had of sorted 'IT' out when i said you fucking bitch".
I was "IT"....... I caused all this crying and pain. I never returned, or remember waking up for that matter. I lived as "IT" for 6 months before this event occured. The police came for the "Dad".
User Reviews
Submitted by Stagger_Lee (user info) at 2006-05-09 02:54:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by georgemichael (user info) at 2006-05-08 23:48:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by jgreening (user info) at 2006-05-08 08:28:15 (#)
Ranking: -2
QUIT MAKING ME THINK YOU'RE A SHITTY ALTER!
I DON'T WANT TO USE THE S.A.A. ANYMORE!
YOU CAN'T FUCKING MAKE ME USE IT!
I AM A FAG!
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Submitted by goferforhire (user info) at 2006-05-08 23:30:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
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You put it best yourself
Submitted by Psycosis (user info) at 2006-05-08 19:44:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
The concept was good, I just didn't like the writing.
Submitted by MrSparkle847 (user info) at 2006-05-08 19:12:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by erosion_rules (user info) at 2006-05-08 08:49:40 (#)
Ranking: -2
A steaming pile of "IT."
Submitted by BrownEyedGirrl (user info) at 2006-05-08 18:55:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
interesting .... no... not really...
Submitted by COMountain (user info) at 2006-05-08 16:47:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by erosion_rules (user info) at 2006-05-08 08:49:40 (#)
Ranking: -2
A steaming pile of "IT."
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The only thought you provoked detailed me choking you with your own dismembered leg, wrapping it easily around your neck because by the time I removed it from your hip I had shattered the bones in such a way that the skin simply acted like a sack.
Submitted by unknown9 (user info) at 2006-05-08 12:44:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2006-05-08 08:30:55 (#)
Ranking: -2
I hope you get raped and murdered.
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that's terrible, your mom might not send you to bed with cookies tonight
Submitted by extacy_red (user info) at 2006-05-08 09:44:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
DIE!
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2006-05-08 09:20:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
A quite splendid idea totally ruined by your inherent retardation.
Submitted by hour_man (user info) at 2006-05-08 08:51:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by erosion_rules (user info) at 2006-05-08 08:49:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
A steaming pile of "IT."
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2006-05-08 08:30:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I hope you get raped and murdered.
Submitted by ubetidid (user info) at 2006-05-08 08:29:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
different
Submitted by jgreening (user info) at 2006-05-08 08:28:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
QUIT MAKING ME THINK YOU'RE A SHITTY ALTER!
I DON'T WANT TO USE THE S.A.A. ANYMORE!
YOU CAN'T FUCKING MAKE ME USE IT!
Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2006-05-08 08:26:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Tag!
Submitted by The_taste_of_Monkeys (user info) at 2006-05-08 08:21:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I dont
Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2006-05-08 08:16:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I give up.