A snapshot of the end (753 hits)
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Rating: 0.34 on 16 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by extacy_red (View user info) at 2006-05-25 23:52:56 EDT
The hour of our death has come. Perched on the cliffs, framed by the skyline, hearts beating as one, united, nations are divided. We can see the bombs dropping, falling like rain, flashing like fireflies. Teeth of steel, eyes of electricity and guts of uranium. Is's raining glass, and the wind is blowing up something fierce. The skyline is toppling, the silhouette is fading, someone stop this.
The sun isn't going to rise for us. Explosions will be our sun. We are CNN. We are BBC. We are FOX. We are TNT. This is our ending memory, a curtain falling, what it is to burn. With each bomb drop, another year is added, we don't want to grow up. But the bombs don't even care, faceless like the birds, faceless like our corpses. Here on the cliffs, explosions are the anthem of our dying day.
10 seconds to new year's, is this how we'll die? Radiation, explosions or carbon monoxide? Cancer or suffocation? From A-bomb to H-bomb, does it make any difference? We're all going to die. Our memories will fade, but a reminder lives on. 3 parked cars, hoses through the windows, 7 bodies, and the ashes of an american flag, laughing, mocking. Peached on the cliffs, we fade into oblivion.
This is what we've given them, this is what they'll ask? "So this is what they lived for? War all the time."
User Reviews
Submitted by kybernetikum (user info) at 2006-09-30 16:29:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Not so bad.
Submitted by Method (user info) at 2006-09-30 15:25:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
crybaby pussy
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Submitted by Gingerly (user info) at 2006-09-30 14:08:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by UnderOathMeal (user info) at 2006-07-31 10:55:27 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Awful.
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2006-07-04 20:42:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2006-05-26 01:55:26 (#)
Ranking: -1
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Submitted by Sockster (user info) at 2006-07-04 20:28:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by wowitshana (user info) at 2006-05-31 10:53:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
stop unplugging my keyboard, kthx.
Submitted by judasry (user info) at 2006-05-26 17:04:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
sorry one more for good measure.
Submitted by judasry (user info) at 2006-05-26 17:04:27 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
i suck at rating things.
Submitted by judasry (user info) at 2006-05-26 17:03:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
did i mention it sucked.
HARD.
Submitted by judasry (user info) at 2006-05-26 17:03:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
a pretentious bit of writing reads like president bush. Dry, Faceless, and void of content.
Submitted by The_Yellow_Dart (user info) at 2006-05-26 16:53:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Crayon (user info) at 2006-05-26 16:01:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
yummy!
Submitted by ubetidid (user info) at 2006-05-26 09:54:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2006-05-26 01:55:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
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Submitted by Doodles (user info) at 2006-05-25 23:59:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Merchant:
Sir, I must strongly advise you, do not purchase this. Behind
every wish lurks grave misfortune. I, myself, was one
president of Algeria.
Homer: C'mon, pal, I don't want to hear your life story! Paw me.
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