APW: Riddled (789 hits)
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Submitted by Orgasmatron (View user info) at 2006-05-31 12:10:16 EDT
The bullets rattled in my hand like bones in need of reading
I threw them in the chambers while he lay there broken, bleeding
His head it split from crown to lip - the rounds went one by one
I left his body for the crows and threw away the gun
I kicked the bedroom door down and I found her lying there
Decked in jewels and bangles with a serpent in her hair
She was mine by law, not love - I stormed to the divan
Took her by the throat and said "You'll make of me a man"
But oh, the truth of ages will reveal itself too late
Now murder's changed to patricide and incest's made of rape
My children, creatures, bastard I - I cannot see, I hope to die
The chariots colliding under weight of word and wicked lie
And the snakes are in the fist again
And the blood is on the hands again
And the wolf is at the breast again
The wolf is at the breast again
And the heel is held above again
And the babe is armor-clad again
And the kings are on their way again
The kings are on their way again
And the stars are drawn in thirds again
And the earth is spitting graves again
And the horn is being blown again
The horn is being blown again
And I have only you.
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Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-07-06 10:59:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I was away when you wrote this and commented without being able to give it proper attention.
I wasn't aware then just how fucking awesome this is.
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2006-06-20 02:04:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-06-01 19:13:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
please don't be disappointed in me.. I REALLY wanted to like it...but it was B I T T E R & unforgiving...and...the toast BEGGED me to apologize for subjecting it o such a travesty..so I am.
I really wanted to like it..I did.
So, I just got filafel after drinking KILKENNY all night, and I'm in search of Advil, but all I found was this internet cafe..so..I'm off again. I suspect I'll end up in Temple Bar Hotel with no Advil...ugh..tired of typing..what's that? my filafel's getting cold?
When you feel awful
eat filafel
Amd you'll feel ALL FULL...
gotta go..ugh..
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-06-01 11:31:38 EDT (#)
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Submitted by livEvil (user info) at 2006-06-01 10:56:18 (#)
Ranking: -2
i don't get it. call me stupid
no, really, call me stupid!
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I took Doré's "Enigma" - which involves the Sphinx - as a springboard to write about Oedipus coming to grips with his fate.
Stupid.
Submitted by livEvil (user info) at 2006-06-01 10:56:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
i don't get it. call me stupid
no, really, call me stupid!
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-06-01 10:38:56 EDT (#)
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Kidding, snuggles.
Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2006-06-01 10:05:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Apologies O. This was a damn good post.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-06-01 10:03:04 EDT (#)
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Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2006-06-01 10:02:04 (#)
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Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-06-01 08:46:51 (#)
Ranking: 2
and i finally got to try marmite. ahem:
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeewww
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*sigh* I am disappointed in you Valerie.
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Way to finally review my post.
Some circle jerk this is!
Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2006-06-01 10:02:04 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-06-01 08:46:51 (#)
Ranking: 2
and i finally got to try marmite. ahem:
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeewww
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*sigh* I am disappointed in you Valerie.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-06-01 09:59:28 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-06-01 08:12:40 (#)
Ranking: 2
hope you liked it, O. in other news, rhubarb yogurt is weird.
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It's fantastic. FAN-tastic.
"Never rub another man's rhubarb."
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-06-01 08:46:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
and i finally got to try marmite. ahem:
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeewww
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-06-01 08:12:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
hope you liked it, O. in other news, rhubarb yogurt is weird.
Submitted by munkeypants (user info) at 2006-05-31 21:03:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Whiplash (user info) at 2006-05-31 19:07:37 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-05-31 14:25:50 (#)
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Check out Doré's work with Paradise Lost if you like what you see here.
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woooooot
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2006-05-31 16:07:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Sorry, that was a barbershop singing flashback when I saw your bones reference...
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Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2006-05-31 16:06:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Oh shine, shine, shiiiiiine
Shine, shine, shine 'em up fine, shine 'em up fine fer a dime
Shine, shine, shine 'em up fine, shine 'em up fine fer a dime
Dime, dime, diiiiime
(Ten cents, mah baby needs a new pair o' shoes)
C'mon, you seven!
Rooooooooll, you seeeeeeven
(And she won't get dem if I lose)
Hop up, you 'leven!
Rooooooooll, you 'leeeeeeven
Roll, roll, roll dem bones, roll dem in de square
Roll dem on de sidewalks, streets or anywhere
We roll dem in de morning
We roll dem in de night
(When the cops are gone) we roll dem alllll dayyyy long
'Till they cooooome uuuuuup right
Oh, how dey roll
(Oh lawdy how de moon do shine down on dem bones, bones, bones, bones, bones)
Submitted by shadow (user info) at 2006-05-31 15:43:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
clever
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-05-31 15:33:27 EDT (#)
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Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2006-05-31 15:26:12 (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-05-31 14:34:51 (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 for the William Blake reference
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one of my faves....dude, do you think you could try some Walt Whitman-stylee?
I'm not sure how well it would go over here on Uber though - a lot of gheyness and nature would be involved. But hey, if any one can pull it off, it would be you, brotha...
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Here are two that I posted way, way, way back in September 2005 when I was just a youngin':
http://www.ubersite.com/m/76155
http://www.ubersite.com/m/76216
I think you mean something a bit more serious, though. Maybe if I find a good nature painting I'll try doing something a bit Whitmanish.
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2006-05-31 15:26:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-05-31 14:34:51 (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 for the William Blake reference
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one of my faves....dude, do you think you could try some Walt Whitman-stylee?
I'm not sure how well it would go over here on Uber though - a lot of gheyness and nature would be involved. But hey, if any one can pull it off, it would be you, brotha...
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-05-31 14:25:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Check out Doré's work with Paradise Lost if you like what you see here.
Submitted by TigerLilly (user info) at 2006-05-31 13:00:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-05-31 12:42:18 EDT (#)
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Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2006-05-31 12:32:56 (#)
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how do you read bones?
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You throw bones - typically animal bones - and attempt to interpret the symbols or images that the scattered bones create or suggest.
However, and this is the most important part, you must make sure that your oversized rodent-like head doesn't block the sunlight or whatever artificial source of illumination is available. It's hard enough to work out a prophecy when it's bright out, trying it in the darkness is just folly.
Submitted by inion_de_trua (user info) at 2006-05-31 12:37:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
that painting reminds me of a nightmare i had. i like it.
Submitted by Wrightcopy (user info) at 2006-05-31 12:34:52 EDT (#)
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+2 because Clive Barker is my favorite author. :)
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2006-05-31 12:33:31 EDT (#)
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i like the picture much.
Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2006-05-31 12:32:56 EDT (#)
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how do you read bones?
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-05-31 12:30:09 EDT (#)
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Valerie - BRING ME BACK A LEPRECHAUN SUIT FOR GHOLA, SO WE CAN ENJOY HER TOGETHER!
In other news - Clive Barker: Visions of Heaven and Hell is a great read. : )
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-05-31 12:29:00 EDT (#)
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OMG liek I didn't use Caravaggio or Rubens....
Thanks, scourge.
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2006-05-31 12:28:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
If it's really you, don't forget to bring me some Irish Whiskey home...
I mean...
Hope you're having fun!
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-05-31 12:27:05 EDT (#)
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hi scourgey- really me. just took a good hike and im off to the pub. might be my last webbing before home. bye.
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2006-05-31 12:21:57 EDT (#)
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And I'm hungry like the wollllllllllllf....
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2006-05-31 12:21:08 EDT (#)
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Jake saves the day for Valerie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good work, O. I always enjoy what you come up with to pair with the images you use.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-05-31 12:14:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
auto im in ireland +2
Submitted by professorfuckface (user info) at 2006-05-31 12:11:12 EDT (#)
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you've got nothing on zach de la rocha