God (411 hits)
Category: Quotes & StoriesLabels: Fictional
Rating: -0.46 on 18 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Hourman (View user info) at 2006-06-14 09:09:18 EDT
I run my fingers over the iron banister, its textured surface breaths life into my numb fingers. It reminds me what it's like to be human, to feel and be felt, even by an inanimate object.
I walk slower than I used to, enjoying every step I take and embracing, not absorbing, the impact the ground proposes. The wind glides over me and caresses my body my mind and soul. It wraps me in its cold arms and slowly moves me on towards my fate.
I can see them looking at me. Adjusting their vision to make sure that what they are gazing upon is what they truly wish it to be. I am that, and nothing more than which I am. I am incarnate God and truly a site to be seen on this planet.
They flock to me, as if just by being here I am a beacon of hope, of light and heavenly bliss. The faces in the crowd are amazed at the site which I am. I am a site, a site to behold and to be loved by all whom are fortunate enough to gaze upon me.
I can hear all the questions that they want to ask, and all the questions they are too scared to ask. They fear me, but only because they fear what can be done to them, not what I can do for them.
I am ushered fast into a building and people around me laugh and frown. They question my health and try to flaw my perfection. I am here to help not to hinder, but still they wonder. Still they find flaw, cast doubt and belittle all that which I can do. They do not trust us like they once did, and for good reason in light of times just past.
I will not be tested, yet still they ask, still they want proof and constantly put me on a pedestal only to knock me down. Why can they not accept that which I am? All I want to do is help, but still they persist with this technology, broadcasting my image to all who wish to see.
I do not see their logic, flawed and ill, it persists just as they do, gnawing away at my whole. They are slowly breaking that which cannot be broken. They are doing the impossible; they are choosing not to believe. Freewill was a gift! A gift which was meant at least to be respected, we give it to them so they can believe, and they choose not to?
I must leave. I would sacrifice all the earthly pleasures that I have had in this short space of time for the pure bliss I receive in knowledge truth and belief. My wings unfold with great delicacy but showing pure strength. I cry a tear as I leave the human race. I offered help and hope; they gave me doubt and judgement.
Freewill was God given; now it is man made. Truly God has left this place. Truly they are free. Truly they must be happy without our intervention. We must forever let them be. God is dead to them. I cry a tear.
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Submitted by darko (user info) at 2006-07-06 07:15:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2006-07-05 09:54:26 (#)
Ranking: 2
I am going to rate every one of your posts with a +2 without reading them.
Submitted by matnotharry (user info) at 2006-06-14 18:18:52 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Ingsoc (user info) at 2006-06-14 17:58:24 (#)
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ANIME
Submitted by Ingsoc (user info) at 2006-06-14 17:58:24 EDT (#)
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ANIME
Submitted by livEvil (user info) at 2006-06-14 10:49:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
god doesn't know how to fart properly
Submitted by forthewin (user info) at 2006-06-14 10:25:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
What kind of site? I'm thinking a landing site. Even maybe a parasite.
That would be quite a sight.
Submitted by Webered (user info) at 2006-06-14 10:17:31 EDT (#)
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I don't see why an omnipotent God would not understand his own creations? Meh.
Submitted by sicosemen (user info) at 2006-06-14 09:58:23 EDT (#)
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I'm not big on all these religious posts. Haha
Submitted by gonefiguring (user info) at 2006-06-14 09:58:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Yeah, I did. While I don't need or or even want your applause, I appreciate the gesture. If you're not going to rate the actual post, why bother making any comments at all? Give it a -2 if that's what you think it deserves. If you do, it'll bring it's rating back below that of the post of yours that started these exchanges. Provided that ratings mean anything to you, dropping a -2 on my post may make you feel better.
I have rated your posts, as with this one, at -1 because they don't utterly suck; they're just not very good. Just my opinion - ignore it or don't as it suits you. When they get better, I'll rate higher.
Read ya 'round.
Submitted by SilvrWolf (user info) at 2006-06-14 09:56:35 EDT (#)
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Not bad, but not good either.
I imagine an omnipotent god would have no need for introspect. Free will given or not, he/she/it still knew/knows what's going to happen, as omnipotent knowledge transcends the construct of time.
Submitted by RyuFu (user info) at 2006-06-14 09:49:57 EDT (#)
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I did not grant free will to anyone, it's just a misconception. You're all doing what I want.
Submitted by hour_man (user info) at 2006-06-14 09:45:04 EDT (#)
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To late to repost without the picture now.
Submitted by mbstateside (user info) at 2006-06-14 09:44:18 EDT (#)
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I can see what you were going for but you didn't quite catch it.
+1 for effort.
Submitted by hot_pocket (user info) at 2006-06-14 09:38:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by Fungah (user info) at 2006-06-14 09:13:31 (#)
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All I saw was the anime looking angel.
Auto anime -2
Submitted by hour_man (user info) at 2006-06-14 09:21:03 EDT (#)
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Did you read what i said about your post Gone?
Submitted by hour_man (user info) at 2006-06-14 09:20:13 EDT (#)
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In all honesty I wrote it in a 'Holier than thou' voice. Maybe it sounds different when I read it, who knows.
Submitted by gonefiguring (user info) at 2006-06-14 09:18:53 EDT (#)
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Too many instances of "I" and "truly". And it's "sight", not "site".
Submitted by hour_man (user info) at 2006-06-14 09:15:58 EDT (#)
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Seriosuly? The picture was enough to earn a -2? Wow.
Submitted by Fungah (user info) at 2006-06-14 09:13:31 EDT (#)
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All I saw was the anime looking angel.
Auto anime -2