When Green Is Your Colour (824 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: -1.25 on 52 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by PeopleAreStrange (View user info) at 2006-06-16 09:46:55 EDT
Love isn't enough
When green is your colour,
Love can't distinguish
Between fantasy and truth.
Love sees shades of pink -
My eyes are green
He will see red
Once he knows how I feel.
I once saw the world unprejudiced
In the time when love was golden,
But age had clarity stolen
When black and white became grey.
My heart is full of colours
Mixed together they will make white
So one day, I'm sure, my love
My vision will be right
User Reviews
Submitted by Istaros (user info) at 2006-06-18 11:51:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Billy Blue Hat would find this kind of writing infantile
Submitted by PeopleAreStrange (user info) at 2006-06-18 04:35:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
That's right DirtyDoubleEntendre, another poem you can't understand. Why not go back to reading Billy Blue Hat instead, much less taxing.
Submitted by DirtyDoubleEntendre (user info) at 2006-06-18 04:04:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Huh?
Submitted by CoachMagirk27 (user info) at 2006-06-18 02:54:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
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booooooooooooooooooo
Submitted by PeopleAreStrange (user info) at 2006-06-18 01:44:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
A lot of people here just follow the herd, -2 and move along. If you don't emphasise with something you can sympathise...oh but wait, unless it's happened to you, you can't? Bullshit. More poems to follow, arseholes.
Submitted by HighVoltage900 (user info) at 2006-06-18 00:00:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by PeopleAreStrange (user info) at 2006-06-17 23:26:49 (#)
Ranking: 2
Plebeians, the lot of you! (apart from Mies76 :o)
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Then obviously one as Patrician as you *cough* should understand something.
If your trying to post a poem about your feelings, the internet is a very dangerous place to do it. We are a selfish breed here, and something you write (which frankly was sub-par anyway) about something that YOU feel means nothing. WE need to feel something to enjoy it, I read it and thought "Congrats that you feel this way about love, but I felt nothing whilst reading this."
Submitted by MrSparkle847 (user info) at 2006-06-17 23:37:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
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Submitted by PeopleAreStrange (user info) at 2006-06-17 23:26:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Plebeians, the lot of you! (apart from Mies76 :o)
Submitted by Istaros (user info) at 2006-06-17 15:35:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
"it felt good to write it"? it also feels good to take a massive dump. interesting, innit.
Submitted by FilthyAssistant (user info) at 2006-06-17 15:23:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
The third stanza appeals to me but I think the rest of it is weak.
Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2006-06-17 14:55:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2006-06-16 15:41:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
sorry
Submitted by mles76 (user info) at 2006-06-16 15:40:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Love is Asian
When yellow is your colour,
Love can distinguish
Between Korean and Japenses.
Love sees shades of salmon -
My eyes are brown
He will see chopsticks
Once he knows how I eat sushi.
I once saw the world through round eyes
In the time when Siam was golden,
But age had chickenballs stolen
When black and white became Pad thai.
My heart is full of fish
Mixed together they will make crab cakes
So one day, I'm sure, my chink
My vision will be slanted
Submitted by icarus1987 (user info) at 2006-06-16 15:36:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Green is certainly the color of vomit, which is strangely appropriate here.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2006-06-16 15:16:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
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Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2006-06-16 15:09:33 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
im david blaine and i will make this post disappear
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2006-06-16 14:47:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
what are you on about, cunt?
Submitted by PeopleAreStrange (user info) at 2006-06-16 11:18:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Yep, me and Dustin agree. Thanks for your comments Dustin. I'm going to find something better to do now too!
Submitted by DCWoody (user info) at 2006-06-16 11:10:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Right, you and Dustin agree on that.
Submitted by PeopleAreStrange (user info) at 2006-06-16 11:08:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I'm used to criticisms. But the poem is good.
Submitted by DCWoody (user info) at 2006-06-16 11:03:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I think you should get more used to critisicm/insults though.
And take note of the fact that the only person to give thsi a +ve rating is a shitty alter.
Submitted by DCWoody (user info) at 2006-06-16 11:01:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I'll leave now.
Submitted by DCWoody (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:57:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Yeah, but the thing is that we're having a conversation here, not a very friendly conversaation but a conversation none the less.
Submitted by PeopleAreStrange (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:52:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
People will read the comments more than the poem. And they're boring comments. So most heated would be a waste of everybody's time, including yours.
Submitted by DCWoody (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:49:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I felt like replying to your comment. Whats the worst that could happen if I keep replying? you make most heated and the cookielass crowd ups your rating cos you're female and you've got a account number <10000
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:47:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by DCWoody (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:47:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No. I'm bored.
Submitted by PeopleAreStrange (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:46:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
You only need to rate it once. Move along now, shithead.
Submitted by DCWoody (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:36:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
This poem sucks. You can get snooty all you want but that doesn't change anything, just because its peotry doesn't make it good. This is a shit poem. It is shit. It doesn't matter if I only post collages or if other people post endless pictures of rabbits or whatever.
I am rating this post. Which sucks.
Submitted by PeopleAreStrange (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:33:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
No Woody, you suck. You are the 90%. Congratulations. Now stop camping on my wonderful poem and go and do something constructive, like get run over by a truck. Bye now.
Submitted by PeopleAreStrange (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:32:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I love that you admit you don't understand the poem. I think it's one of my best yet. Huzzah!
Submitted by DCWoody (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:31:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Oh do shut up, I hate it when people critise the fact that theres shitty low brow posts on Uber.
So fucking what? they suck, this sucks.
Submitted by WildcatMcGee (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:30:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
yeah, that's pretty weird.
Submitted by DCWoody (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:28:33 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Strange...another post was knocked off the front page after I repeatedly -2ed it, I'm guessing Bart has given me some strange pseudo-moderating power.
Submitted by PeopleAreStrange (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:28:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
It's off the front page because Bart obviously agreed with the majority (90%) that this poem was rubbish and that he'd rather see more posts about punching babies in the head, or having sex with giraffes.
Submitted by DCWoody (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:27:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
The first bit doesn't make sense and the rest is stupid, thats if I ignore the fact that its shit.
Today has been a very boring day.
Submitted by WildcatMcGee (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:25:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
How did this get off the front page? Am I missing something?
Submitted by PeopleAreStrange (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:12:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I love your critque Woody. Thank you so much!
Submitted by DCWoody (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:06:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
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Submitted by BigD (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:03:54 (#)
Ranking: 2
I like it because it's short and has a unique style. I like what the poem says and i feel i can relate to it on some level.
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but its terrible, no balance no...nothing that makes a poem good in my opinion. She rhymes stolen and golden for fucks sake.
Submitted by BigD (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:03:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I like it because it's short and has a unique style. I like what the poem says and i feel i can relate to it on some level.
Submitted by DCWoody (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:03:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Fuck off wildcat you tit.
Submitted by WildcatMcGee (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:01:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
By the way, on this part of the internet, it's spelled Color.
Auto -2 for incorrect spelling of a simple word.
But really, this wasn't particularly good. Not even to the ranks of decent or alright either. This should have been folded up and thrown away with the rest of the dirty napkins after dinner.
Submitted by BigD (user info) at 2006-06-16 10:00:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I think poetry is nice but most people on this site can't appreciate art and they are critical.
Submitted by DCWoody (user info) at 2006-06-16 09:56:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Uber does not appreciate serious poetry, but even if it did, this sucks.
Submitted by PeopleAreStrange (user info) at 2006-06-16 09:56:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Thank you.
Submitted by PeopleAreStrange (user info) at 2006-06-16 09:55:27 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Ever get the feeling you were the wrong people to share this with...hmm! Anyway, I'm pleased with my poem, it felt good to write it.
Submitted by sicosemen (user info) at 2006-06-16 09:54:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
You are the reason why I piss on nigger babies.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2006-06-16 09:54:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Awwwww...ain't this sweet.
Submitted by professorfuckface (user info) at 2006-06-16 09:53:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
After the universe had ended and I was staring into the void it gave me some time to think about things like how it would be strange if two people both looked at blue but one perceived it as red and the other perceived it as green, but they both knew it as blue, and if they both had blue eyes one would look at the other one and think nice red eyes only they would think "nice blue eyes", and you might think "well hey, that wouldn't work, because red is the color of blood and passion, it has that unique property", I would reply to that with "yeah, what's your point"
Submitted by WildcatMcGee (user info) at 2006-06-16 09:52:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
It's not good. It doesn't rhyme.
Submitted by retrospect (user info) at 2006-06-16 09:50:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
http://www.ubersite.com/m/88437
MINE ARE GREEN AS WELL
Submitted by DCWoody (user info) at 2006-06-16 09:48:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Poetry. Bad. Synonyms?