Oh no, another poem (322 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: -2 on 4 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by PeopleAreStrange (View user info) at 2006-06-18 01:56:48 EDT
Beautiful birdsong bequeaths bright rebirth
Telling tuneful tales to those that torpor
Willow witnesses warbling wrens well-nigh
Singing such sweet salutations to the sky
My mind my mellow, my memory mar
But birdsong brings brio to my body by far
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The birds woke me up at 4.30 am this morning (they're very loud here). Bastards.
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Submitted by PeopleAreStrange (user info) at 2006-06-19 09:43:03 EDT (#)
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Reposted with spelling correction: http://www.ubersite.com/m/89333 please comment on the other post, not this one.
Submitted by goferforhire (user info) at 2006-06-18 13:25:39 EDT (#)
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alliteration is crying...
because of something you did.
Submitted by Istaros (user info) at 2006-06-18 11:57:14 EDT (#)
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nothing you write deserves to be read before being rated
Submitted by PeopleAreStrange (user info) at 2006-06-18 01:58:06 EDT (#)
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correction - My mind *may* mellow, my memory mar