It sure as shit isn't political (508 hits)
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Submitted by marginwalker (View user info) at 2006-06-28 13:32:03 EDT
One;
Moment.
Minute.
Touch.
Breath.
Breathe....
One;
Shot.
Second.
Sigh.
Line.
Leave......
You Fuck like a freight train, Love.
Steel and Aurora.
Worn smile, old track.
Neat trick. Now what?
Jet lag.
Insomnia. Insanity.
Fever trips North
to find Diamonds and
endless corners.
Your outline.
Your empty space -
Breathing Shell.
(I hear the Ocean in your whisper)
Has-Been. Never-Was.
Yesterday's Hero - reinvented.
Drop punches on my Trachea, Kid.
My life lines.
Roll in on your knock-out blow,
Your lucky penny
Hued in dirty green and
A rusty bumper.
A face worth a Mercedes;
A counterfeit chroma -
Liar.
(Feed my Ego to your Hungry)
Long talks.
Red dripping grins. Drunk on dreams.
Perverse conversing.
Reverse the definition;
Silence.
Define it:
You.
Confine it:
Me.
Come play a pitched battle of symmetrics -
Vagrant.
(Your gospel lost in ramble)
Love as a Thespian.
Play thief to my Martyr, Mister.
This theatre;
A Proposition.
You'll find an Aria -
Name it.
(Nay, I am but your Soliloquy)
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Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2006-06-29 19:29:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by FartSmeller (user info) at 2006-06-28 16:13:37 (#)
Ranking: -1
MY LOVE FOR YOU IS LIKE A TRUCK, BERSERKER.
WOULD YOU LIKE SOME MAKING FUCK, BERSERKER.
Submitted by Yams (user info) at 2006-06-28 19:42:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
This had some parts that flowed very well. Sir, I am impressed.
Submitted by HighVoltage900 (user info) at 2006-06-28 18:15:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
^ See that +2? ^
It's because although most people suck at poetry, there are some out there who show some skill and shouldn't be afraid to post it.
Submitted by marginwalker (user info) at 2006-06-28 17:59:02 EDT (#)
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clerks. superb critique.
Submitted by FartSmeller (user info) at 2006-06-28 16:13:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
MY LOVE FOR YOU IS LIKE A TRUCK, BERSERKER.
WOULD YOU LIKE SOME MAKING FUCK, BERSERKER.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-06-28 16:08:07 EDT (#)
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Submitted by marginwalker (user info) at 2006-06-28 13:56:25 (#)
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Nicely done Orgasmatron.
Stupid me = I neglected to remember you're the only one here producing anything even relatively worthy of posting in the poetical arena.
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Whatever.
Write and post what you like.
This style of poetry really isn't my thing, but I do think it's 'worth reading.'
Just busting balls is all. Sort of. If I hated it there'd likely have been some twist to it whereby whatever I wrote pointed out what an embarrassment the piece was.
Instead I just happened to have dog sex on my mind. And here we are.
Submitted by BrownEyedGirrl (user info) at 2006-06-28 15:21:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Long talks.
Red dripping grins. Drunk on dreams.
Perverse conversing.
Reverse the definition;
Silence.
Submitted by inion_de_trua (user info) at 2006-06-28 14:47:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
+1 for you fuck like a freight train.
didn't like it though. awkward read.
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2006-06-28 14:36:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Not terrible.
Submitted by DeathJester (user info) at 2006-06-28 14:20:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Zero zero zero zero MINUS 2 THIS WAS GAY.
3 words. COFFEE BAR BASEMENT.
Submitted by Caulaincourt (user info) at 2006-06-28 13:59:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Stupid me = I neglected to remember you're the only one here producing anything even relatively worthy of posting in the poetical arena."""
Don't flatter his ego too much. It's already ridiculously inflated.
Thank you for that other compliment btw! :-)
Submitted by marginwalker (user info) at 2006-06-28 13:56:25 EDT (#)
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Nicely done Orgasmatron.
Stupid me = I neglected to remember you're the only one here producing anything even relatively worthy of posting in the poetical arena.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-06-28 13:50:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
One;
Lipstick.
Mounting.
Thrust.
Bark.
Pull....
One;
Bite.
Withdrawal.
Sniff.
Growl.
Continue.....
I can't believe the dogs are fucking on our walk, Martha.
Shepherd and Terrier.
Old legs, in heat.
Fuck, he came inside her. Now what?
Swollen stomach.
Puppies. Insanity.
More trips to PetCo
for food and pee pads and
Squeaky toys.
Your decision.
Your stupid decision.
Price is Right.
(I regret not listening to Bob Barker)
Worst Friend. Family Fiend.
Irresponsible Dog - unbelievable.
Don't pee on my shoes, Maximus.
You didn't have to do it.
Sniff your ass now, dad-to-be,
Mmm, is that Gravy Train
You're whiffing on
Your rusty bumper?
Your balls are coming off now;
A counterfeit canine -
Bitch.
(Don't attempt to eat your Offspring)
Long walks.
Lipstick dripping sperm. On her back.
Perverse humping.
Immersed in her dog-cunt;
Sloshing.
Recline it:
Your terrier back.
Define it:
My animal jizz.
Go on then, you assholes, fuck like monkeys -
Mutts.
(Your children's bloodline impure)
Love as an Interracial
Pairing of lusty burden beasts.
This walking;
Senseless.
They'll just hump again.
Bad dog
(Nay, I am but a reflection of your Marriage)
Submitted by Caulaincourt (user info) at 2006-06-28 13:46:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
i'm not a fan of vague telegraphic prose.
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