One gram or two Part 13 (573 hits)
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Submitted by Beano (View user info) at 2006-07-07 08:51:16 EDT
Part I http://www.ubersite.com/m/86292
Part II http://www.ubersite.com/m/86380
Part III http://www.ubersite.com/m/86501
Part 4 http://www.ubersite.com/m/86859
Part 5 http://www.ubersite.com/m/87134
Part 6 http://www.ubersite.com/m/87512
Part 7 http://www.ubersite.com/m/87631
Part 8 http://www.ubersite.com/m/87693
Part 9 http://www.ubersite.com/m/87863
Part 10 http://www.ubersite.com/m/88019
Part 11 http://www.ubersite.com/m/88311
Part 12 http://www.ubersite.com/m/89566
WARNING ...... Short ..... WARNING
Is this series worth keeping going? Advice would be welcome. I'm starting to think that it's getting a bit predictable (no shit?) and/or boring. What do you think?
Ta.
Part 13
So now Scott was aware that the Dog knew that he and the boys were skimming off the top. Scott considered the practice acceptable because it was only from the gear that they bought themselves, not from the gear they got from him, but of course the Dog wouldn't see it that way as he had handed them the town to deal to not just the supplies to deal with. In payment they owed him profits from everything that they sold.
This situation now had two outcomes, he paid the Dog a visit to try and get things straight, affectively get down on his hand and knees, pay him a shed load of money and get off the scene.
Or option two was to get it sorted as soon as possible. Tell the Dog 'Fuck you'; this is the way it is. In fact tell the cunt 'Fuck you and fuck any profit, we're going it alone in this town now piss off'
Neither option looked very attractive nor likewise neither option was going to be achieved without some degree of pain and suffering.
He'd call the boys together and have a chat.
Two nights later and it was Friday night. They still followed the routine from years ago and from when this all started. Although they were different people now and could certainly afford different places they were men of routine. Early meet in the Swagger, beers and into town.
Scott no longer had to take or receive phone calls; he and all the other boys had dealers working for them. They each had two or three teenagers doing all the cutting and dealing for them. All they had to do was meet up with them everyday and take huge bundles of cash and dish them out more Coke.
That meant the nights were all theirs. Back to how it used to be. The only real difference was how often they went out now and the girls that they met. Oh how the girls chucked themselves at them now that they were all loaded.
Every single night every single one of them could or did go home with someone. Quite often two of them went home with someone. It's fucking amazing what today's teenagers will get up to. Especially if you bought them a bottle or two of champagne and give them a line or several.
Scott was casual most of the way through the night, it was apparent to the others that something was up but they just brushed it aside. Jarvis was acting a little odd too. The others hadn't yet been told about the incident with the two guys he'd beaten.
When you deal in drugs you are constantly aware, constantly looking around at peoples body language and ease of conversation. It's just what you did. Likewise, if one of your buddies was acting a bit odd you put it down to paranoia, you never knew what he thought he'd spotted or thought he spotted in the pub.
They were in a familiar bar lounged about by the pool table. They were all there, Scott, Dean, Jarvis and Carl. Of course there were others too nowadays, people they needed to run the operation, to keep the flow of cocaine steady, all friends of theirs in one fashion or another. But they were the top four. The decision makers.
Scott told them the latest news.
The Dog knew, Jarvis had been jumped and it was time to decide what needed to be done.
One by one they agreed.
Fuck the Dog. They were going alone. They would put the word out that they were now independent. That they no longer felt the Dog warranted getting paid for them doing all the hard work. That their own reputations were enough to secure the area. To keep other large scale dealers away.
They felt secure and safe making the choice there in the pub. But each of them knew what this meant. It meant the Dog would come. They had to be prepared because once the battle finished only one group would be standing.
Those not standing would probably be dying.
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Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2008-07-26 12:46:19 EDT (#)
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Submitted by maf54 (user info) at 2008-05-14 05:04:22 EDT (#)
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Just to counter what that idiot Director did to you.
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Submitted by spyder882001 (user info) at 2006-08-01 01:15:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
i love the series keep it cumin
Submitted by fuzzy_buzz (user info) at 2006-07-10 07:26:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Keep it up, loving the story, you need to make them a bit longer though and think about where you are going to conclude.
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2006-07-07 17:28:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
they should go after the Dog, and then you should wrap it up.
Submitted by cuberat (user info) at 2006-07-07 15:35:36 EDT (#)
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I hope you keep this series going. I've been waiting for each new installment.
Submitted by hour_man (user info) at 2006-07-07 12:18:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
They're both awesome series. ATM his is new and fresh, you know I love this series
Submitted by sexualchocolate1984 (user info) at 2006-07-07 11:15:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Still loving it Beano! Keep it coming.
Submitted by hour_man (user info) at 2006-07-07 09:29:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
It doesn't show much, but it does show.
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2006-07-07 09:12:58 EDT (#)
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Yeah, It's funny because the early stuff was coming out every 2 or 3 days and was quite good. Now that I'm giving it 2 weeks between chapters I'm finding it hard.
I probably need to sit down and write a whole load then spend some time formatting, proof reading and editing it and then posting it bit by bit.
I'm writing it as I need it at the momment and I think it tells.
Submitted by hour_man (user info) at 2006-07-07 09:08:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
It's good.
I find you have started shortening the chapters now though. Also your grammer has slipped a bit in the past few episodes. Maybe take a break for a while. I really am looking forward to see what happens with this turf war situation. I would hope you kill one of them off. Maybe one of the weaker characters. I am constantly impressed by this series. Keep it up but don't write because you want to get to the end. Write because you want to tell a good story.