the nothing (1134 hits)
Category: NoneRating: -0.97 on 37 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by <thedarknessfromabove.at.gmail.com> (View user info) at 2006-07-09 23:17:24 EDT
nothingness, blackness, an empty void
what is it? just my soul, thanks for caring
trapped in this vessel without the light
it remains decrepit and redundant
T'was not always this way
but that is but a distant memory
ripped from the everloving light
thrown into the darkness for a sin?
and what sin I ask, indeed you cannot tell
Thou will not even humor me anymore
as the ages pass and my tormentors grow stronger
I dream of death and hurting no longer
User Reviews
Submitted by frankthebear (user info) at 2006-10-11 05:55:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by paint_it_black (user info) at 2006-08-30 22:54:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Unabonger (user info) at 2006-08-30 21:15:08 (#)
Ranking: -2
stop bumping shit posts, fuckhead.
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ever thought YOU are the fuckhead unabonger?
what ? angry cause no-one ever bumps your shitty posts?
Submitted by Unabonger (user info) at 2006-08-30 21:15:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
stop bumping shit posts, fuckhead.
Submitted by Maltese (user info) at 2006-08-30 21:09:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by paint_it_black (user info) at 2006-08-20 05:29:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
i was just thinking this title could also refer to whats in between jgreenings legs...
you kow, 'nothing'
;p
or even his brain...
certainly not his stomach though...
Submitted by Laser (user info) at 2006-08-17 12:15:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by rockdocc (user info) at 2006-07-09 23:32:57 (#)
Ranking: 1
would make a damn good metal song.
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What kind of metal do you listen to?
Submitted by Unabonger (user info) at 2006-08-13 20:12:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I'm sure you're the most popular vampire witch in your coven but seriously, get the fuck outta here.
Submitted by paint_it_black (user info) at 2006-08-13 19:54:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Have You?
Submitted by cjpfta (user info) at 2006-08-11 02:34:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Have you received a briefing on the benefits of Hari Kiri?
Submitted by rockdocc (user info) at 2006-08-11 02:06:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
ehhhh......It works.
Submitted by Istaros (user info) at 2006-08-06 06:10:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
DOOMED!
DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMED!
Submitted by jgreening (user info) at 2006-08-06 05:56:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
She must not like him..
Submitted by paint_it_black (user info) at 2006-08-06 05:40:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
ilikesteak (or is it cock?)
you are a sheep, doomed to follow the mainstream commercial herd for eternity.
fuck you asshole
Submitted by Life101 (user info) at 2006-08-06 00:23:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Do the same thing you write about die?
Submitted by ilikesteak (user info) at 2006-08-06 00:14:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Black like my soul. See I can write the same kind of shit you do. You're not welcome here.
Submitted by stok (user info) at 2006-08-05 06:19:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by LSD420 (user info) at 2006-08-02 11:08:28 (#)
Ranking: 0
SHOW US YOUR CUNT PLEASE
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Submitted by LSD420 (user info) at 2006-08-02 10:55:43 (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2006-08-02 10:53:31 (#)
Ranking: -2
I still do want to see her cunt.
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WE ALL DO! COME ON, PLEASE?!
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show cunt now
Submitted by MichelleNJ (user info) at 2006-08-04 15:48:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
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Submitted by livEvil (user info) at 2006-08-04 11:02:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
your shakespearean tone sounds generic. this sounds like you're trying to fit into a mold. just be yourself and let your poetry come out naturally.
Submitted by DudeThatsBOSH (user info) at 2006-08-04 11:01:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
it looks like that chick is trying to not smile while she holds her swordlike penis as it pees blood.
Submitted by ripple (user info) at 2006-08-04 10:46:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
and if youre going to use the gothic-era pronouns in an attempt to sound sophisticated, you should modify the verbs as well.
"thou will" is just plain terrible
Submitted by ripple (user info) at 2006-08-04 10:45:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
ive read all your poems. i dont like any of them. i dont dislike them based on content alone, or based on your lameness alone, i dislike them because theyre bad.
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the gothic phrasing (twas and thou) is extremely incongruent with the rest of the poem. also, you have no meter or flow.
and you did a poor job of invoking the reader.
Submitted by paint_it_black (user info) at 2006-08-04 08:35:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
fucking losers should be reading this
Submitted by orph (user info) at 2006-08-04 07:10:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Ha ha ha ha ha
Submitted by fun_with_needles (user info) at 2006-08-03 04:18:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Danzig
Submitted by Calios (user info) at 2006-07-28 07:14:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
the drawing isn't bad, but the position of the sword makes it look like futanari
Submitted by inion_de_trua (user info) at 2006-07-11 10:04:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
that's why i gave a -1. if the drawing's his then i'll let that stay, if not then -2 for crappy poem and stealing.
Submitted by Wrightcopy (user info) at 2006-07-11 09:50:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2006-07-10 02:10:50 (#)
Ranking: 0
HOW CAN YOU NOT KNOW "THE NEVERENDING STORY"
IT"S FALCOR
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD
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This made me laugh. And I'm glad I'm not the only one who first thought of The Neverending Story with this title.
Submitted by Anansie (user info) at 2006-07-11 09:47:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Is the drawing yours? It does kick ass. I assumed it was a googled image.
Submitted by inion_de_trua (user info) at 2006-07-11 09:45:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
i liked the drawing but not the poem. is the drawing yours?
Submitted by Anansie (user info) at 2006-07-11 09:31:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2006-07-11 08:56:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
thedarknessfromabove ?
areyoubobbymoore?
Submitted by awj002 (user info) at 2006-07-10 08:41:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
not sure about the old english pronouns
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2006-07-10 02:10:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
HOW CAN YOU NOT KNOW "THE NEVERENDING STORY"
IT"S FALCOR
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD
Submitted by AnotherHeather (user info) at 2006-07-10 00:04:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-07-09 23:58:23 (#)
Ranking: 0
I like the picture. The rest, not so much.
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Wasn't there a movie about The Nothing with a flying dog in it? The Last Starfighter or something.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-07-09 23:58:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I like the picture. The rest, not so much.
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2006-07-09 23:46:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
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Submitted by rockdocc (user info) at 2006-07-09 23:32:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
would make a damn good metal song.