label yourself (1161 hits)
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Submitted by <thedarknessfromabove.at.gmail.com> (View user info) at 2006-07-13 05:10:56 EDT
shadow, creeping, shameful
under no obligation to prove an existence
could it be that you will walk this Earth forever?
kindred spirits who are yet to meet, not yet complete
many moons ago we fought the same battle
you chose your path, and I, mine.
coming closer now to another end
oh cruel night, I have not yet begun to hurt!
come the darkness, I exist only in energy
keeping watch over my kindred spirit
for too long you have let me choose
and when will you let me opt out?
grasping at straws we both know the truth
gasping for breathe I always felt smothered
Oh! a watchful eye - Never!
time has told and will tell again
sinner.
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Submitted by frankthebear (user info) at 2006-10-11 05:55:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by paint_it_black (user info) at 2006-09-24 03:09:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
heh heh
Submitted by Maltese (user info) at 2006-08-30 21:09:33 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by ripple (user info) at 2006-08-22 09:20:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Circe (user info) at 2006-08-17 12:26:25 (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by FartSmeller (user info) at 2006-07-13 08:39:28 (#)
Ranking: -2
Shadow, creeping, shameful. Under no obligation to prove an existence. Could it be that you will walk this Earth forever? kindred spirits who are yet to meet, not yet complete many moons ago we fought the same battle you chose your path, and I, mine.
coming closer now to another end oh cruel night, I have not yet begun to hurt! come the darkness,I exist only in energy,keeping watch over my kindred spirit for too long you have let me choose and when will you let me opt out? grasping at straws we both know the truth
gasping for breathe I always felt smothered Oh! a watchful eye - Never! time has told and will tell again sinner.
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How crazy is this? When it's arranged like this it's just sentences instead of a shitty fucking poem!
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When it's arranged like that it doesn't say "suck my cock faggots" in the left hand margin.
Honestly, have none of you noticed this about most of these poems?
Jesus fucking christ.
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CLASSIC
Submitted by ripple (user info) at 2006-08-22 09:18:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
im noticing a pattern: you thank people for their "honest feedback" only when they say positive things.
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Submitted by paint_it_black (user info) at 2006-08-12 11:59:19 (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by rockdocc (user info) at 2006-08-11 02:05:26 (#)
Ranking: 1
this was pretty good.
it could make a pretty good iced earth song.
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Thankyou,
I appreciate your honest feedback.
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Submitted by paint_it_black (user info) at 2006-08-20 05:26:39 (#)
Ranking: 0
Finally, I get some HONEST reviews...
Thankyou
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Submitted by rockdocc (user info) at 2006-08-11 02:08:42 (#)
Ranking: 2
this...this is my favorite so far. Very dark (without being cheesy) and edgy. It definately leads the reader on before culminating in an ending that definately fits the rest of the piece. Like I said, this is by far the best of all your poems.
this formula works....the others...not so much.
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honesty, as far yous poems are concerned, is brutal. there are people on here, myself included, who have given you honest feedback with honest, negative ratings. you ignore it to focus on the shit that feeds your ego. grow up.
Submitted by Circe (user info) at 2006-08-17 12:26:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by FartSmeller (user info) at 2006-07-13 08:39:28 (#)
Ranking: -2
Shadow, creeping, shameful. Under no obligation to prove an existence. Could it be that you will walk this Earth forever? kindred spirits who are yet to meet, not yet complete many moons ago we fought the same battle you chose your path, and I, mine.
coming closer now to another end oh cruel night, I have not yet begun to hurt! come the darkness,I exist only in energy,keeping watch over my kindred spirit for too long you have let me choose and when will you let me opt out? grasping at straws we both know the truth
gasping for breathe I always felt smothered Oh! a watchful eye - Never! time has told and will tell again sinner.
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How crazy is this? When it's arranged like this it's just sentences instead of a shitty fucking poem!
___________________________
When it's arranged like that it doesn't say "suck my cock faggots" in the left hand margin.
Honestly, have none of you noticed this about most of these poems?
Jesus fucking christ.
Submitted by ilikesteak (user info) at 2006-08-12 20:01:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by paint_it_black (user info) at 2006-08-06 05:40:43 (#)
Ranking: 0
ilikesteak (or is it cock?)
you are a sheep, doomed to follow the mainstream commercial herd for eternity.
fuck you asshole
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What the fuck is wrong with you. I didn't -2 this post. I didn't read more than the title, but i's still not a negative number you mindless whore. You just copied the same thing and put it into all your posts. Whee!
Submitted by paint_it_black (user info) at 2006-08-12 11:59:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by rockdocc (user info) at 2006-08-11 02:05:26 (#)
Ranking: 1
this was pretty good.
it could make a pretty good iced earth song.
_____________________
Thankyou,
I appreciate your honest feedback.
Submitted by rockdocc (user info) at 2006-08-11 02:05:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
this was pretty good.
it could make a pretty good iced earth song.
Submitted by wingester1 (user info) at 2006-08-09 02:33:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
AWESOME WORK FARVA
Submitted by Ed_0150 (user info) at 2006-08-06 06:19:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I want to shit on your face.
Submitted by Istaros (user info) at 2006-08-06 06:08:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
the fallen one, i imagine.
wait, did i say 'one'? i meant, one out of seeming millions
Submitted by jgreening (user info) at 2006-08-06 05:55:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Wait, I forget. Which angel is this again?
Submitted by paint_it_black (user info) at 2006-08-06 05:40:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
ilikesteak (or is it cock?)
you are a sheep, doomed to follow the mainstream commercial herd for eternity.
fuck you asshole
Submitted by stok (user info) at 2006-08-05 06:20:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by LSD420 (user info) at 2006-08-02 11:08:28 (#)
Ranking: 0
SHOW US YOUR CUNT PLEASE
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Submitted by LSD420 (user info) at 2006-08-02 10:55:43 (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2006-08-02 10:53:31 (#)
Ranking: -2
I still do want to see her cunt.
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WE ALL DO! COME ON, PLEASE?!
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show cunt now
Submitted by MichelleNJ (user info) at 2006-08-04 15:51:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
filename
Submitted by ripple (user info) at 2006-08-04 11:27:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
i forgot something
Submitted by Laser (user info) at 2006-08-04 11:10:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Also, you have fucking labelled yourself as a fucking emo prick. I really do hate you
Submitted by Laser (user info) at 2006-08-04 11:09:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Need I say more?
Submitted by ripple (user info) at 2006-08-04 10:50:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
ive read all your poems. i dont like any of them. i dont dislike them based on content alone, or based on your lameness alone, i dislike them because theyre bad.
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i have a challenge for you. are you ready for it? cause i think its really good. ok, here it is:
TRY TO WRITE JUST ONE SINGLE FUCKING POEM WITHOUT THE WORD "CRUEL!"
i mean, use a thesaurus. its not cheating. its a literary assist. and you need all the help you can get.
Submitted by paint_it_black (user info) at 2006-08-04 08:31:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
fucking losers should be reading this
Submitted by mles76 (user info) at 2006-07-13 12:48:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Here's the other half of your well deserved -2
Submitted by mles76 (user info) at 2006-07-13 12:45:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Blah
Submitted by dove666 (user info) at 2006-07-13 12:38:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Hopefully, it is meaningful to YOU.
Submitted by BobLobla (user info) at 2006-07-13 10:25:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by gonefiguring (user info) at 2006-07-13 09:19:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
The post as a whole is moldy bread. "gasping for breathe" makes it a shit sandwich on moldy bread.
-2getonwithitalready
Submitted by FartSmeller (user info) at 2006-07-13 08:39:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Shadow, creeping, shameful. Under no obligation to prove an existence. Could it be that you will walk this Earth forever? kindred spirits who are yet to meet, not yet complete many moons ago we fought the same battle you chose your path, and I, mine.
coming closer now to another end oh cruel night, I have not yet begun to hurt! come the darkness,I exist only in energy,keeping watch over my kindred spirit for too long you have let me choose and when will you let me opt out? grasping at straws we both know the truth
gasping for breathe I always felt smothered Oh! a watchful eye - Never! time has told and will tell again sinner.
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How crazy is this? When it's arranged like this it's just sentences instead of a shitty fucking poem!
Submitted by The_taste_of_Monkeys (user info) at 2006-07-13 08:01:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
If I read enough shit like this Im gonna PRAY for a brutal relapse, then maybe I too could churn out poorly written "goth" poetry about my pain...
or I might suck it up and skate it off like I did before...bitch! *odd gang hand gesture, MC Hammer leg-crossover dance, drive of in lowrider*
Submitted by sexualchocolate1984 (user info) at 2006-07-13 07:36:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Shite!
Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2006-07-13 06:54:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
whit?
Submitted by ilikesteak (user info) at 2006-07-13 06:52:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by The_taste_of_Monkeys (user info) at 2006-07-13 06:47:25 (#)
Ranking: -2
You know, when I read UTTER TRIPE like this, I wish the cancer had taken me, I really do
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You can still kill yourself. I'm god and I said it's ok for you to do it. Hell, I might even give you a relapse if you're lucky.
Submitted by The_taste_of_Monkeys (user info) at 2006-07-13 06:47:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
You know, when I read UTTER TRIPE like this, I wish the cancer had taken me, I really do
Submitted by ilikesteak (user info) at 2006-07-13 05:15:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I'm both the king of cheese and god. Top that bitch!