My Second Rape *or* Pasta, She Said (1336 hits)
Category: RomanceRating: 0.66 on 19 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by KindaNews (View user info) at 2006-07-25 01:24:59 EDT
My First Rape: http://www.ubersite.com/m/90832
He entered through the front, taking care to catch the screen door before it slammed. He didn't want to announce his arrival. Glancing quickly up and down the street for nosy neighbors, he gently closed the inside door behind him.
He was exceptionally quiet.
At the exact moment the latch caught, he heard a noise from the kitchen.
He ducked to the floor next a small wooden table in the sitting room, which provided very little actual cover.
He was, however, very good at disappearing into small places.
He silently cursed his luck. He'd given her ample time, or so he thought, to put her groceries away after following her home, and was hoping to slip in and do his business while she showered and changed, as was her practice.
He'd been watching her for weeks, timing her every action.
He heard a refrigerator open and close, and the sound of water running.
He considered calling the whole thing off, and returning another day.
Suddenly, the woman left the kitchen, and he watched as she passed through the large entry on her way to the back of the house.
She was very tall, very blonde, and very sexy. She wore a very short skirt, very high heels, and a very low cut blouse with no bra.
Everything about her was very.
His eyes followed her down the hall. He suddenly realized he was rubbing his dick through his jeans, and it was HARD.
This could get interesting, he thought, and moved quickly towards the kitchen.
Water was heating on the stove, and pasta, tomatoes and mushrooms were laid neatly on the counter by the sink.
He ducked into an alcove on the far side of the kitchen, and crouched next to a washer-dryer.
He heard footsteps in the hall, and then the sound of her entering the kitchen.
He peered out and saw she hadn't changed.
His eyes scoured her body from her high heels, up her shapely legs, and past her ass, which he imagined was covered by the barest of materials, to finally rest on her lovely white neck.
He wanted to touch that neck.
A decision was made, and the thought of what he was going to do made his cock throb.
He was totally into it now, excited by the sudden change of plans.
He watched her like an animal, waiting for the right moment.
She took off her right earring, and started to remove the other when she dropped the first one on the floor.
She bent down to pick it up, and he caught a glimpse of her white panties.
He sprang, taking her from behind. Her earrings rattled across the floor.
He cupped his elbow against her shoulder, and firmly covered her mouth with his hand, forcing his middle finger past her lips.
He liked the soft wetness of her tongue against the calloused skin of his middle finger.
Her mouth felt like a vagina.
He slid his other hand under her skirt, groping her pussy through her panties.
She gasped and he forced two more fingers into her mouth. He pulled her hard against his body, his left hand still gripping her cunt. He slid a finger inside her panties and flicked it across her pussy.
"Don't move, and you won't get hurt," he whispered hoarsely, his lips inside her ear.
His fingers probed her mouth, as his other hand groped between her legs.
He found her cunt, and pushed a finger inside her.
She jerked against him and bit down on his fingers.
He spun her around, pivoting his body with hers, and pushed her towards the sink. She reached out to brace herself against the counter.
He yanked her hips hard against his own and pushed his hard cock against her ass. She gasped at the feel of his erection.
She struggled harder, so he wrapped his arms around her tightly, groping her tits and pinning her with his muscular forearms.
He put his hand on her neck.
"Don't make a fucking sound," he said in a raw whisper. "Just do as I say."
She relaxed slightly, and he moved his right arm around her waist. His right hand cupped her breast, kneading it through her shirt.
Her nipple hardened and his breath grew hot.
With his other hand he unzipped and pulled out his cock.
He reached inside her blouse, roughly squeezing her soft breast and pinching her nipple between his fingers.
She moaned, and he guided his cock up under her tiny skirt, rubbing it against the small of her back.
He bit her shoulder as he used the head of his cock to pull her panties down below her cheeks.
He began to thrust his cock between her legs, rubbing it back and forth against her pussy.
He spread her legs with his own.
She was slick now, which made him more excited, and he began to move his hips faster.
She braced herself on the counter as he pushed his cock all the way inside her with one hard thrust.
They gasped together as he yanked her panties down to her knees and began to thrust inside her. He rose onto his toes with each push, fucking upwards inside of her.
He grabbed her hair and pulled her head back, biting her ear.
"Drop your panties," he whispered, as he continued to fuck her.
"Do it!"
She closed her legs, squeezing his cock, and let her panties drop.
"Spread your legs."
She spread them wide.
He pushed her head down over the sink so he could fuck her deeper.
She began to moan in spite of herself and that made him pump harder.
"Wider," he hissed, and as she spread her legs even more he lifted her skirt so he could see her ass.
He yanked her waist back and thrust hard, his balls slapping hard against her cheeks as he got into a rhythm.
She braced her hands against the backsplash, and began to push against him, moving her hips opposite his in spite of herself.
He continued to fuck her, rubbing her tits, which were out of her shirt and swinging with each thrust.
Her nipples were hard in his hands.
He slid one hand down and rubbed her clit, feeling his cock move in and out just below his fingers.
She moaned louder, and he pulled his cock out, slapping it against her pussy hard and fast.
Her body tensed with each wet pop.
He entered her again, took several hard strokes, and pulled out to rub the head of his cock back and forth across her cunt.
She held her breath.
They both knew she was trying not to come.
He stroked faster against her burning cunt as she orgasmed, her entire body shaking with the intensity.
She cried out as he beat his cock against her slick pussy, until her orgasm slowly subsided, and then he pushed inside her again, fucking her slow and deep as she flinched with each stroke.
Limp with exhaustion, she lowered her head as he slapped her ass and ever so slowly pulled out his cock.
He spun her around, and they faced each other for the first time.
Their eyes locked as he put his hands around the lovely white neck he had so admired before.
He squeezed.
Her eyes grew wide.
He slid his hands to her shoulders and pushed her down on her knees.
He rubbed the head of his cock against her lips, and circled her mouth.
"Suck my cock," he said.
She just looked up at him, breathing heavily.
"Open-your-fucking-mouth."
She did and he pushed his cock inside.
"Like you love it," he said, and he began to fuck her mouth, slowly at first, pulling all the way out with every stroke so he could see her lips on its head.
He began to pump faster, his purple cock wet with her saliva.
He grabbed a fistful hair in each hand and began to thrust harder and deeper, shoving his cock to the back of her throat with each stroke.
"I'm gonna come down your throat. You're gonna choke on it."
She gagged. Her lips felt very hot.
He tensed his ass with each stroke and fucked her mouth faster, her throaty muffled cries making his cock even harder, if that was possible.
He looked down into her eyes, wild and tense, burning into his own, and felt her hands grip his ass.
Her nails dug in, but it was the eyes that did it.
He exploded in her mouth with hot come that seemed to go on forever.
She tried to pull away but he grabbed the back of her head and thrust until his cock nearly disappeared.
She couldn't swallow it all, and as he continued to pump her mouth, his semen ran down the side of her face as her nostrils flared with quick, shallow breaths.
He relaxed his grip, and threw his head back. He moved slower now, occasionally glancing down to watch his cock go into her mouth.
Finally, he slid it all the way out nice and easy, and bit his lip as her teeth scraped the head.
He stroked his shaft roughly, squeezing out the last drops of come, and painted her lips.
"Lick it clean."
She looked up at him through feral, slitted eyes.
"Lick it."
She stuck out her tongue, and licked the head of his cock.
He recoiled with pleasure, and he moved so she could lick the shaft.
She reached out and took hold of him.
He looked down at her, surprised, as she held his cock in her hands, just staring at the swollen head.
He guided her to her feet, his cock still wet from her pussy and her mouth and his come.
They just stood there, breathing heavily, eyes wide.
He grabbed her roughly, and kissed her long and sweet. He could taste himself in her mouth.
When he finally released her, he just looked into her milky blue eyes, and smiled the smile of the empty.
Her eyes narrowed.
He threw his head back and laughed.
She just looked at him, an oddly knowing expression on her face.
After a moment, he said, "What's for dinner, honey?"
She smiled sweetly, her mouth still warm from her husband's come.
"Pasta," she said.
User Reviews
Submitted by RyuFu (user info) at 2006-08-09 12:16:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Throughout the whole thing I felt it was in the 0.5 - 1.0 range, but then the final few lines wrapped this up. Very funny, very entertaining.
Submitted by HHH (user info) at 2006-07-27 08:15:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
AHAHAHAHHHAAHAHHAHAHAHAHAI DO THAT ALL THE TIME TO ME WIFEY!
Submitted by Secularity (user info) at 2006-07-26 06:28:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
"and just so you know, jaypig, if I wrote something this good, I would DEFINATELY take credit for it!"
Whos jaypig?
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2006-07-25 19:52:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by Secularity (user info) at 2006-07-25 04:56:34 (#)
Ranking: -2
"He exploded in her mouth with hot come that seemed to go on forever."
You should shoot yourself in the face. No seriously, shoot yourself in the face. Actually I'm sure you're enough of a burden on this world as it is and no one wants to clean up your mess. Jump into a garbage bin, eat a few cyanide tablets and attach a handwritten note with a fingerprint and audio recording of you telling everyone that it's for the greatest good. This has nothing to do with literature; there is no point or substance of any kind. I would rather read a narrative of Rush Limbaugh's colonoscopy.
Fuck you fuckwit,
Joey
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and just so you know, jaypig, if I wrote something this good, I would DEFINATELY take credit for it!
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2006-07-25 18:55:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
She was very tall, very blonde, and very sexy. She wore a very short skirt, very high heels, and a very low cut blouse with no bra.
Everything about her was very.
His eyes followed her down the hall. He suddenly realized he was rubbing his dick through his jeans, and it was HARD.
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Didn't like this section and the ending was predictable. Good otherwise.
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2006-07-25 18:04:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by Secularity (user info) at 2006-07-25 04:56:34 (#)
Ranking: -2
"He exploded in her mouth with hot come that seemed to go on forever."
You should shoot yourself in the face. No seriously, shoot yourself in the face. Actually I'm sure you're enough of a burden on this world as it is and no one wants to clean up your mess. Jump into a garbage bin, eat a few cyanide tablets and attach a handwritten note with a fingerprint and audio recording of you telling everyone that it's for the greatest good. This has nothing to do with literature; there is no point or substance of any kind. I would rather read a narrative of Rush Limbaugh's colonoscopy.
Fuck you fuckwit,
Joey
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that's good hate!
Submitted by ubetidid (user info) at 2006-07-25 16:20:33 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
pretty good stuff.
i think i'll make pasta tonight.
Submitted by alwayspeach1 (user info) at 2006-07-25 12:39:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Well written. I'm usually a big fan of paragraphs. But this worked for me. I'm sure if distracted others, but I think it added to the suspense (if thats what you could call it). Not bad for porn.
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2006-07-25 08:58:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I *know* I've seen this somewhere else before.
Submitted by sicosemen (user info) at 2006-07-25 08:42:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I'm on the fence with this one. Super very predictable as it was, this could have been even better if you grouped your sentences into these things called paragraphs. This just read like a humpty dumpty....dah da dah da dah dah dah dahhh dah da dah....blah blah bla blah blah bllah.
Submitted by WatchMyStep (user info) at 2006-07-25 05:32:27 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Predictable but well written.
Submitted by Chicane (user info) at 2006-07-25 05:26:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
http://www.ubersite.com/m/90832#2073457
Submitted by Chicane (user info) at 2006-07-25 05:22:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
paragraphs, motherfucker, use them.
Submitted by Secularity (user info) at 2006-07-25 04:56:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
"He exploded in her mouth with hot come that seemed to go on forever."
You should shoot yourself in the face. No seriously, shoot yourself in the face. Actually I'm sure you're enough of a burden on this world as it is and no one wants to clean up your mess. Jump into a garbage bin, eat a few cyanide tablets and attach a handwritten note with a fingerprint and audio recording of you telling everyone that it's for the greatest good. This has nothing to do with literature; there is no point or substance of any kind. I would rather read a narrative of Rush Limbaugh's colonoscopy.
Fuck you fuckwit,
Joey
Submitted by ilikesteak (user info) at 2006-07-25 04:23:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Another beautifully written rape.
Submitted by SullyThePirate (user info) at 2006-07-25 03:28:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I like the first better, this 'surprise' method of the victim knowing the rapist is almost a cliche at this point. Fully explained on page 14 of the rape fiction manual.
Submitted by Merlina (user info) at 2006-07-25 02:42:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
That was actually bloody good. Although I knew what was going to happen at the end.
Still... bloody well written. +2
Submitted by DirtyDoubleEntendre (user info) at 2006-07-25 01:47:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
"He entered through the front"
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HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! EXCELLENT FIRST LINE!
I liked My First Rape more.
But this was still awesome.
-1 because it's late and that formatting hurt my head.
Submitted by eppliks (user info) at 2006-07-25 01:44:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Everything about her was very.
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Did you watch 'Heathers' last night too?