Anal, He Wrote (NSFW) (1612 hits)
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Submitted by eppliks (View user info) at 2006-07-25 01:35:59 EDT
"Go ahead," she said, lying on her stomach and waiting for him. She wore a blue shirt, unbuttoned, and that was it. Her feet were bare. Her legs were completely uncovered. And her ass, delicate and soft, yet firm, was open to the air. She'd never had anything inside, until this day, at her request.
Kneeling between her spread legs with an erection firmer than any before, he stared at her ass, contemplating whether or not to destroy the only remaining facet of her virginity.
While she was a submissive one- as that was her prime turn-on- she was certainly agressive. She hated virginity, and she laughed and cried the day that he broke her hymen. She sucked his dick, as if it were the last operating spigot of water on Earth, and she swallowed his cum, as if it were the only drops of clean water available. She savored sexual freedom, as if her virginity had manifested itself around her, like prison bars; and the only key to the gate was a hard, loving cock.
She wanted to make sure that she'd never feel alone, ever again. She wanted it all, after 18 years without even a single kiss.
"Fuck me."
She wasn't asking for it. She didn't beg for it. This was a demand.
"But," he started, and while silent and searching for the right way to explain himself, he realized his brief, unintentional pun. "I don't want to do this," he finished, quickly.
With that, he turned away from her and sat on the edge of the mattress. Without raising from her position, she began to state her case. "What's wrong with it? We trust eachother, don't we?"
"Yeah. I do trust you..."
"And I love you so much. Don't you love me?"
He found her explanatory methods to be nothing short of manipulative, but had he considered the power of her repressed libido, he might've given in at that moment.
"YES, I love you. I love you more than I've ever loved any woman," he began, "but why spoil you? I love how open you are, but I don't want to spoil you." He was bewildered by her desires. He never expected his square-specked introverted sweetheart to approach him with such wild fantasies. "I mean- and I know this sounds stupid and hokey, but- you're special." He meant what he said, but this didn't satisfy her.
"I know," she started, scoffing, yet maintaining her position, in hopes that he'd come around. "I love you oh so very much," she 'cuted' her speech to draw him in. "And I thought that you, my love, wouldn't be afraid to help me, no matter what. I know what you mean, but please... This works for both of us. Just go until you cum. I promise that you'll like it."
"How?" he growled at her. "I know this is weird, but... what if I can't look at you, same as I do now?"
"Just trust me, please. If you love me, and you trust me, then this wont bother you as much as it does now. Please? After you come, we'll feel even closer."
"How the fuck do you know?"
"Just lay on my back..."
She nestled her head into the pillow and closed her eyes. He tried to make her pay attention to more of his bullshit, but she didn't move. She laid there with a smirk, waiting for her education.
"This just doesn't feel right," he said, as he laid over her back.
"Yeah, but your hard-on tells a different story."
"I can't help that!"
He laid there, frozen for a moment, as he slowly wrapped his arms under and around her torso. "But, you are gliding" she said, commenting on the way he rubbed his dick across her backside, in the classic humping motion. "I cant help that, either."
"Yes, you can."
His irritiation built, and not only for her teasing.
"Oh really?" he said, not realizing what he was walking into. "How?"
She reached behind herself and found his dick, so engourged that his pronounced veins were rock-hard. The oozing pre-cum had engulfed his cock down to the base of the shaft, and was now leaving a puddle on the small of her back. He shook from nervousness. "Wow. I've never seen you like this before."
She took hold of his penis, and ran the head back and forth along the inside of her crack, feeling for the opening of her anus. She ruined her sheets.
"That's how," she said, finding the hole and finally stopping, clenching the tip of his rod at the entry of it's next destination. "Now push."
"What about lube?" he asked.
"I don't care, just push!" she yelled.
It's a funny thing. He had constantly jerked off at the thought of sodomizing and ultimately ruining his virginal princess, claiming her as his own. But now, when his fantasy came to fruition, he couldn't go through with it. It could've been, for that in his daydreams, she didn't want it, and he took it anyway. Maybe he was afraid that he'd come too quickly. Or perhaps, it could've been for the fact that he did love her, and his love fueled his reservation. Then again-
"Push!"
He took the base of his cock in his hand, and slowly but surely, he guided it in.
Within the opening, she gasped one hell of a long, deep gasp. But by the time the tip had entered, as the shaft slowly followed, she screamed. "Wait!" she yelled, as her voice cracked in pain. Out of panic, he withdrew instantly. "See? This is another reason that I didn't want-"
"No! No! Put it back in!"
He didn't give it a second of thought. He finally figured that if she was sure, then he'd trust her.
This time, however, he entered much slower. This time, she gasped as if she felt relief.
With her eyes shut tight, she laid on the bed, waiting for what felt like an eternity, as he filled her ass with his dick. Finally, he reached the hilt.
"Go slow," she said. "Claim me."
As he slowly withdrew for his first stroke, she felt much better. When he reset his dick, it didn't hurt as bad as before. Actually, she felt good.
He went slow, just as she requested. Her virgin anus made quite an impression on his dick, as it clamped around the head and welcomed the shaft, in and out.
"You feel so good," he said. "Do you even like this?"
"Yes," she answered. "Don't stop. Actually, I want you to go a bit faster."
So he picked up the pace, at first treating her asshole like a virginal hymen. Minutes went by, and his pace increased. Soon, he was humping her butt like regular fucking. He got a kick out of her rhythmic groans, sounding off every time his cock disappeared into her butt. And soon, he felt himself building towards orgasm.
"Darling," he started, "want me to pull out?"
She didn't respond. She just laid there, absorbing what she could get from him, with an expression of bliss. He asked her several times afterward, but she just wouldn't respond, as he pumped away at her ass, thrusting and thrusting, as his dick became engorged to its maximum size, with a familiar tickle beginning at the very tip.
Finally...
He came, but this time, it was different. This time, he could actually feel his dick pulsating in time with his heart, as his penis pumped a steady stream of warm cum into her butt. She was a bit disappointed that it was ending, but ultimately, she was satisfied. He continued to work out the spurts, which seemed to literally spill out of his dick.
By the time his orgasm had subsided, he withdrew his used prick from her ass and laid down. He contemplated the time before, and how his views contrasted with who he was now. Anal sex with a loving girl is a life-alterning experience (depending on how much you love her, anyway).
"So," he said. "Was it all that you thought it would be?"
"Well... that was pretty fun," she answered. "We'll have to try it out again, sometime."
Then they held eachother and kissed forever, sated, and more in love than ever.
Yeah, but she moved to Kentucky three months later. She smokes meth on a regular basis, and her kids wont stop fuckin' crying.
He became a Souz Chef at a local restaurant. He collects hummels from QVC, and he doesn't even remember the bitch's name.
...What?
User Reviews
Submitted by UnderOathMeal (user info) at 2006-09-10 08:48:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by keskanu (user info) at 2006-08-27 09:02:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
No Comment
Submitted by paint_it_black (user info) at 2006-08-27 08:29:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
can't believe i never -2'd this
Submitted by eppliks (user info) at 2006-07-27 01:16:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by Playboy (user info) at 2006-07-26 03:08:56 (#)
Ranking: -2
I'm still bendable
So you're ungradeable
________________
There's only one possible thing I could say to that, Maltese:
Particle man, particle man
Doing the things a particle can
Whats he like? its not important
Particle man
Is he a dot, or is he a speck?
When hes underwater does he get wet?
Or does the water get him instead?
Nobody knows, particle man
Triangle man, triangle man
Triangle man hates particle man
They have a fight, triangle wins
Triangle man
Universe man, universe man
Size of the entire universe man
Usually kind to smaller man
Universe man
Hes got a watch with a minute hand,
Millenium hand and an eon hand
When they meet its a happy land
Powerful man, universe man
Person man, person man
Hit on the head with a frying pan
Lives his life in a garbage can
Person man
Is he depressed or is he a mess?
Does he feel totally worthless?
Who came up with person man?
Degraded man, person man
Triangle man, triangle man
Triangle man hates person man
They have a fight, triangle wins
Triangle man
Submitted by Playboy (user info) at 2006-07-26 03:08:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I'm still bendable
So you're ungradeable
Submitted by eppliks (user info) at 2006-07-26 00:10:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by Maltese (user info) at 2006-07-25 07:06:22 (#)
Ranking: -2
Go
Submitted by Maltese (user info) at 2006-07-25 07:06:08 (#)
Ranking: -2
fucking
Submitted by Maltese (user info) at 2006-07-25 07:05:55 (#)
Ranking: -2
kill
Submitted by Maltese (user info) at 2006-07-25 07:05:39 (#)
Ranking: -2
yourself
________
Sure thing. Thanks for the support.
Submitted by The_Cyst_Master (user info) at 2006-07-25 18:25:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Agreed.
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2006-07-25 18:15:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
"Go slow," she said. "Claim me."
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2006-07-25 16:48:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
it was actually kind of good
Submitted by inion_de_trua (user info) at 2006-07-25 16:43:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
post sucked.
plus i'm annoyed i can't identify the penis.
Submitted by ubetidid (user info) at 2006-07-25 16:38:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Jesus, that's a HUGE peener.
my butt just did a involuntary kegel.
Submitted by fluff (user info) at 2006-07-25 16:00:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
WOW!
You are an asshole.
Submitted by Maltese (user info) at 2006-07-25 07:06:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Go
Submitted by Maltese (user info) at 2006-07-25 07:06:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
fucking
Submitted by Maltese (user info) at 2006-07-25 07:05:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
kill
Submitted by Maltese (user info) at 2006-07-25 07:05:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
yourself
Submitted by Life101 (user info) at 2006-07-25 03:12:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by KindaNews (user info) at 2006-07-25 02:15:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 for the title.
Ironically, the story was a little like dry anal, if you know what I mean.
Submitted by Kent_Weirdo (user info) at 2006-07-25 01:51:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
"Yeah, but she moved to Kentucky three months later. She smokes meth on a regular basis, and her kids wont stop fuckin' crying."
How the living fuck did she have kids (plural) over a three-month period?
-2 because you're a piece of shit, anyway