ADD - Victim Of Progress (593 hits)
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Submitted by kaos-king (antius777) (View user info) at 2006-07-29 00:17:40 EDT
Comp Link... http://www.ubersite.com/m/91007
ADD - New World Order...http://www.ubersite.com/m/91027
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Asmodeus surveyed the scene with disapproval. Their so-called "champion" was currently shoving his cock into the mouth of a four year old girl. The child was quite dead, and her body lay a few feet away. The mortal was mumbling something incoherent as he thrusted away at the severed head. Asmodeus rolled his eyes and returned to Hell.
Storming into the council chambers, he was surprised to find most of the Infernal Princes already in attendance. Punctuality was never a strong attribute among the Damned. Belial raised a hand in greetings and turned back to conversation with Mammon. Beelzebub sipped on chai latte quietly and gave dirty looks to Dagon who was seated across from him. Astaroth was playing solitaire.
Moloch slinked up behind him and coughed. "How was your visit?"
"Fucking ridiculous," replied Asmodeus.
"Figured as much," hacked Moloch. "We really dropped the ball on that one."
"Where's Lucifer? I'm surprised His Highness isn't here yet."
Moloch sighed. "He's fighting with Lilith again. Something about the curtains in the new wing of the Gehenna palace."
"Wonderful," spat Asmodeus. "Are we suppose to wait for him or..."
"I've got all the field reports in here," said Moloch holding up his laptop.
Asmodeus ran a hand across his face in exasperation.
"What? This helps me keep track of all the quarterly reviews and such. Have you ever seen inside of Mammon's office? Unbelievable that he can..."
Lucifer materialized behind them on his cell phone, still arguing with Lilith. He strolled past the two demons into the conference room, gesturing them to follow. His personal assistants had already fetched his coffee.
Asmodeus gritted his teeth and shuffled in behind Moloch.
User Reviews
Submitted by ColchesterDr (user info) at 2006-08-02 04:01:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by inion_de_trua (user info) at 2006-08-01 22:48:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
hahahha. i liked this view of the title.
Submitted by Maltese (user info) at 2006-08-01 22:38:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
You +2ed my last post. Your reward? +2s on your five most recent posts.
Submitted by recall (user info) at 2006-07-30 14:40:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Hah. I loved this.
Submitted by KindaNews (user info) at 2006-07-30 13:40:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Nice.
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2006-07-29 16:32:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
The office life of the damned. How charming.
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2006-07-29 15:30:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2006-07-29 15:21:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
did you get it yet? should be there any day now.
Submitted by foodman (user info) at 2006-07-29 13:51:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Needs more Marduk.
Kinda reminds me of a piece I penned a while back....
http://www.ubersite.com/m/64111
Except it's better than mine.
Submitted by awesome_face (user info) at 2006-07-29 13:20:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I just read this actually. Intriguing.
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2006-07-29 10:13:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
that turned out rather cute
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2006-07-29 09:19:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
cool.
Submitted by Chroniclysm (user info) at 2006-07-29 05:58:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Hey, mind if I send you something to read over? I think it's in the general direction of what's "up your alley."
It's a work in progress, but I figure I have to get the beginning right or I'll give up on it.
Submitted by Stagger_Lee (user info) at 2006-07-29 01:01:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Ahahaha beautiful.
Submitted by Crystle (user info) at 2006-07-29 00:41:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
your writing pulls incredible amounts of feelings - I was utterly revolted, but then drawn into what basically amounts to dialogue with very little story line.
Amazing.
Submitted by Antioxident (user info) at 2006-07-29 00:30:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-07-29 00:24:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Auto +2 Beelzebub sipped on chai latte
Submitted by awesome_face (user info) at 2006-07-29 00:18:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
totally stopped reading all of these.