St. Eubrie: 1859 Cherry Avenue- Marty and Bobby- 2 (760 hits)
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Submitted by awesomeface (View user info) at 2006-08-09 12:47:46 EDT
http://www.ubersite.com/m/91431- Marty and Bobby- Part 1
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Katherine Blake looked at the clock on her desk and began to worry.
"Dr. Phillips, Marissa is scheduled today, right?" Dr. Phillips tilted his glasses down and looked at his watch.
"Yeah, she was supposed to be in like an hour ago." He hadn't noticed since he had a lot of early morning patients to deal with. "Didn't her brother just get home from Afghanistan?"
"Yeah but...she normally would have called off for the day. That's not like her."
"Just give her a call, if she shows then she shows, if not it's her ass."
"Alright." Kate sighed as she dialed Marissa's home phone but got no answer. The same with her cell. Kate was worried but she couldn't just leave. Just as Kate began to ponder what could have happened more appointments walked through the door.
"Hi, how can I help you?" She said as the well being of her friend slipped her mind.
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Marty spent a good hour on the road thinking about Marissa. He was worried about her. Breaking an engagement is no easy task. All the brainstorming and wondering made him think about the other love of his life.
He opened the glove and pulled out a pack of cigarettes. He dug into his pocket for his Zippo but only felt his phone.
"The hell?" Marty said becoming worried. His lighter was nowhere to be found. He pulled over on the side of the empty country road. "Where the fuck is it?" The lighter was important to Marty. It was gold plated and had the engraving of the 25th Infantry Division on it. He was attached to a Stryker Brigade in the 25th when he deployed to Iraq. He would be sitting in one of those sweat boxes for hours and he would fiddle with it much to the annoyance of his squad. He kept it with him his whole tour there and it was gone. He tore the Jeep apart looking for it.
While ducking his head under a seat searching he dialed Marissa's cell.
"Hey this is Marissa, leave your name and number and ill get right back to." Marty hung up before the message finished. It was nice to hear her voice even though it was a recording.
"She's probably at work." He sighed searching through his long list of numbers. The phone rang twice when a young woman's voice came over the receiver.
"Phillips medical offices, this is Kate how may I help you?"
"Hi I'm calling for Marissa Davis." Marty was still sticking his head into the far corners of the Jeep.
"She hasn't come in yet today. May I ask whose calling?"
"This is her brother Marty."
"Oh Marty...I thought she was with you."
"What time was she supposed to be in?"
"About an hour and a half ago."
"Is she answering her home phone?"
"No, Bobby didn't pick up either."
"Fuck." Marty sighed without excusing his language. "Thank you Kate. Give me a call at this number if you hear from her."
"No problem." Marty heard her say when he flipped the phone closed. Marissa was all Marty had left and he felt like he was worrying a little bit more than he should. He couldn't shake the thought from his head that something bad may have happened. She didn't show up to work, she isn't picking up any phone and nobody has heard from her. Marty likes to call that missing. All the while there was no word from Bobby either and he didn't have Bobby's cell. Marty called the office again.
"Phillips medical offices this is..."
"Hi Kate it's Marty again." He interrupted. "Where does Bobby work?"
"Sonny's Auto. Why?"
"Kate...I never called ok?"
"Marty...if something's happened to her I want to know."
"I will update you but you need to keep quiet about this."
"Alright." Marty felt like she was biting her lip over the phone.
"Ill call you back in a few hours." Marty said before hanging up. Marty pulled out his "other" love from the glove compartment, a black M9. He slapped a mag into the bottom and pulled the slide back to hear a satisfying click.
The Jeep pulled off the side of the road and made a U turn. Marty gunned the Jeep down the road.
"St. Eubrie...welcome to Marty."
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User Reviews
Submitted by Crystle (user info) at 2006-11-01 21:40:21 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2006-08-15 21:10:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by KindaNews (user info) at 2006-08-09 12:58:13 (#)
Ranking: 1
Pretty good, but still a little glitchy here and there.
It also seemed a little abrupt to me.
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Pay no attention to this talentless shitstick.
Abrupt is what your wife told me about you. . .
Submitted by Foolproof (user info) at 2006-08-10 08:54:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Sorry
Submitted by awesome_face (user info) at 2006-08-09 22:34:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Thanks for the zero FP.
Submitted by Foolproof (user info) at 2006-08-09 20:12:29 EDT (#)
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I'LL KILL YOU!!
*shakes fist in air swearing vengance*
Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2006-08-09 15:17:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-08-09 13:33:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
HA- Last line was kind of cheesy. Good character and continuation.
Submitted by awesome_face (user info) at 2006-08-09 13:28:38 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Foolproof (user info) at 2006-08-09 13:19:04 (#)
Ranking: 2
Check yer email.
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Check the filename!!!
hahahah
Submitted by Foolproof (user info) at 2006-08-09 13:19:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Check yer email.
Submitted by awesome_face (user info) at 2006-08-09 13:12:58 EDT (#)
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Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2006-08-09 13:12:17 (#)
Ranking: 2
DNR
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Did not read?
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2006-08-09 13:12:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
DNR
Submitted by KindaNews (user info) at 2006-08-09 12:58:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Pretty good, but still a little glitchy here and there.
It also seemed a little abrupt to me.