Scenes from an American Resteraunt (624 hits)
Category: RomanceRating: -0.14 on 17 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Hookhand (View user info) at 2006-08-16 02:26:33 EDT
1. I was afraid this was a mistake
2. What?
1. I don't know......coming here
2. You expected to fight
1....Yeah. I expected you to yell at me. Call me a whore, blame me for your problems
2. If I were going to do that, mightn't I have done it when you attacked me on [message board]?
1. I still can't believe how you handled that. I expected you to let everything out
2. What, like stuff I promised never to repeat?
1. Pretty much
2. God damn it. Why did you leave?
1. I don't know anymore....
2. Because now you want to come back
1. Yeah......
2. And now I want you to come back
1. Right
2. And now that all of those pieces came together, it can't happen. You're fucking leaving
1. ............
2. That is the literal definition of tragic. Fucking look it up. Right next to the picture of Icarus
1. What do you want me to say?
2. You fucked up
1. I fucked up
2. You're a fucking idiot
1. I'm a fucking idiot
2. You don't love [current boyfriend]
1. ........He's a really nice guy. He respects me
2. You don't love him. We both know it
1. *Looks at half finished burger in silence
2. When are you leaving him?
1. I'm not
2. What the fuck [her name]?!
1. I don't think it will work long distance. But I am not dumping him now
2. Well, that's a fucking mistake, and we both know it. And here you are....
1. Here I am what?
2. Here you are fucking talking about getting back with me!
1. How long is Law school?
2. 3 years
1. Right. We are talking about maybe getting back together in 3 years.
2. IF we're both single
1. Right....I don't plan to date. I'm too fucked up right now
2. I don't either. But I will. I don't plan to wait
1. Are you excited about law school?
2. It's something to do. I don't really know why I even applied.
1. You remember when we were by your mailbox, and you got a brouchure from the law school?
2. ..........
1. And you opened it, and you decided to apply
2. Yeah, that was a little fucked up. I had JUST been talking about Law school with that other guy
1. Who?
2. The guy in my chem lab. Remember, he walked by outside right when we sat down here?
1. Yeah, well you didn't get on their mailing list by accident
2. .........
You sent them my name? That was you?
I came here tonight expecting to be so pissed off at you. I don't care if I never see you again. I needed you to tell me that so I could remember why I loved you.
User Reviews
Submitted by Axolotl (user info) at 2006-12-18 16:17:34 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
brilliant work
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2006-08-17 18:50:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
I've seen better
Submitted by blueboy (user info) at 2006-08-17 03:50:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
how dare you log in as me
Submitted by blueboy (user info) at 2006-08-16 14:21:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Type it out in word, and check out how other people do these types of stories on here.
Submitted by BLITZKREIG_BOB (user info) at 2006-08-16 10:37:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
"Resteraunt."
Submitted by Hookhand (user info) at 2006-08-16 10:33:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I thought about the formatting. I couldn't think of a better way to do it. I thought of writing "he said..... then she said..." like a Paul Simon jam or some shit, but that would have been worse. Any suggestions on a better format?
Submitted by alwayspeach1 (user info) at 2006-08-16 08:14:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
I liked it but I'm not sure why. The format was irritating. Perhaps something other than numbering or different spacing would have helped. I don't know.
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2006-08-16 06:04:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
at least it doesnt suck.
Submitted by The_Mighty_Badger (user info) at 2006-08-16 04:47:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
if
Submitted by The_Mighty_Badger (user info) at 2006-08-16 04:44:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
*cries*
Our mighty Queen would surely die is she read this!
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2006-08-16 04:38:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
hey um retard we don't need anybody making us look worse than we already do.
you ever try thinking before you speak or do you just open your mouth to change feet?
Submitted by fluffy_love (user info) at 2006-08-16 04:32:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/restaurant
rad was right
i like the story. woulda gave it +2 if it had an ending.
Submitted by fun_with_needles (user info) at 2006-08-16 04:28:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
1.Zzzzzz...
2.Zzzzzz?
3.......
4. Huh?? Oh...
5.Zzzzzzz
Submitted by Hookhand (user info) at 2006-08-16 03:36:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
This is America. I spell it resteraunt. These colors don't run.
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2006-08-16 03:30:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
restaurant
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2006-08-16 03:12:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
and if I had rating ability I would have given this a +1
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2006-08-16 03:09:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
FORMAT!
good content though