the raven call (461 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: -1.33 on 13 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by <tehdarknessfromabove.at.gcunt.com> (View user info) at 2006-08-20 19:12:49 EDT
hark, hear the raven call
it sings a song of my misery
of black eyeliner and fishnets
hidden n'sync records and
daddy's special touches
so i cut, cut, cut
to get the attention
i need so badly to feel loved
while frowning behind dyed hair
but, oh, shall i go to the prom
with my heart's desire
that gorgeous quaterback
who throws gum at me in study hall
no! I say, not i
better to curl up on my bed
under rainbowbrite sheets
and listen to the soothing sounds
of my chemical romance
dream of the day i'm appreciated
as the true artist i am
be gone to those who doubt
obviously they shop at the gap
User Reviews
Submitted by rockdocc (user info) at 2006-09-13 07:45:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
umm...the bandwagon left the building a long time ago....
you're fired.
Submitted by Maltese (user info) at 2006-09-13 07:37:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by goferforhire (user info) at 2006-08-20 22:08:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
http://www.ubersite.com/m/92040
Submitted by icarus1987 (user info) at 2006-08-20 21:41:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Needed more graphics, but otherwise a decent burn.
Submitted by LSD420 (user info) at 2006-08-20 20:16:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I WILL NO LONGER PUT UP WITH YOUR BINARY SPAMMING. THIS IS AN ASCII INTERNET COMMUNITY AND YOUR SPAM IS NOT ONLY IRRITATING BUT UNREADABLE. BART HAS BEEN CONTACTED.
Submitted by Unabonger (user info) at 2006-08-20 19:56:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
weren't you supposed to commit suicide last night?
Submitted by OfficeZombie (user info) at 2006-08-20 19:31:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
On the other hand, I thought it was pretty sweet.
Submitted by OfficeZombie (user info) at 2006-08-20 19:23:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Even though I'm pretty sure this is a fake, eat shit.
Submitted by UnderOathMeal (user info) at 2006-08-20 19:22:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by BLITZKREIG_BOB (user info) at 2006-08-20 19:16:56 (#)
Ranking: -2
Nevermore.
Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2006-08-20 19:22:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Nice burn, but could have been funnier...
Submitted by Sinistral (user info) at 2006-08-20 19:21:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
no
Submitted by Sockster (user info) at 2006-08-20 19:18:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by BLITZKREIG_BOB (user info) at 2006-08-20 19:16:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Nevermore.