Gothic Poetry (508 hits)
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Submitted by John Galt <UberJohnGalt.at.gmail.com> (View user info) at 2006-08-30 22:54:04 EDT
No, seriously. It's gothic poetry, but funny.
URL: http://www.deadlounge.com/poetry/
Make your own, post it here.
A few samples:
Remembrance of My Death
Around, all around, the angels gather.
My dread grows as the dagger of your words falls against my heart.
It slays me, and darkly my
blood drips
to the dead grass.
In pain I call your name
while death approaches.
Now alone, my essence falls upon cold eyes.
This is my doom
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A God that is Yours
Slender beams of moonlight enter
this darkened hall as I kneel,
always fearful, always silent,
frozen here,
waiting.
Accusing forms wrought in panes of glass loom as
dust dances in the air,
forming an image in my mind,
penetrating my naked soul.
Paleness on a deathless face.
I raise my head, now crying out for
this impassive Heaven.
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just another dang vampire wannabe
It is a night of blood, a song of dark desire,
wolves vent their cry. The beautiful one
rises.
Mist shrouds her deathly form,
an eternal wanting.
Her raven hair cascades over
fragile milk-white shoulders, and her
full really very deeply crimson lips part slightly, to taste the
blood streaming from the
pale flesh beneath
her.
Now a night of ecstasy,
I hunger.
User Reviews
Submitted by BLITZKREIG_BOB (user info) at 2006-08-31 08:54:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by The_Mighty_Badger (user info) at 2006-08-31 08:07:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by paint_it_black (user info) at 2006-08-31 00:31:57 (#)
Ranking: -2
FUCK ALL YOU ASSHOLES, i AM EMAILING BART TO GET YOU TO STOP.
THIS IS FROM PEOPLES HEARTS AND YOU MOCK IT.
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What are you, totally insane? Did you not notice that Bart gave this post a +1 already?
Submitted by VelvetElvis (user info) at 2006-08-31 02:51:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
What pisses me off beyond words(forget the modern day "Goths,") is that the real masters of Gothic lit get bunched in with the hot topic crowd. Lord Byron, Sir Walter Scott, these 19th century men wrote real literature, and were our equivalent of rock gods today. A travesty, and I hardly scratched the surface.
Submitted by d_prime (user info) at 2006-08-31 02:38:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 for pwning James Taggart.
Submitted by hot_pocket (user info) at 2006-08-31 01:19:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
no, bad boy! go sit in the corner! I MEAN IT!
Submitted by SilentRenegade (user info) at 2006-08-31 01:01:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
For you....welll....not the best poem ever....
Submitted by paint_it_black (user info) at 2006-08-31 00:31:57 (#)
Ranking: -2
FUCK ALL YOU ASSHOLES, i AM EMAILING BART TO GET YOU TO STOP.
THIS IS FROM PEOPLES HEARTS AND YOU MOCK IT.
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as for you....SHUT THE FUCK UP....get over your little depression bullshit....waaaaaa my parents didn't give me enough attention. MY parents didn't give ME enough attention. I don't crave it, I just eat little children. I mean I killed JonBenet for christ sakes
Submitted by ilikesteak (user info) at 2006-08-31 00:59:33 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by paint_it_black (user info) at 2006-08-31 00:31:57 (#)
Ranking: -2
FUCK ALL YOU ASSHOLES, i AM EMAILING BART TO GET YOU TO STOP.
THIS IS FROM PEOPLES HEARTS AND YOU MOCK IT.
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OOHHH NOES AN EMAIL!!!1!!one!!!elevendy-billion!!!!oneandahalf!!!!!!!!1
What's worse? It's an email from an EMO kid!!1!!one!!!elevendy!!cough*slore*cough!!!1
Submitted by Coleslaw_Murphy (user info) at 2006-08-31 00:53:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
my soul would cry
if i had one
at the pain of writing this
to procrastinate my geometry homework
Submitted by Coleslaw_Murphy (user info) at 2006-08-31 00:52:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Sometimes I eat
Glass shards
So that I can cut myself
On the insides
To match my wrists
I drink trace amounts
Of Drano
So I can piss blood
And puke bile
This is the life of me
Submitted by paint_it_black (user info) at 2006-08-31 00:31:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
FUCK ALL YOU ASSHOLES, i AM EMAILING BART TO GET YOU TO STOP.
THIS IS FROM PEOPLES HEARTS AND YOU MOCK IT.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-08-30 23:55:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Absinthe and a vial of your blood combine
To fill this cup of sorrow, mine
I drink and do not enjoy
The comformity cloying and stale in my mouth
Tradition, rite and candlelight
Guilty in the melancholy moonlight
Cloaked in crushed velvet and
A constant black sheen of despair
Draped in sadness
I weep for you
I weep for me
I weep and
Drink up
My hate
Cup.
Here in the bedroom down the hall from my parent's room.
I wonder if they'll let me take the Impala out this weekend.
Well, time to strangle myself while jerking it
Again.
Submitted by Axolotl (user info) at 2006-08-30 23:49:27 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
================ DARKNESS ESSENCE ================
The darkness
it is consuming
of my soul
they all laugh
the normal people
I cry black tears of blood
Nobody can feel
My sorrow
the Red Lake
is actually me
my soul is crushed
in an crushing abyss
cutting my arm
does not relieve my sarrow
getting torn apart by misery
and then i die
============== DEATH LIES ==============
The vampire lies in wait
of his painful death
he swing a might sword
but missed
he bring a dagger to his wrist
and feels the pain go away
sinking into sleep
which is known as death
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-08-30 23:42:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
But yes, good find and all that. Chap.
Submitted by Anansie (user info) at 2006-08-30 23:38:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
kinda neat
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-08-30 23:30:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I write my own gay poetry, thank you very much.
*cuts self*
Submitted by bart (user info) at 2006-08-30 23:18:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by awesome_face (user info) at 2006-08-30 23:02:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooope
Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2006-08-30 22:59:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
rapist
Submitted by JohnGalt (user info) at 2006-08-30 22:57:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I like that the choices for "gothic hair colors" are:
raven, black, midnight, inky black, ebon and silken
to go with skin options of:
pale, pale, pale, pale, pale and delicate, pale and tragic, fragile milky-white, translucent ivory, and white
Submitted by JohnGalt (user info) at 2006-08-30 22:54:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I need a hobby. I've been playing with this thing for like an hour.
Someone write an entry submission for UberMadness for me.