Whoever told you that? (515 hits)
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Rating: 0.1 on 13 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Action-Reaction (View user info) at 2006-09-13 12:37:15 EDT
Slipping through consciousness, I'm talking to you in my dreams. Reminiscing of that night I left you, laying on the floor in darkness, laying on the floor in agony. We are reparatory, I breathed you in with every inhale, and expelled even less of you on the exhale. Drunken dreamers cry out for more, and I ignore their pleas, drowning myself in sound. Hearing the voices calling out, screaming through the walls in the next room, "Where are you? Where are we? What are we doing here?"
Separation, separating the senses pulled through the crosshairs, enthralled by the slowly extinguishing sunlight, drifting into the moonlit night sky. Apathy is perfection, dreary but not yet withered. You're no angel, you're no god. You're nothing, nothing but a small glimmer of hope in the starry night sky. Only visible for a second, then quickly vanishing back into your parallel dimensions.
You're slurring your speech, its okay baby. Everything will be all right in the morning, with the new apparition of the sun. Everything will be okay in the light. Nothing hidden to cloud your mind. With day, the sun brings a new hope. New life, new time. Sleep now, little drunken dreamer, sleep forever. Someday the sun will come back, and soon you'll be fine.
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Submitted by jeveuxgagner (user info) at 2006-12-04 10:12:39 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by jeveuxgagner (user info) at 2006-12-04 10:11:31 (#)
Ranking: 0
Suck my balls, antioxidant.
I really don't care what you think of me or this piece of writing, i didn't write it for you, i wrote it for fun.
Basicly i have a much higher regard for my opinion on anything than i do yours, and i suspect you're a moron.
This is especially true reading this post.
Submitted by indoninja (user info) at 2006-09-15 07:58:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
http://www.ubersite.com/m/93075
Submitted by Antioxident (user info) at 2006-09-14 21:39:44 (#)
Ranking: -2
Would whoever owns this account go through and plus two all of my posts to even out what this dickhead did?
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Go back to pulsehead, fucking emo bonesmuggler.
Submitted by UnderOathMeal (user info) at 2006-09-14 21:42:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by livEvil (user info) at 2006-09-13 15:46:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2006-09-13 15:36:32 (#)
Ranking: 1
s'ok
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2006-09-13 15:36:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
s'ok
Submitted by extacy_red (user info) at 2006-09-13 14:46:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
not your best man...
Submitted by Amontillado (user info) at 2006-09-13 14:28:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
meh.
Submitted by UnderOathMeal (user info) at 2006-09-13 13:03:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I was on my way to spastically -2 this heap of steaming lamb feces until I came across this sentence:
"Sleep now, little drunken dreamer, sleep forever."
I felt a wave of pleasure upon reaching the period there and decided a +0 was more fitting.
But don't get used to it you fucking moron.
Submitted by ubetidid (user info) at 2006-09-13 12:58:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I like this.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-09-13 12:57:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Is that Mothra?
Submitted by SilentRenegade (user info) at 2006-09-13 12:52:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
little content....meh
Submitted by Antioxident (user info) at 2006-09-13 12:46:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Motherfucker
"We are reparatory"
is supposed to be
"We are respiratory"
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2006-09-13 12:44:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
I think I liked it. Did I like it?