Solitary Confinement (253 hits)
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Submitted by Stogie (View user info) at 2006-09-21 20:48:20 EDT
How strange, it smells of... confusion. Almost like a word on the tip of a tongue searching to escape. Racing thoughts that come from every direction. Mumbled inaudible words that slam against blank walls, never ceasing to stop and say sorry. Excruciating screeches for the sake of noise, in hope of annoying and agitating. Scenes are played out by hollow, ghostly actors. Memories of past events, of people known, of happy times and bad times, looping over and over again. All lit in shades of gray, like a black and white T.V. past it's prime, making even squinting to see any detail useless. Here there is no color, there is no light yet it is not black. It's as if a moon were present, reflecting the light from countless yesterdays. And trapped here, there is a presence, diseased and near death. His skin transparent and thin, tightly hugging the bones in his body, revealing the veins pulsing with his blood. Clumps of hair laying next to his naked body, coughing out the same rattle that old men and women moments from death moan from their deathbeds. He sits, no emotion on his face, watching and listening to everything happening around him. Patiently awaiting something. In solitary, madness is your only company.
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Submitted by The_Mighty_Badger (user info) at 2006-09-22 10:19:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Wasn't horrible.
Maltese has never once entertained me with his dogshit stories and general Über cocksucking, so you have one up on him already.
Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2006-09-22 04:53:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Don't listen to Maltese. Hitler named a cross after him.
I don't think your post was emo, but, rather, a vivid description of life
and feelings in confinement. A bit overdone, but not that bad.
Submitted by Stogie (user info) at 2006-09-22 03:15:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Thanks maltese, still learning what the people here enjoy. Will remember to keep out of the more emoish territory.
Submitted by Maltese (user info) at 2006-09-21 23:34:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I'd normally give this a -2, but I'll go easy on you because you're new.
Don't write emo stuff like this.
Remember -- the purpose of this website is to ENTERTAIN PEOPLE WHO ARE BORED AT WORK.
Keep that in mind when you write your posts.
Submitted by Chroniclysm (user info) at 2006-09-21 21:19:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Painful.