Heat (612 hits)
Category: NoneRating: 0.34 on 31 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by ruthless (View user info) at 2006-09-24 00:21:49 EDT
Heat slides between my toes
and curves sinuously around my ankles
whispers up my legs
and gently finds my hips
spreads through my belly
and I am lost
as I try to wrap my arms around
the intangible center of
something I cannot define
firelight dancing over my face
reminds me
beware the shadows
User Reviews
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2008-05-11 01:16:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
i love this.
Submitted by Wicked (user info) at 2006-09-25 11:05:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
nope
Submitted by Method (user info) at 2006-09-25 10:18:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
horrible
Submitted by livEvil (user info) at 2006-09-25 09:56:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
This felt like a bunch of random words that were forced to coincide without a purpose.
Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2006-09-25 09:41:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
wank
Submitted by Merlina (user info) at 2006-09-25 09:38:33 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I like
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2006-09-24 15:10:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by Amontillado (user info) at 2006-09-24 13:23:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
I like fire.
Submitted by ubetidid (user info) at 2006-09-24 07:41:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2006-09-24 01:48:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Beer slides between my lips
and curves covertly toward my belly
dribbles slowly through my guts
and gently finds my liver
spreads through my belly
and I am hammered
as I try to wrap my fingers around
the small center of
something I cannot find
enebriation dancing over my face
reminds me
too much booze makes a soft dick :(
Submitted by TigerLilly (user info) at 2006-09-24 01:32:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
What are you people, on Dope? - Mr Hand
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-09-24 01:21:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Fine...who wants their ankles or arches painted white?
(come on, people, follow along)
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2006-09-24 01:21:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by TigerLilly (user info) at 2006-09-24 01:19:57 (#)
Ranking: 1
Hummm...???
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psst O-tron you got someone's attention!
Submitted by TigerLilly (user info) at 2006-09-24 01:19:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Hummm...???
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2006-09-24 01:19:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-09-24 01:13:57 (#)
Ranking: 1
Who wants their toes painted white?
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*crickets chirp*
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-09-24 01:13:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Who wants their toes painted white?
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2006-09-24 01:00:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-09-24 00:54:15 (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-09-24 00:35:36 (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2006-09-24 00:30:37 (#)
Ranking: 2
No, you weirdo..I meant between your toes.
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Oh, there too..definitely.
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FOOTJOBS FOR ALL
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sweeeeeeeeet!
And it's not even my birthday yet!
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-09-24 00:54:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-09-24 00:35:36 (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2006-09-24 00:30:37 (#)
Ranking: 2
No, you weirdo..I meant between your toes.
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Oh, there too..definitely.
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FOOTJOBS FOR ALL
Submitted by pen_name (user info) at 2006-09-24 00:42:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
i like tyhe more explicit coffee house poetry
My vagina burns with your member,
seizing like that kid from geometry
it swells and cries for more penetration
deeper
harder
fill me with your veiny prince
ah, i ejaculated.
cum, cum; yum, yum
go, go I am done
Rachael ray is on.
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2006-09-24 00:42:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
*whispers*
I think that COMountain dude is on druuugggs.
Submitted by COMountain (user info) at 2006-09-24 00:39:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
You gotsta stop letting your dog eat your box... just 'cause it's sweaty (and therefore salty) doesn't mean your dog's attracted to you.
It just means dogs like salt.
TALK MORE ABOUT THE PEARL NECKLACE...
...that your dog licked off.
CALL ME
Submitted by Maltese (user info) at 2006-09-24 00:35:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
WatEVAR.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-09-24 00:35:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2006-09-24 00:30:37 (#)
Ranking: 2
No, you weirdo..I meant between your toes.
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Oh, there too..definitely.
Submitted by COMountain (user info) at 2006-09-24 00:34:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
You forgot the pearl necklace!
After the heat swept through your body, I gave you one a minute and a half later.
TALK MORE ABOUT THE PEARL NECKALCE. IT WAS GLORIOUS.
Submitted by CaptainObvious (user info) at 2006-09-24 00:32:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
This'll never make Most Heated.
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaandlettheheatbegin!
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2006-09-24 00:30:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No, you weirdo..I meant between your toes.
Submitted by pen_name (user info) at 2006-09-24 00:30:33 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
My heart is an ocean
it churns in my sorrows
it quakes in my joy
it smells of agonizing sewage
Don't toss me a life preserver
my penis has drowned.
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2006-09-24 00:30:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Sacrilicious: did it make you tingle...down there?
Me too.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-09-24 00:28:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This is so dirty.
I love it.
Submitted by pen_name (user info) at 2006-09-24 00:27:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
you sully the good name of senior metaphor.
Submitted by Cracked_out_cali (user info) at 2006-09-24 00:23:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
The Terminator getting dipped into that vat of lava?